A poem.

[FT Genikit]

I just though it would be nice for me to share this now. So here we go.

Why do people fight
Even when it's wrong
It always lead to trouble
And soon they are long gone

Why do people fight
We can all be friends
Even if we're different
We'll be together to the end

Why do people fight
It leads to chaos and death
Because once they're in it
They'll end up doing it with their last breath

Why do people fight
when you can do what's right
By the time you do good
There's always the door to the light

 

[Journia]

*teardrop* Marvelous! *raises hands and claps* Absolutely marvelous.

 

[NoMercy4Her]

Very good, the only thing was that you didn't keep with the stanza flow in the third one. It messed up the flow of the poem and then it degrades it. If you change that then its a very good one indeed.

 

[FT Genikit]

Very good, the only thing was that you didn't keep with the stanza flow in the third one. It messed up the flow of the poem and then it degrades it. If you change that then its a very good one indeed.

You're saying that it should be like the rest? If so, I'll try to change it and make it better next time.

 

[NoMercy4Her]

Yes, do you see how all three of them have four lines but the one of them has five. That one should be changed.

 

[FT Genikit]

Yes, do you see how all three of them have four lines but the one of them has five. That one should be changed.

There. It's fixed.

 

[Low_Roads]

Very nice! Lyrical and poignant, with very good meter, too! You definitely have a poet's soul!

 

[FT Genikit]

Very nice! Lyrical and poignant, with very good meter, too! You definitely have a poet's soul!

I have to admit. I never expect to do so well when it come to poems. I guess it's because way I feel. Though I can't tell if it's a fact or a opinion.