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BOUNCE OF ACES! *It's HERE! 2/14/08

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BOUNCE OF ACES
& the Mystery of Duchess Valentine

Detective noir meets desperate laughter in their sexiest adventure yet, as the Chix bounce into a world of gritty action, dangerous suspects, and high stakes tickle torture!


A wicked criminal mastermind with naughty intentions has abducted your favorite ticklish trio and thrown them head-first into a fiendish game of feathery interrogations and screaming laughter. Now Janey Aces – Private Eye, has to save her friends, the world, and her own ticklish tail from the red-headed tickle villain in this shadowy city, where every dark alleyway holds a secret.

Will Hailey, Andi, and Jane be able to find all the clues?

Can they stay one step ahead of their suspects?

Will they solve the mystery of the Duchess Valentine in time?

Or has this game been fixed from the start?


The Chix need your help – so throw on your trench-coat, grab your magnifying glass and join the Bouncy Beauties for the ultimate tickling whodunit adventure!

The game is afoot!

10 Professional full-color illustrations
A 47,000+ word detective noir tickling e-novel
Revenge tickles, and tickling interrogations!
Foot licking, bare foot, AND nylon foot tickling
Erotic FULL body tickles
Heavy bondage and restraints.
Written, drawn, and inked by The Bandito
Amazing colors by The White Lotus


Product & Ordering Information
http://www.mtjpub.com/ecomics/BounceChix.html
 
if you click to buy this, you have the checkout recognize it as Bounce of the Dragon. I want to buy it, but alas, can not because of that. 🙁
 
if you click to buy this, you have the checkout recognize it as Bounce of the Dragon. I want to buy it, but alas, can not because of that. 🙁

The issue has been fixed, my friend.

Sorry about the technical snafoo 😛

Please let me know what you think of it - once you've had a chance to go through it.

^^;

B
 
My cheque will be in the mail soon my friend, very soon. :veryhappy
 
Rage: Thanks so much for your support, good buddy. I truly hope you like it! Please let me know once you've had a chance to work through it. ^^

TKForce: Thanks my friend. I hope Cyberina helped split the bill with ya... seeing as she'll probably read it too and drool over Andi 😛 lol. Please let me know what you think of it.

Tomato Dragon: Awwwww.... thanks buddy. I really appreciate that. It's not everyday that I get a compliment from one of the most legendary artists in our community. Thanks very much, amigo. And hey - I'm lookin' forward to the new Tats coming out soon.

Many thanks to everyone!

Lotus and I worked so hard on this issue - I truly hope it lives up to everyone's expectations. 1000 thank you's for those that order the comic, and my only request, is please let us know what you thought of it.

The feedback means a lot to us.

And I have some more concept, sample work on the way.

~The Deet
 
TKForce: Thanks my friend. I hope Cyberina helped split the bill with ya... seeing as she'll probably read it too and drool over Andi 😛 lol. Please let me know what you think of it.

lol Cyberina got Penny to foot her half of the bill.
Just one of the perks of working for a,
megalomaniacal mad scientist with infinite resources. 😀

We'll both let you know what we thought when we can.
Oh, and so will Penny I bet. 🙂
 
The issue has been fixed, my friend.

Sorry about the technical snafoo 😛

Please let me know what you think of it - once you've had a chance to go through it.

^^;

B

What I think? Amazing work my man. One of the most erotic, best drawn pieces around, and the pictures are just the companion piece. You put together an amazing package with the PDF and all that, and made something of an experience than a novella or a comic.

Kudos for doing something fresh and exciting with tickling. It was really a treat.
 
I felt so engrossed in the story. Its fantastic to see your writing skills in addition to your art skills. They compliment each other so well. Hailey's scene was scorching and Janey's stocking scene was smokin hot. Superb work my friend. You raise the bar every time you come out with something.
 
