EpicAwesomeness
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This is my first story I ever wrote for TickleTheater. Please be nice as to give me feedback and tell me what I could improve. Thanks 🙂
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"My lady, your bath awaits" said Abby, the maid. "I shall be there as soon as I'm ready!" replied an enthusiastic princess. Now Crystal was much different from the princesses you would think of. A princess was usually bratty. A snob. Very controlling and intolerant if something went against them. Crystal on the other hand was very kind. In fact she was so sweet, it took a lot to get her angry. She also loved her workers and Abby was a very good friend of hers. As she walked through the palace, everybody (mostly males) would stare at her. Her beauty was almost unreal. She walked into the bath chamber and shut the door. "Your bath is ready my lady, and it's just how you like it: warm." said Abby as Princess Crystal crossed her sight. "For the last time Abby, call me CRYSTAL!" she replied in a sarcastically angry tone. "Fine, fine...are you going to get in your bath or must I throw you in?" asked Abby with a playful tone. "I'm going, I'm going" replied Crystal. As she undid her bun, her long, shiny, black hair fell down to halfway down her breasts. She had eyes that looked of emeralds, and her skin was flawless. One could not find a single blemish on her silky smooth skin. She took off her robe and it fell to the floor. She had a shapely body with curves in just the right places. She had large, perky breasts (about a D cup) and small, pink nipples. Her belly was no less beautiful. She had an incredibly smooth tummy with a nice, deep navel. You could just barely see the outline of where her ribcage ended. Her privates were shaved to a cute and smooth looking area. Her legs were incredibly smooth. It seemed almost impossible for somebody of this time to have such smooth legs. She slowly eased her way into the bath full of hot water, and then flopped down to stick her feet off the side of the bathtub.
Now her feet...she had such amazing feet. If there was such thing as something that was perfect, it was her feet. Her feet were probably a size 6. They looked so perfect and so well taken care of. They were pink on her toes, ball of her feet, along the side, and her heel while it quickly blended to a soft, creamy white on her deep arch. She loved her feet and must have put lotion on them maybe three times a day. This made them very soft and incredibly sensitive. As she was hanging her feet out of her bathtub, she wiggled her beautiful, purple painted toes and scrunched her soles making them wrinkle.
"Why are these hanging out of the tub?" asked Abby as she gave the princess a little scratch on the sole. The princess jerked upright and gave out a short but loud squeal. "Abbyyy!! hehe..Why'd you do that?" asked Crystal in a playful manner. "Because your feet are so damn cute that's why!" responded Abby. Crystal wiggled her toes at this "You like them? hehe" she smiled making her face look almost angelic. Before Abby could respond, the princess got out and started to undress Abby. "Come in the bath with me!" she said. "I can't...I know we're friends, but if I get caught in the same bathtub as you, I could be sent to the dungeon!" Crystal knew this was right and decided to play along with the rules. She had a secret lust for Abby and has been trying to get them alone together for a while. "Okay...help me out please!" said Crystal. Abby did just that. She got the princess dried, and in her bed gown before sending her to her bed chamber.
--Two hours later...--
Crystal was laying on her bed thinking about one thing. That one tiny tickle that Abby tried. Why couldn't it have been longer? Why couldn't she have told Abby, her best friend, what she adored? As a child, Crystal had always enjoyed being tickled. She wouldn't be able to get tickled that much at all though...after all, not anybody could just hang out with the princess. As she matured, all she could think about was being tickled. She knew that it had become a sexual desire for her, but the problem was, she could never get the tickling she craved. She must have thought up a few dozen fantasies of her being captured and tickled. Or her meeting somebody with the same interests and being tickled by them. But they were fantasies for a reason...they weren't going to happen...or she didn't think so anyway. She couldn't take it anymore. She got up, and marched her way to Abby's room. She knocked on the door and then opened it. "Abby? Are you awake?" she asked in a whisper. Abby responded quickly with "Yes...I've just been thinking about stuff." Could they have been thinking of the same thing? Crystal grabbed Abby's hand and whispered "Come with me!"
