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Besties a TK poem

TicklishBlackGuy

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He just came home, and let out a sigh. He laid in his bed, sleeping on his side.

As he laid felt something on his foot, he jumped and jolted to see his friend with a look.

She sat on the bed, with a smirk and a smile, giggling madly she said "He Dragon, its been a while."

He cawlled up the bed, and followed him close. That smile seeming sinister, like a man being haunted by a ghost.

She pounced on top of him, as he tried to run. Her fingers clawed his ribs as his torture begun.

She clawed at his ribs, for a very long time. As she began to count, she couldn't count past five.

For 30 minutes, she continued her rib attack. Then her smirk go wider as she sat in his lap.

She lifted his shirt and then said yum. "Lets see how your belly and navel can handle my tongue."

She lick fast and slow, while blowing raspberries at times. As she continued this method she spidered his sides.

He laughed and and he kicked, and only to bump her off. As soon as he got the chance, he tried to run off.

She blocked his way, as he begged and pleed, but she tickled his thighs till he fell to his knees.

Then she grabbed his legs, and pulled of his socks. Her nails skittered on his soles like a scared little fox.

She continued for what seemed an hour then finally stopped. She left him on the floor, like a tomatoe to rot.

But he didn't give up, for this he pounced. She fell on the bed and didn't move an ounce.


He tickled her tummy, her sides adn her arms, getting her knees which seemed to set off alarms.

She kicked and squirmed as she giggled and squealed. Then he attacked her tummy like an evening meal.

Then he gave her a test, of her own rib attack. It lasted forever, and she didn't fight back.

He continued his attack and then looked at the time. He stopped the tickling and off he climbed.

"Its time for bed, i have to work in the morning. I have to run a few errands and a back house for sorting."

She nodded to him and snuggled him with a squeak. "Sorry for today but you been down for a week."

"I wanted to cheer you up, Kitty don't like Dragon sad." "I appreciated hun, now Dragon is not mad."

So they snuggled in bed and said goodnight. They are the best of friends, who love having tickle fights.

ain't very good with poems, but it was for a friend so i tryed
 
That was so adorable! :blush Not often do we see tickle-themed poetry posted here, and this was such a joy to read. ^_^

The title tells it all. I love the idea of tickling to be used to cheer someone up, and in the context of best friends in that cuddly atmosphere on a bed just makes it all the better. Though the poem lacked a complex form like some more recognizable styles of poetry, the simpleness actually worked well with this. I like the pacing as well, how each line moves to a different spot, or a different reaction. Also, it was just so downright cute! *squee* 😛

Save for some spelling issues and some wording here and there, I really enjoyed this, and I hope your friend does as well. 🙂 Thanks for sharing it here!
 
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