TKForce: Lmao. I will be looking forward to EVERYONE'S review. I think Cyberina will especially like one of the scenes 😉

meangry: Thanks so much my friend. I am so glad that you ended up liking BOA. Lotus and I worked really hard with Morandilas to create something new. And we wanted it to be more than an illustrated story. we wanted the whole to be greater than the sum of the parts. Thanks so very much for the great feedback, especially on the story. You rock.

amkes: Thank you very much for the support, my friend. I can't wait to hear your thoughts on it

Rage: Thank you so much my friend. I KNEW you would love Hailey's scene! lol. I had you in mind when I wrote parts of it. I am so glad that you enjoyed the story as well... I wanted to create ssomething thaat allowed for more context, anticipation, and story than a comic format truly allows. I also wanted the reader to be able to get to know the Bounce Chix better... I feel like that makes the action so much hotter! Thanks again amigo. I really appreciate all of your loyal support. You make me want to work even harder to make the next comic better.

Many thanks to everyone yet again.

If you're thinking of picking up the issue and have some questions - please feel free to ask anything (or PM me and I'll respond quickly). I want to be sure people kow exactly what they're getting.

And if you havve read through Bounce of Aces. PLEASE PLEEEEEEEZE post up somme comments. The feedback means a lot to us.

Thanks everyone, for making the Bounce Chix such a fun project to work on.

~Deeto
 
TKForce: rofl - I like it. XD

Thanks for all the support, everyone -

I thought I'd post a sample of the writing from BOA. This is part of Hailey's tickle scene with Sexy Voice. I'll post it in the story section too, but I just wanted everyone to get a chance to read it if they wanted to.

If you have already picked up BOA - thank you very much!!! And please let us know what you thought of it.

If you haven't yet - here is another taste of what to expect:

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Chapter 3

I blink my blue eyes open and try to shake my head a bit to clear it. But I can barely move, much less shake. I’m sitting in one of the comfortable heart shaped chairs that used to be around the table. My wrists are tied tight to the padded arms. So are my elbows. I’ve got a few yards of rope around my tummy, tethering me to the body of the sturdy chair as well. And it looks like my shoes have abandoned me in my time of need.

My nylon-clad legs are bound together at the knee, calves, and ankles, and resting comfortably on a matching foot-stool. Apparently someone wants me to stay put, and judging by the cloth gag over my mouth, they aren’t interested in my opinion on the subject. Tastes like Egyptian cotton. Blech.

I fight back that sense of panic and try to keep my cool. Figure it out, I keep thinking. Solve it. I glance around the room as much as my bondage will allow. The sun has set, leaving the penthouse bathed in darkness. The only light seems to be candlelight - a lot of candlelight. They’re all clustered around the bed like some kinda firefly orgy, casting undulating shadows on the high ceiling. That’s when I spot Hailey.

She’s sitting on the south side of the bed. There’s no baseboard, so her butt’s simply planted on the edge of the mattress, on top of those fine red satin sheets. Her legs are out straight, with her feet about three feet apart. Each of her ankles are secured tight in some kind on metallic cuff, which are humming softly and hovering parallel to the top of the bed. Fortunately for Hailey, the inside of the ankle-cuffs seem to have a soft fur lining. Which means she’s not going anywhere, but at least she’s not being hurt. If they hurt her, so help me I’ll do something awful to ‘em.

Figure it out, Janey. It’s all in the details.

Hailey’s arms are stretched up tight over her head, again by some fur-lined cuffs that are roped up to the ceiling. Looks like whoever set this up is definitely playing a game with us. They changed her clothes. That red masterpiece of a dress is gone, and all they’ve left her with is some skimpy pink lingerie. Her top is a sheer nylon corset design, with thin straps that covers her chest down to mid-torso. There’s a three-inch gap in the front, with a crisscross tie that ends in a small bow between her beautiful breasts. The fabric is so sheer I can faintly see the outline of her nipples even in the dim candlelight. All she’s wearing on the bottom is a tiny red thong with a heart design on the front. She looks even more adorable now than she did wearin’ that dress.

Somehow she’s still sound asleep. They either gassed her again, or more likely that daiquiri had a little extra ingredient in addition to the knockout gas. Bastards. Ooh, I’m lookin’ forward to some payback already. But first I gotta get outta here. I go back to lookin’ for clues, but I find my eyes drifting back to Hailey.