At the end of traveling through the palace, Crystal went into her room and pulled the carpet up. There was a door leading underground. She opened the door and under her room was a secret passage to where there was old and unused torture equipment except they were modified in some way. There was now leather on the rack with wool under it for cushion. The cuffs had wool on the inside for comfort. There was a pillow for her head. Abby just stood there and looked in amazement. She had never seen anything like it. That's when she asked the question. "What is all of this for?" Crystal replied with "Abby...would you do anything for me? No matter what?" Abby looked clueless for a second. "...yes I would Crystal...but what would you like for me to do?" asked Abby. "Well...you see...I don't know how to say this to you without it sounding weird..." "Come on Crystal, we're best friends. You can tell me anything." Abby said. Crystal took advantage of what she just said and just spit it out without thinking. "Will you tickle me?" she blurt out. Abby looked shocked. "T...tickle you? What do you mean?" said Abby. "Well...I have never had a sexual experience at all...and I'm 19. And the only thing that is arousing to me is being tickled...and I don't mean the playful tickle you did to me in the bath, I mean you tie me down, and tickle me...I really don't know why, but --" "I'll do it." interrupted Abby. Crystal didn't expect her to go with this so well. "You will?" Crystal asked trying to keep her cool. "Yes I will. I think it's fun to both tickle and be tickled and I know where you're coming from." "Thank you!" she said excitedly as she began to quickly take off her gown. After she took her gown off, she laid on the rack-table and rose her arms above her head. Abby put her wrists and ankles in the cuffs and secured them tight. Then she cranked the lever...a lot. Crystal's body was so tight and taut. She was stretched out to her extent and she was loving every bit of it...
To be continued...
Sorry about not finishing...I must go to sleep for I have classes tomorrow and if I kept this page open roommates would be 'all up in my grill' lol but guys, I'll try to finish with part two tomorrow. Bye for now! 🙂 Post some feedback!
EDIT: Dang...this seemed like a lot when I was typing it. It's nothing compared to any of the big shots xD
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"My lady, your bath awaits" said Abby, the maid. "I shall be there as soon as I'm ready!" replied an enthusiastic princess. Now Crystal was much different from the princesses you would think of. A princess was usually bratty. A snob. Very controlling and intolerant if something went against them. Crystal on the other hand was very kind. In fact she was so sweet, it took a lot to get her angry. She also loved her workers and Abby was a very good friend of hers. As she walked through the palace, everybody (mostly males) would stare at her. Her beauty was almost unreal. She walked into the bath chamber and shut the door. "Your bath is ready my lady, and it's just how you like it: warm." said Abby as Princess Crystal crossed her sight. "For the last time Abby, call me CRYSTAL!" she replied in a sarcastically angry tone. "Fine, fine...are you going to get in your bath or must I throw you in?" asked Abby with a playful tone. "I'm going, I'm going" replied Crystal. As she undid her bun, her long, shiny, black hair fell down to halfway down her breasts. She had eyes that looked of emeralds, and her skin was flawless. One could not find a single blemish on her silky smooth skin. She took off her robe and it fell to the floor. She had a shapely body with curves in just the right places. She had large, perky breasts (about a D cup) and small, pink nipples. Her belly was no less beautiful. She had an incredibly smooth tummy with a nice, deep navel. You could just barely see the outline of where her ribcage ended. Her privates were shaved to a cute and smooth looking area. Her legs were incredibly smooth. It seemed almost impossible for somebody of this time to have such smooth legs. She slowly eased her way into the bath full of hot water, and then flopped down to stick her feet off the side of the bathtub.
Now her feet...she had such amazing feet. If there was such thing as something that was perfect, it was her feet. Her feet were probably a size 6. They looked so perfect and so well taken care of. They were pink on her toes, ball of her feet, along the side, and her heel while it quickly blended to a soft, creamy white on her deep arch. She loved her feet and must have put lotion on them maybe three times a day. This made them very soft and incredibly sensitive. As she was hanging her feet out of her bathtub, she wiggled her beautiful, purple painted toes and scrunched her soles making them wrinkle.
