Recent content by i64ever

J-Hello? E-<excitedly>Julia? It’s me, Erica. I still can’t believe I ran into you today! It's been almost a year! J-Yeah...it was weird seeing you without your collar. E-Still weird for me too. My seven years with Max just ended a few months ago. Walking around a free woman is...different...

And now for something a bit different. A phone call between a 23 year old recent college graduate and her overprotective mother. J – Hi Mom, It’s me. M- Julia! I’m so glad to hear from you! It's been weeks! J-I know its been a while M- Is everything OK? J – No, not really. That’s why I’m...

Very good

No, Beth is not killed. Her soul is devoured by the Succubus through sex. Its what demons do. In the end, she is left without free will, a play thing for Jenna. Except for that one corner of her mind that remembers the before times, of course...

Eve wasn’t long out of high school. She had been hired by the company because she was a very fast typist, a skill still valued in those days, and not for any business experience, talents or indeed great intellect she may have possessed. A slender, mousy girl, even her appearance hadn’t been...

Beth was not troubled that the new woman in accounting, Jenna, had every man in the office eating out of her hand. Not only was she beautiful, the redhead could have passed as a model she was very touchy feely, always making contact them, a hand on the shoulder, quick touch on the arm, etc...

Tremendous!

There are several reasons why you aren't getting a response. One, as silvershadow says, you aren't discussing money at all beyond calling it a commission, which is a little vague. An experienced writer probably has a pretty good idea what 5,000 or so words written by them is worth and they...

OK, this is really weird. This story is more than 15 years old. Somehow all the original comments disappeared, so it must have looked new. There was a part 2. I'll see if I can find it.

Just because someone asked, here is the old part two. Like part one, its more than 15 years old. Still, glad to see a few more people enjoying it.

I'd like to thank Milagros and Smellking for such nice words. Honestly, when you post all your stuff here for free, the only rewards you get are the replies.

"I don’t understand why we need him Mistress,” Angela said with a cute, pouty face, “Let me please you, like I did last night! I can make you forget all about stupid men.” She reached out for the voluptuous redhead, but Evelyn caught her hand. “Now, now my pet,” she said in a calm but...

Jacob felt self-conscious sitting at the table. This wasn’t the kind of place he would normally visit, a working class bar in downtown Boston. He was certain half the guys in there were giving him evil glances because of the New York Knicks t-shirt he had on. He wouldn’t have worn it here...

Very nice.

I wouldn't agree with that. You can write a synopsis of any literary work. From that synopsis, someone might well decide that the story being told is not one they are interested in and skip it. That's fine. But for them to think that by reading the synopsis they got the full impact of the...