Her long, wavy, brunette hair is still framing her face in that classic way. She’s got a silky red scarf delicately tied as a blindfold. She always sleeps better with a blindfold on anyway. She’s makin’ that sweet half-snore sound she makes sometimes late at night. The candlelight is playfully dancing over her perfect, half-naked body, as if the candles themselves want to see more. Wow, what a figure. I catch myself daydreamin’ about what I’d be doing if I wasn’t tied to this damn chair. Catch myself thinking about that fantastic body of hers. And then I smell the sweet smell of spring roses, and feel warm breath caress my ear lobe.

“Mmmmm…” a husky voice coos. “I was just thinking the same thing. Are you ready to have some fun, my tough little tiger?”

I scream a muffled “EEK!” into my gag. My heart does a coupla back-flips in my chest, partly because she scared the hell out of me, and partly because that is the sexiest voice I have ever heard.

Her confident tone sounds polite, and yet very naughty. And her delightful British accent gives my goose bumps all over my body. She slowly walks from behind the chair and heads over toward Hailey. Slipping between her spread legs so she’s nose to nose with my sleeping roomie, she softly reaches up and pets Hailey’s head. Hailey makes a happy sighing sound in response. She loves it when Andi or I pet her head while she’s sleeping. How the hell would this dame know that? Alright, now I’m officially-full-on-big-time worried. What kind of crazy setup is this?

Two more shadowed figures float out of the darkness into the glow of the candlelight. They each kneel before one of Hailey’s captive feet. Looks like they’re each getting out a small silver canister and dipping their fingers inside. The light shimmers off their glistening fingers as they each reach up and start softly massaging Hailey’s helpless feet with the utmost care. I catch a whiff of the smell: shae butter. Lavender shae butter. And I see one of the shadowy ticklers slip Hailey’s magical alien toe ring off her right foot and carefully set it aside.

I try shouting into my expensive gag, even thrashing around a bit, but I figure out real quick that its not doing me a damn bit of good. The three shadowy strangers continue their sweet caresses, and Hailey starts to come to with a sleepy smile on her face.

“Why, hello there, my little Ace of Diamonds,” purrs Sexy Voice.

“Wha…? Hey, I can’t see!” Hailey awakens with a start, panic on the tip of her tongue.

“Shhhhhh… it’s all right, Hailey. No one is going to hurt you, I promise,” reassures Sexy Voice. But I’m not so sure. It doesn’t take Sherlock friggin’ Holmes to figure out that these broads are up to no good. The two other shadows have momentarily paused their foot massaging, but are still kneeling there in menacing silence. Amazingly though, the reassurance seems to calm Hailey down quite a bit. Maybe it’s the sound of that voice.

“But... who are you? And why can’t I see?” comes the logical query from my helpless friend. “And who’s touching my feet?”

“Calm down, Angel, and I’ll explain everything. You see, Hailey, I’ve been watching you and your beautiful Bounce Chix friends for several months now. I guess you could say I’ve developed quite the crush on the three of you. I decided I just had to meet you, and Bounce you over to my place for a little fun together. Now that you’re here, I thought you might like to play a little game with me. My assistants and I are going to tease you just a little. If you can stay nice and quiet then maybe you’ll win the game, and you and your Chix can go home. But if you make too much noise, then I will win the game, and that means I get to be wicked and tease you all over. Are you ready, pet?” Sexy Voice asks with pure mischief in her tone.

“LEMME GO! Where’s JANEY?!?” Hailey demands while I renew my losing struggle with my rope enemies, just hearing the worry in her frightened voice.

“You get a freebie on that one, love,” the shadowy figure sweetly warns. “But another outburst like that, and I’ll get to be wicked right away. Now let’s see if you can keep those lovely lips together, or do you want me to tickle?”

“Oh no!” Hailey chirps, and firmly shuts her mouth.

Did she just say what I think she just said?

I watch in erotic awe as Sexy Voice pulls out a long, purple feather, and touches the tip lightly to Hailey’s nose. Her two assistants go back to gently massaging Hailey’s perfectly pedicured toes, and poor Hailey fights the urge to giggle as Sexy Voice begins to lightly dust her nose.

“See? Doesn’t that feel good on your feet, angel? I knew you’d like some attention to your toes.”

