A Maid's Punishment (F/F)

[Canadian Ninja1]

Her orders had been very clear. She must not disrupt her mistress, especially when she was in bed with someone. It wasn't as if she meant to! She just tripped! And subsequently caused a racket as she knocked over a table.

Unfortunately, her mistress wasn't one to listen to excuses.

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So I've decided to try my hand at Poser! This would be my first attempt, not trying to really change the faces or the bodies too much, just working on the poses.

EDIT: Fixed a few things up.

 

[Darth Godflesh]

The poses are great, the tickler has a certain "pirahna look" that may be fixed with a little botox, the ticklee is adorable
Thanks for sharing

 

[Violetta]

I guess it's not bad for a first attempt, but with the way their posed, the victim's expression, and the whole floating off the ground thing, it looks a lot more like the bug-eyed girl in the back tripped the maid than it looks like there's any tickling going on. Just my $0.02.

 

[Canadian Ninja1]

Thanks for the critique! It's amazing what just wanting to be done will do to a picture. Went back and fixed the face, which on looking back at it, I really don't know what I was thinking.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

I think it's a generally enjoyable picture, but what I liked most is the descriptive text in the first post. That really adds something to this one! 🙂