Creator's Poetic Posting

[creator1]

Hey guys i have been writing poetry for quite a few years now. i would love any feed back you have. i apologize in advance for any spelling or grammar mistakes. here is one of my newer pieces. enjoy🙂

Fahrenheit philosophy

By Creator

if it can burn then it can cook
and there's a lot of raw souls that need to look
into the fire and see their fate
or find themselves at hell's black gate

but I've got the words to make it clear
and ill say the end is surely near
and from boiling seas to nuclear fire
will produce a land for all to admire

and when all you see is glass and sand
you will have no choice but to close your hands
and thank your maker for each new day
and from the path you must not stray

now the path you walk is your own choice
it is your beliefs that give you voice
in your convictions stand proud and strong
and remember no man may say you are wrong

so from concrete jungle to glass desert lands
whether you see your path or are lost in the sands
don't take for granted the rising sun
or find yourself behind a smoking gun

it's clear the world is bound for hell
so find a path that suits you well
and into the fire you must look
now go my friend, go get cooked.

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