Hailey gasps a bit as the assistants take the foot massage up a notch, kneading the bottoms of her size nine feet with their buttery fingers. Sexy Voice moves the feather over the curve of Hailey’s full lips, as she fights desperately to keep them closed.

“Pfffffffft,” Hailey let’s slip as the tip of that feather slides slowly down the side of her neck. The two assistant dames must have sensational technique as they start working the balls of her feet, even spreading her toes and working that soft cream into every nook and curve until Hailey’s feet are glistening in the candlelight.

She would usually be going through the roof. Hailey has the most sensitive feet of anyone I’ve ever met. Let’s just say that more than a few pedicurists in our town have had their noses broken. These broads must know exactly how not to tickle. Which, if ya think about it, is probably a very bad sign of what’s to come.

“Ooo hee hee,” escapes from Hailey’s lips in between gasps of delight from the erotic massage. The feather moves close to Hailey’s cleavage. She bites down on her bottom lip and I can almost hear her praying. This tickler knows exactly what she’s doin’, that’s for sure. And she’s holding all the cards.

“Did you say something, pet? Because I’m just positively dying to tickle this marvellous body of yours. I might tickle you here,” Sexy Voice says playfully, letting the tip of her feather graze the tan skin of Hailey’s toned, naked tummy.

“Eeeeheee heee heee,” Hailey blurts out.

“Or I might tickle down here.” And the feather teases the curve of Hailey’s thigh.

“NEEE heee heeee heeeeeeeee!” she squeaks out, curling her toes against the relentless sensual embrace of the tickler’s assistants.

“And if I get completely naughty… I must admit that I’ll just have to tickle you here.” And this time the feather gently rubs against the sheer top, just above her left nipple. Uh-oh… even through the top, that did the trick.

“EEEEEEE HAAA HEEEEEEEEEEE NAHAT THERE!” bursts out of Hailey’s beautiful lips as she tries in vain to wiggle away.

“Oh my, that was a lot of noise, angel. I think that means that I win round one. And do you know what that means?” Sexy Voice teases in utter delight. “Time for some really ticklish tickles, Hailey.”

“NEEEEEEEEEAAAAA HAAAAA HAAAAAAA HEEEEEEEEEEE!” she squeals as the feather now strokes expertly up and down her right side. At the same time, the assistants have also changed to a more tickly technique and are lightly dancing their nails over Hailey’s buttery heels and slowly up her soles. I have long since stopped struggling. I’m just sittin’ here, mesmerised in complete shock. Despite myself I feel the little fire of arousal growing in my tummy, and somewhere in the darker parts of my subconscious mind I start hoping that Hailey loses this game.

“Somebody likes feathery tickles,” Sexy Voice taunts as she slides and twirls the feather across Hailey’s body with delightful results.

“EEEEEEEE HAAAAAA HEEEEEEEEEEEEE HEEEEEEEEEEE!” Hailey giggles while the feather explores her ticklish belly and dips devilishly into her shallow belly button.

“MEEEEEEEE HEEEEEEEEEEEEEE STAAAAAAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP!” she pleads as they explore the sensitive curves of her toes.

“Look at all these lovely tickle spots, Hailey. You really are a treat, aren’t you, love?” Sexy Voice teases, and takes her time tracing her feather from Hailey’s raised elbows, down her arms and into the ultra-sensitive hollows of her naked underarms.

“OOOOOOOooooooo EEEEEEEHAAAAA HEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!” is the resounding reply.

They tease her and they tickle her, while she roars with laughter and wiggles wildly. Skilled fingers dance along her tender soles, holding back her toes so they can tickle every supple wrinkle of her pampered feet. The feather slides under her top, across her ribs, and all over her naked sides, pulling endless giggles from their helpless captive. Her toes are spread and tickled in-between; feathers caress the curve of her breasts into her cleavage.

They tickle her from top to bottom in the most teasing and taunting way. Hailey howls with laughter, and when she has enough breath she pleads for mercy. It’s probably only been about thirty minutes or so, but it seems like hours. Hailey’s giggles have turned into full-fledged belly laughter, and I can tell from the way she’s movin’ that I’m not the only one that’s gettin’ turned on.

