Congratulations Bohey! "Abyss 2: The Antidote" is the most detailed examination of the Proxy Girls and their trials yet, with a deeply personal story sewing the narrative together without stinting one whit on the scalding sensuality that fetish enthusiasts demand! Whether or not the world of the Abyss exists in a dystopia is a matter of perspective; grueling and somewhat dehumanizing it certainly is, but Brando, Carla and Ginger come to constitute a family unit as nuclear and functioning as any we might experience today. The primary extrapolation is found in extreme mechanization and a dedication to tickling as that trigger most effective in eliciting not only secret information, but a unique physical chemistry applicable to specialized use. I particularly applaud this reaction to extremis as a positive; all too often, our cherished obsession is expressed as nothing more broadening than a favored torture, with benefits extended only to the one who inflicts. That Carla's curing regimen should incorporate tickle stimulation is laudable not only for its sensual value, but for its non-petty, non-predatory application. Kudos to you for thinking beyond the narrow constraints of simple nerve-jangling and into an expanded realm where such explicit play can serve a believable societal function!
It scarcely needs to be said that the visualization of your world is expert, with a firm grasp on all the favorite themes... suspended anatomies, oppressive industrial settings and fevered reactions... which have become a dependable expectation in your work! To these distinctions, add a rather amazing FX touch in revealing the inner workings of Proxy technology, as exterior protections are pealed elegantly away to reveal fetish intrusion at its core! Many images linger lastingly: Ginger's idealized, naive dream expectations of her coming sessions (page 9); a translucent view of the data chip implant, its potentially frightening implications ameliorated through abstract placement and cunning color distancing (page 5); a parting funhouse ride inside a carnival-lighted gimbal, as Ginger's taste for tickle thrills becomes ever more developed (page 14). In truth, there's not a single instance where one might not find his favorite moment; care and master-craftsmanship are in obvious evidence from page one to conclusion, deftly expressed in a fluid, dream-like continuity that draws one effortlessly into the storytelling! I don't doubt that further trips to the Abyss are inevitable; "Abyss 2:The Antidote" is ample proof that each one will be unique! It's a staggering fantasyland you're engineering, Bohey! My awe and admiration at the results!
