eviltickler20
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I'm in the process of writing this story. It stars Carmen Electra, Rachel Leigh Cook, Beverley Mitchell and Mandy Moore. Here's what I have so far.
A Ticklish Situation
Written by eviltickler20
It all started at “The Hollow”, the hottest dance club in Los Angeles. Inside, Carmen Electra, Rachel Leigh Cook, Beverley Mitchell, and Mandy Moore were tearing it up on the dance floor. After awhile, they decided to sit down and have something to drink. “Bartender, four Cosmos please!” shouted Carmen. Little did they know that the bartender worked for the Evil Tickler and was planning to kidnap the girls. The bartender gave the girls their drinks, then left for the night. An hour later, the girls left the dance club and headed for their apartments. Before they even got a few blocks away from the club, a dark blue van screeched up to the curb and some masked men jumped out, chloroformed-soaked towels in hand. The masked men covered the girls’ mouths with the towels, then threw them in the van and sped away into the night. As the van drove down the road to the Tickler’s lair, the girls were bound, blindfolded and gagged.
A few minutes later, the van stopped in front of the old abandoned warehouse. The men grabbed the girls and led them inside. Once inside, the girls’ clothes were replaced by shorts, skimpy tank-tops and moccasins. They were taken to a room with four tables with stocks. Each one was strapped to the table by the wrists while their ankles were secured in the stocks.
Please post your comments as I would love to have some feedback.
A Ticklish Situation
Written by eviltickler20
It all started at “The Hollow”, the hottest dance club in Los Angeles. Inside, Carmen Electra, Rachel Leigh Cook, Beverley Mitchell, and Mandy Moore were tearing it up on the dance floor. After awhile, they decided to sit down and have something to drink. “Bartender, four Cosmos please!” shouted Carmen. Little did they know that the bartender worked for the Evil Tickler and was planning to kidnap the girls. The bartender gave the girls their drinks, then left for the night. An hour later, the girls left the dance club and headed for their apartments. Before they even got a few blocks away from the club, a dark blue van screeched up to the curb and some masked men jumped out, chloroformed-soaked towels in hand. The masked men covered the girls’ mouths with the towels, then threw them in the van and sped away into the night. As the van drove down the road to the Tickler’s lair, the girls were bound, blindfolded and gagged.
A few minutes later, the van stopped in front of the old abandoned warehouse. The men grabbed the girls and led them inside. Once inside, the girls’ clothes were replaced by shorts, skimpy tank-tops and moccasins. They were taken to a room with four tables with stocks. Each one was strapped to the table by the wrists while their ankles were secured in the stocks.
Please post your comments as I would love to have some feedback.