"Why are these hanging out of the tub?" asked Abby as she gave the princess a little scratch on the sole. The princess jerked upright and gave out a short but loud squeal. "Abbyyy!! hehe..Why'd you do that?" asked Crystal in a playful manner. "Because your feet are so damn cute that's why!" responded Abby. Crystal wiggled her toes at this "You like them? hehe" she smiled making her face look almost angelic. Before Abby could respond, the princess got out and started to undress Abby. "Come in the bath with me!" she said. "I can't...I know we're friends, but if I get caught in the same bathtub as you, I could be sent to the dungeon!" Crystal knew this was right and decided to play along with the rules. She had a secret lust for Abby and has been trying to get them alone together for a while. "Okay...help me out please!" said Crystal. Abby did just that. She got the princess dried, and in her bed gown before sending her to her bed chamber.
--Two hours later...--
Crystal was laying on her bed thinking about one thing. That one tiny tickle that Abby tried. Why couldn't it have been longer? Why couldn't she have told Abby, her best friend, what she adored? As a child, Crystal had always enjoyed being tickled. She wouldn't be able to get tickled that much at all though...after all, not anybody could just hang out with the princess. As she matured, all she could think about was being tickled. She knew that it had become a sexual desire for her, but the problem was, she could never get the tickling she craved. She must have thought up a few dozen fantasies of her being captured and tickled. Or her meeting somebody with the same interests and being tickled by them. But they were fantasies for a reason...they weren't going to happen...or she didn't think so anyway. She couldn't take it anymore. She got up, and marched her way to Abby's room. She knocked on the door and then opened it. "Abby? Are you awake?" she asked in a whisper. Abby responded quickly with "Yes...I've just been thinking about stuff." Could they have been thinking of the same thing? Crystal grabbed Abby's hand and whispered "Come with me!"
At the end of traveling through the palace, Crystal went into her room and pulled the carpet up. There was a door leading underground. She opened the door and under her room was a secret passage to where there was old and unused torture equipment except they were modified in some way. There was now leather on the rack with wool under it for cushion. The cuffs had wool on the inside for comfort. There was a pillow for her head. Abby just stood there and looked in amazement. She had never seen anything like it. That's when she asked the question. "What is all of this for?" Crystal replied with "Abby...would you do anything for me? No matter what?" Abby looked clueless for a second. "...yes I would Crystal...but what would you like for me to do?" asked Abby. "Well...you see...I don't know how to say this to you without it sounding weird..." "Come on Crystal, we're best friends. You can tell me anything." Abby said. Crystal took advantage of what she just said and just spit it out without thinking. "Will you tickle me?" she blurt out. Abby looked shocked. "T...tickle you? What do you mean?" said Abby. "Well...I have never had a sexual experience at all...and I'm 19. And the only thing that is arousing to me is being tickled...and I don't mean the playful tickle you did to me in the bath, I mean you tie me down, and tickle me...I really don't know why, but --" "I'll do it." interrupted Abby. Crystal didn't expect her to go with this so well. "You will?" Crystal asked trying to keep her cool. "Yes I will. I think it's fun to both tickle and be tickled and I know where you're coming from." "Thank you!" she said excitedly as she began to quickly take off her gown. After she took her gown off, she laid on the rack-table and rose her arms above her head. Abby put her wrists and ankles in the cuffs and secured them tight. Then she cranked the lever...a lot. Crystal's body was so tight and taut. She was stretched out to her extent and she was loving every bit of it...
To be continued...
Sorry about not finishing...I must go to sleep for I have classes tomorrow and if I kept this page open roommates would be 'all up in my grill' lol but guys, I'll try to finish with part two tomorrow. Bye for now! 🙂 Post some feedback!
EDIT: Dang...this seemed like a lot when I was typing it. It's nothing compared to any of the big shots xD
