+Comm.+ Katadude +1+

[Satur1n]

HQ: http://satur1n.deviantart.com/art/Comm-Katadude-1-304815902

Commission for Katadude, who requested himself having a little fun with my Vertiga. I thought I'd have it done two nights ago but I totally forgot about her jewellery; lol

Vertiga Pendragon ペンドラゴン ベルチガ © Satur1n 殺凜。
Katadude persona © himself http://katadude.deviantart.com/

 

[dude123]

Nice work. The lines are done well on the feet.

 

[Violetta]

You've got some remarkably clean line art here along with some damn decent body shapes. The face on the guy could be a bit more proportional, but you've pretty much nailed the clothing. Even their hair looks well shaped. Someone buy Vergita an emery board, and we're all set.

I'd suggest, if you plan to color this, go with a more subtle coloring job. Your line work is your strength right now, and I think you should let it stand out and speak for itself.

 

[Satur1n]

You've got some remarkably clean line art here along with some damn decent body shapes. The face on the guy could be a bit more proportional, but you've pretty much nailed the clothing. Even their hair looks well shaped. Someone buy Vergita an emery board, and we're all set.

I'd suggest, if you plan to color this, go with a more subtle coloring job. Your line work is your strength right now, and I think you should let it stand out and speak for itself.

It won't be coloured; he commissioned me for 3 lineart images.

 

[heretichero666]

Turn out great dude! Nice work!!

 

[Serious_sam]

Very cool.