“I just want to tickle this top right off of you, love,” Sexy Voice finally says, briefly slowing down her feathery onslaught. “Tell you what, sweetie… If you just forfeit, and let me take off this skimpy top, then I’d be able to just tickle you bonkers. It’ll be oh-so much fun. Otherwise, its time for round three, and that means I’ll have to positively torture you with tickles until you give up.”

“NOOO HOOOOOO HEEEEEEE STAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAAP!!” Hailey begs. Her nipples strain against the fabric of her skimpy top as the tickles start to get her more and more aroused.

“Last chance, buttercup,” warns Sexy Voice.

“YEEEEEEEE AHHAAAAAAAAAA HAAA HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! DOOOOOO HOOOOON’T!” is about all Hailey can muster. The ticklers at her feet giggle softly to each other as they methodically tantalize Hailey’s captive tootsies.

“Then I suppose it’s torture tickles for you, angel,” she says with a grin. I see a flash of her perfect white smile in the flickering light. “Let’s get rid of this silly feather and see how much I can tickle you with my fingers.”

She moves as bit closer between Hailey’s spread thighs, and with both hands she softly works her fingers against Hailey’s soft sides.

“EEEEEYAAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAA!” Hailey screams. After only seconds Sexy Voice has found a perfect rhythm and pressure, slowly dancing her nails up Hailey’s naked flanks from her hips to the bottom of her skimpy top.

“GAAAAAA HAAAA HAAAAAAD OOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOO STAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAAAP!!” she begs, and wiggles her toned butt all over the bed trying to escape those wicked caresses.

“Oh shush. You did ask for this, after all. You wanted to laugh at the top of your pretty lungs. And I’ll bet we can make you laugh even louder,” Sexy Voice promises and with the slightest adjustment in her affectionate fingers Hailey’s desperate howls of laughter do indeed hit a higher pitch.

“IIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEYAAAAAAAAA HAAAAA HA HAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAA NOAAA MOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOORE!!” is her only plea.

Even the candlelight seems to be burning brighter as Hailey bucks wildly in her furry bonds, but can not escape the relentless teasing. I pick up some details in the dancing light. The silhouettes come into focus, but only a bit. They’re each wearin’ a pink gem of some kind, like an ornamental hairpin. The pink flashes occasionally in the candlelight. All three of ‘em have fantastic bodies. They aren’t wearing much because the outlines of their bodies leave little to the imagination. Especially Sexy Voice. I can see her nipples thrusting forward erotically with each catlike adjustment of her body.

The broads at Hailey’s feet are now furiously dancing all ten fingers up and down her soles in unrestrained glee. And Hailey has hit that husky howl of laughter that I’ve only heard from her once or twice. These scantily clad shadows are givin’ her the tickling of her life. And with each tickle, and each guffaw I feel my own nips pressing harder and harder against my black lacy bra, threatening to free themselves any minute.

“MEEEEEEEEEEE AAAAA AAAAAHAAAAA HAAAAA HAAAAA HAAAAA!!” Hailey squeals over and over.

“That’s it, angel. Let us just tickle it out of you,” Sexy Voice teases while she softly kneads Hailey’s ribs – like ticklish Play-Doh in her hands.

“YAAAA HAAAAA HEEEEEEEEEE HAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAA!!”

The toe ticklers continue to softly giggle as they spend time tickling each and every shiny toe. With each fiendish touch I can sense Hailey is getting more and more aroused. You can practically see the heat comin’ off her body.

“Now, my love, it’s time to see if you can resist my tickly fingers. Because if you laugh too much now, Hailey, I’m afraid you will lose our little tickle game. And you know what THAT means.” And she lifts up her hands and starts wiggling her sexy nails only an inch away from the tender hollows of Hailey’s underarms.

“AAAAAAAAAAA NAAAAAAT THAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!! PUH LEEEEEE HEEEEEEEEEEE ZEEEEEEEE!!” shrieks Hailey, slumping in her bonds. Those wicked fingers haven’t even made contact yet. But she can feel them ticking the air around her, and she knows what’s coming next.

