Critics welcome...

[pabuluz1]

this is a cover promo for a series im gonna start.. its my first attempt in using a pen tablet to ink on photoshop.. and using perspective to this degree. so i would love to hear everyones opinion good and bad. and ways i can improve thanks PaB

 

[Videotkl]

hehehe very nice can't wait for next part XD

 

[c_tickler]

All i'd say bud is pale soles like in the first pic... you do draw feet really well, the effects you put in through photoshop make soles of feet look super soft and extra ticklish (lol)

 

[yanneilucia]

I hate giving critics because people get insulted no matter how good your intentions are, but here it comes anyway....

Studying the anatomy of real feet and trying to draw them will improve your skill in many ways. I'm not saying that stylized drawings are bad. BUT you should only stylize after you can draw correctly. You are always welcome to draw exactly as you do now, but not because you can't do better, but because that is EXACTLY how you wanted it to look.

Now here are some examples of my drawings and you can see clearly that on one image I can make a foot look more realistic. But in the other I choose to stylize it to make it more cute.

 

[pabuluz1]

Thanks yanneilucia 🙂 ill take that on board...

C_tickler.. this is a different girl.. ha... not every girl can have pale soft feet.. ha

 

[mrtkler1]

I wouldn't go so far as to say that the soles should be made pale, just that the colors should be more naturally blended. Like, her soles are way too red for her skin tone, and it makes it look as though she just stepped over a bloody floor 😛

Her nipple looks odd as well, maybe a little less red and just a tiny bit more blending? Course that's just how I see it.

 

[pabuluz1]

That's one thing I don't like her bleeding nipple ha..

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Insane toys... this is excellent! great job!