Continuing from asylum 7

[simhthmss]

I really loved a story i read called 'asylum 7' about a parapsychologist who finds a rift in time where people who go there get stuck and tickle tortured forever by an evil 'mistress' and there are dungeons called asylum 1-7. It ends with the girl being spotted and captured by mistress and taken to asylum 7...i really wanted to see what happens to this girl in asylum7 as the tortures described in this story were evily imaginative, whoever wrote this; i would love to read what happens to the visitor in asylum 7, i wanna see what delicious tortures are in store for this unfortunate young lady. I would be so so grateful to the author if they could continue from where it ended as i was dying for her to get tortured the whole way through!

Am i wierd for wanting to be there too? Didn't sound too bad to me ;-)

 

[toesinhose]

I like the story too. Part of the reason I think it works so well is that it gets the reader's blood boiling and then leaves him wondering... Because there is no clear details about the last girl's tickle torture, it forces the reader to keep thinking about the story. Overall, I think it makes the story a lot stronger.

I see you point of view about wanting to get the full picture about the last girl but I think that would take away from the dramatic ending. I think the author intended for us to think up our own endings. By not telling us exactly what happens, he's left the door of infinite possibilities open.