The growing little fire in my tummy rages like a tinderbox and my heart is thumping in my chest. I can’t even blink. As the fingers touch down on her hypersensitive pits Hailey erupts in the loudest, hardest, huskiest laughter I have ever heard.

“BWAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAA HAAAAA HAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!” the sweet hottie bellows with tears glistening on her cheeks.

“I know, angel. I almost feel bad about this. Almost,” she coos as the rhythmic torture continues. The ticklers at her feet launch an all out barrage of devilish tickles up the blade of her foot, between the toes, all over the ball, down her wrinkled sole, and back up her glistening heel.

“AAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAAA PLAAAAAAA HEEEEEEEEE ZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!” as all ten of those fingers stroke her under arms again and again.

“Oh god, Hailey. You are so dreadfully ticklish here,” Sexy Voice chuckles.

“GAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAA!!!” Hailey begs, occasionally hitting operatic notes as she’s played like a violin.

“Just a little louder, pretty angel.” Each touch electrifies Hailey to new heights. The fine layer of sweat shimmering over every inch of her toned body bounces fire-coloured reflections all over the room. She’s rockin’ her hips back and forth. It’s a miracle that top is staying on her body, with all the wiggling she’s doing.

“PAAAAA AAAAAAA HAAAAAA HAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAA HAAAAAAA HAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAEEEEEEEE!!!!” is her desperate plea. She’s completely hoarse from all the laughing, and keeps erupting into and out of silent belly laughter. Just when I think she’s gonna burst into flame, or pass out, Sexy Voice finally slows down her tickles to an occasional tease of her index finger.

The dames at her feet go back to a light massage.

“OOOOooooooeeeeee HEEEEEEEE Heeeeeeeee HEEEEEEEE!” she sweetly squeaks.

Hailey continues to bubble with laughter and tremble with every touch. Sexy Voice picks up a luxurious towel from the bed and pads down Hailey’s glistening body. Hailey giggles uncontrollably at the fluffy attention. She gasps in between happy giggles and the occasional moan. Her nipples are the hardest I have ever seen them. And I’m about one step away from orgasm myself.

Sexy Voice raises a crystal champagne glass filled with water to Hailey’s lips, and she thirstily sips it down. If I weren’t tied down I’d be on the edge of my seat. Is it over? Or is there more?

She is still giggling from the light touches when Sexy Voice playfully taps the bow holding Hailey’s top together. She leans in and starts seductively kissing Hailey’s ear lobe. Hailey moans a bit and returns with kisses to her ticklers neck. It’s not over. It’s just getting interesting.

“I do believe I have won our little game, Hailey,” Sexy Voice whispers, loud enough for me to hear. “And I have to tell you, I am soooo tremendously excited about this next part. I have been dying to tickle you naked for ages.”

“Oho gahad…” Hailey gasps.

“But I can wait a bit longer, if you need some more… encouragement, love,” she teases, and touches Hailey’s sides so lightly, and the foot ticklers lightly begin to tickle again.

“Ohh OOOOO Nooooo HO!” Hailey yelps, and shakes her head from side to side.

“So you can either have turn-on tickles, or we can do more torture tickles. Which would my Hailey like?” she emphasises with a devilish light stroke in each under arm, and the light touches on her feet begin to get Hailey giggling again.

“Dohon’t make mee HEEEEE!” Hailey begs her seductive captor.

“Either way, I’m going to tickle it out of, Hailey,” Sexy Voice teases and strokes a few more devilish touches under Hailey’s bound arms.

“Pleee heeeeeeeze... TA HAAAAA Turn ohon TI HI CKLES!” Hailey agrees, as a bright blush covers her cheeks.

“Mmmmmmmmmm, wonderful news,” Sexy Voice beams as she unties the ribbon on the front of Hailey’s corset, and pulls it out......

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Sorry to cutt it off here. It was just getting to the GOOD part... but I don't want to spoil it for ya. The rest can be found here: http://www.mtjpub.com/ecomics/BounceChix.html

Please let me know what you think.

~The Deeto.
 
