A needed lesson (*/f)

[Raven_kirsaen1]

Hi, the Tickler Raven job it's begining.

Sorry for repeating characters.
I prepared new ones for coming scenes but I need this chapter for the next ministories.

As always tell me what you think and I hope you like it.

 

[Journia]

Quoth the aven, "Feather More..."

 

[Low_Roads]

Looks like the Tickler Raven's got himself a partner! :super_hap I don't mind seeing the same characters again, not when they display blooming complexity and growth. That's the way classic personalities are built! The bird is quite striking... plenty of definition for a figure so dark. The idea of outlining him in teal is an unusual one; I'd never have thought to do that, but it really works wonderfully well! A fine contrast with eager, scarlet-haired trainee! Plenty of quirky touches, too... neat, the way he scratches his head in contemplation (panel three)! Yes indeed, the Tickler Raven is off to a winning start! His continuing Happiness Campaign will be a treat to follow!

 

[His Divine Shadow]

I like this Raven, that I do. Quite a bit of emotion you manage to give him, what with little touches like the LBH mentioned in panel three. Nice to see the Raven knows to use more than just his feathers on his unwilling student. *Thumbs up* :happy:

 

[Raven_kirsaen1]

I really tried to give the characters a personality, infact I catch their behaviour of a comic I'm doing ( I didn't put tickling in it's plot but who knows ), in that history I have the original characters: Raven, that red-haired girl (whose name I forgot to put in the picture, I suppose in the next will be) and more that will come.

I hope you want this to keep on, and thanks for the comments.