I've read through the entire piece and I'd like to say it's one of the best pieces ever to come from MTJ. Erotic, well written and some excellent art to accompany it. Bounce of Aces is great for anyone who has a tickling fetish and is vertainly worth the money. One scene I particualary liked was when two employees of Valentine decide to have some fun... Chix style. All in all, great for everyone, Bandito has really outdone himself with this.
 
I've read through the entire piece and I'd like to say it's one of the best pieces ever to come from MTJ. Erotic, well written and some excellent art to accompany it. Bounce of Aces is great for anyone who has a tickling fetish and is vertainly worth the money. One scene I particualary liked was when two employees of Valentine decide to have some fun... Chix style. All in all, great for everyone, Bandito has really outdone himself with this.

Thanks my good friend.

You have always been such a great supporter of the Chix... and I really really appreciate all of your encouragement.

And it's awesome to hear that you liked the scenes with Choko and Roseta... I love those gals. They were so much fun to write. And I have to admit, their illustrations were among the most challenging (especially Choko's), but I really like the way they came out.

I am giving SERIOUS thought to having them appear again in another BC issue, or just another random illustration or two ;P

Thanks again my friend.

It means a lot.

B
 
Wonderful story and awsome art i need more must read the story again and again great job The Bandito and White Lotus
 
Bandito,

I apologize for not commenting sooner, but things have been a bit trying lately, and I've just now finished absorbing this phenomenal work.

I really don't know what to say. I've commented so much on your works of the past that I don't want to simply repeat the same adjectives over and over, so I'll try my best to break it down.

This is the best thing you've ever done. Fuck, this is in the Top Ten of the best things ever done in the tickling genre, period. What I can't get over is the quantuum leap you've taken with this work. If I didn't know better and instantly recognize the style, I'd wonder if this was even your work. I've always liked your unique style, but you've gone WAY beyond the "cartoony" here, and I don't mean "cartoony" in a bad way in the first place. The bodies have softened, and I don't even know where to begin with the light-year leap in the creation of the wonderful faces that accompany this publication. The way you've drawn the female form in the past has been unique and attractive, but you've crossed into a realm of Toon Meets Reality that's simply amazing. And the faces....WOW! I mean it....fucking WOW. The subtleties of some of these expressions are heart-aching in some spots. For instance, the one image with the two girls sharing an intimate moment made me want to jump in and join them. I could almost feel the heat, the passion and the constrained desire.

You've done something here that few artists have ever done. You've asked for input from your fans and fellow artists...and actually listened. So many want to know how to improve, but then release image after image of the same stuff. Not knocking anyone, as the "same stuff" by most of MTJ's artists is wonderful in and of itself. But, you can see the...I don't want to say improvement, but evolution of your work here. If this is anything like where you're going to be headed, I honestly feel you're going to wind up ranked with the greatest artists our genre has seen.

White Lotus has impressed me here as well. The softness of the colors, the right balance...all of it works. You could have drawn this perfectly, and the wrong kind of coloring could still ruin it. She's gone above and beyond on this one. This is far more three-dimensional than anything you've done, and WL is heavily responsible for that. You two are like opposite sides of the same coin.

The story itself is ingenious. While the artist in me pretty much wanted to give up after seeing this...the writer in me was impressed beyond words. You went far beyond the industry standard and wrote something that, regardless of genre, is actually interesting and presented in a way that grabs you and doesn't let go.

People, if you need any more incentive to pry a few bucks loose and spend it on something to pique your fetish...you'd be flat-out stupid to let this one pass by. You will regret it, trust me.

Bandito and White Lotus, congrats on creating the most unique publication celebrating our fetish that I've seen come down the pike in a very long time.
 
Omg

I just finished BOA and it was amazing. And well the ending is my fav and I wish I could tickle my favorite bounce chick. (you know who that is and damn it is hard not to give anything away when trying to tell you my favorite part) man I wish I could tickle her though bounce right in and tickle her :blush:
great as alway Bandito
 
killalot: thanks so much my friend! I really appreciate the feedback and the kind words. You rock.

Dave: Holy shit. How do I possibly reply to that comment??? Um..... *thinks really hard* well... here it goes. Thanks profoundly for the feedback my friend. You know how much I admire your work, and a comment like this from you just blows me away. I also know you really mean it, and that makes it even more important. So thanks very very much.

As far as the evolution of our style - Lotus and I really wanted to do something more illustrative, because we felt it would fit with our styles better and allow us to create pics with a more realistic look to them. As you said - less cartoony, and a bit more true to life. It also allowed Lotus more freedom to color/digitally paint more detail, texture and light play - which made her much happier working on the issue.

As far as the facial expression go... I have always wanted to imply and express that more is happening in these bounce chix comics then simply tickling. It is eroticism, sex, love, pleasure, AND lotsa lotsa tickling ^^... so I wanted to try some expressions that tried to capture that. Especially in the Valentine and Janey pic, and th Rosetta pic, which, surprisingly turned out to be one of my very faves of the issue.

And thanks tremendously for the feedback about the story itself. I truly appreciate it. It was a labor of love (I really dig the older detective stories), and I hope to do a lot more writing in future issues.

Again, thanks so much my friend - you make me want to hurry up and start working on BC4!!!

And by the way - I kinda threw in that gag scene with Janey with you in mind. I hope you liked it.

amkes: Thanks my friend. I really appreciate tht feedback. Yeah - I thought you might like that final scene. And I am not sure Janey could handle you tickling her in that situation... I think ANOTHER tickler might just be enough to drive her completely bonkers. Thanks again very much my friend.

And thanks again to everyone that picked up Bounce of Aces so far. Lotus and I both truly appreciate it. This is a great community, and we truly appreciate all of the kindness, feedback, and support.

Best,

Bandito
 
Bandito & White Lotus,

I just wanted to congratulate you both publicly for once again raising the bar and taking the Chix to an all new level. Bounce of Aces is superb in every way. Design, style, illustration, color work, and story. It’s gorgeous to look at and the story moves like a runaway train. Not only do I have a great artistic team but I gained a top notch author as well.

Perhaps we can temp Lotus to give writing a try? I would love to see what she could come up with. Perchance a short story to test the waters? I bet your fans would love it.

Thanks for the hard work!

Now stop foolin’ about and get back to it!

Morandilas
MTJ Publishing
 
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Sorry I haven't posted sooner...

But this is awesome! The art and the writing are perfect!
 
Morandilas: I wrote a real response on TT, but just wanted to take another quick opportunity to thank you again for everything you have done for Lotus and I. The Bounce Chix would not be what they are today without your help.

Bohemianne: Thanks so much my friend. I really appreciate that.

duannnewalton: WOW - thanks buddy. That is a really really cool thing to say. I appreciate it very much. Just... thanks. ^^

Many thanks again to everyone for making Bounce of Aces such a smashing success.

It makes us want to get workin' even harder on BC4. I'll post a thread soon to try and get some input from y'all about the next issue.

Please know how much your input is appreciated.

Best,

B
 
I give 'BOA' ten thumbs up.

I finally finished reading 'BOA' and thought I would give my review of it.

I have to start by saying, 'BOA' was such a hot E-novel my computer screen nearly burst into
flames a few times while I was reading it. I needed to take a break every few chapter
because I was over heating (Me not my computer 😉) and by the end of the story I had needed
more cold showers than Janey had, had throughout the story.

Besides being one of the most erotic things I had ever read it was also very interesting.
If you're a fan of the 'Chixs' it's a must read because it has so many cool details about
the bouncy trio. From their fave clothing to their fave beverages, it's a fountain of
awesome tidbits about the three lovely young women.

The art that accompanies it is as always with The Bandito and White Lotus top notch. It's
sexy, sharp with detail and worthy of a 'Golden Feather' if ever any art was.

Finally, the mystery itself is a nail biting thrill-ride that will keep you guessing till
the very last bounce.

In short if you like sexy women, tickles galore, 'The Bounce Chixs', breathtaking artwork or
trilling mysteries and haven't picked up this E-novel yet.
WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU WAITING FOR?!!!

I truly believe that anyone who does not buy 'BOA' is doing themselves a real disservice.


BTW Bandito mark my words one day you will read my E-novels
with the same enthusiasm I have for yours. 😉
 
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