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Amanda woke up in a room, before even trying to identify whats going on, she saw a girl in a school girl outfit standing in front of her.
She started to assess her situation, she seemed to be strapped down to a giant metal table in an X shape.
As far as she could see, the rest of the room was empty, and she was only wearing her thong and bra.
"Who are you! What are you doing to me!?" She said struggling against her metal shackles, they didnt budge.
"Silly, don't you remember, a brought you here." She said giggling.
"I don't remember anything like that!" Amanda was getting angry now.
"You signed up to be part of a scientific experiment, you don't remember that?" She was taunting her like she was a child, this was only contributing to Amanda's anger.
"Yes, I remember that, but what does that have to do with strapping me to a table half naked?"
"I guess the doctors didn't fully explain the experiment to the did they? Well, they insert one chip into each of our brains, one in me to transmit, and one in you to receive, when I tell you to do something, you do it, whether or not you want to."
"What!! I dont even know you!"
"Ohh, im sorry, I havent introduced myself, the names Ruby. The actual experiment is whether or not the chips function correctly, so they have let me test it, and my terms were your bound beyond escape to make sure you dont accidentally harm me during testing."
"Okay, so how are you gonna test it?"
Ruby didn't respond to her question the way Amanda was hoping, "Mental link, activate." Ruby said blankly.
Amanda felt something in her head, it wasn't pain, or anything good, just something. She didn't lose control, she could still think and struggle against her cuffs, just that neutral feeling in her head.
Ruby decided to do something before she started testing, still standing in front of Amanda's vision, she curved her fingers like a hawks, and started walking towards Amanda's feet.
Amanda immediately knew what she was doing. "Please!! Please don't tickle my feet! Anywhere, anything please just not that!"
Since she pleaded so nicely, she decided to save the cute little feet for later, save the best for last. She instead moved up towards Amanda's upper half, sending Amanda into horror.
This is it, im done, im too ticklish to survive a harsh tickling. She was freaking out, when she was little, her older brother used to pin her down and tickle her when her parents werent around, and she hated it, it was torture for her.
"Sensitivity, drop heavily." Ruby commanded.
When she touched Amandas armpits, Amanda was barely giggling, it didn't tickle nearly as much as she remembered, but it was barely enough to keep her from holding it in, she couldnt help but giggle as Ruby expertly danced her nails on Amandas pale white skin.
"Geez, you must be really ticklish if your laughing already, I mean we barely started."
What? This is torturous! What had happened when Ruby gave her brain that command?This was when Ruby worked her way down to her sides, and ruby lost and thoughts. "HAahaah! please stop!"
Ruby stopped, and moved back up to her ribs, this lead less of a reaction. "hahaha, haahha." Amanda moaned.
Ruby was just testing how ticklish each spot was before she went all in. Now she went to the stomach, Amanda barely giggled, weird, Amanda knew she was REALLY ticklish in her stomach, besides her feet it was her worst place.
Ruby decided to leave the feet, she had to wait for the grand prize. She went back to her sides for a few seconds, then stopped.
"Sensitivity, increase to base levels." Amanda was to busy still giggling to notice Ruby say this, and was unprepared when she got her sides attacked.
"HAHAHAAH pl-plelelese, stohohohop, ahahannnythi-" Was all she could get out before her words when engulfed in mass hysteria.
Amanda found this torture, she hated it. She kept trying to hold in her laughter so she could ask Ruby to stop, beg Ruby to stop, but she was relentless, she just kept attacking for at least five minutes, after which Amanda was in tears from the tickling, her sides burned from the sensation.
"Tickle, pits." Ruby commanded the chip, and Amanda exploded.
"T-t-tttttururururnnn it oooffff hahahahahhaha." She again attempted to no avail to get this to stop.
"Cease tickle." She walked back to Amanda. "I didn't even touch you that time."
Amanda was to exhausted, to heavily breathing to respond.
"Body, paralyze." Amanda practically turned into a statue of flesh, her breathing could still be heard, so Ruby knew she hadn't died.
"Head, mobilize." Amanda could now move only her head, the rest of her still immobilized, so she could laugh, and beg.
Ruby walked to the feet, seeing Amanda's face filled with more fear than the first time, knowing that now she had no way to stop it.
Ruby simply scratched one of her scarlet painted nails don the sole of Amandas right heel, she didn't move, but she didn't even giggle either. Ruby looked at Amandas face, she was refusing to laugh, she wouldnt give Ruby the satisfaction.
This made Ruby angry, she jumped back up to ruby sides sides and attacked with everything, and Amanda lost it. "NONONONONONNOHAHAHHHAHHAHAAH"
Now not even being able to squirm, that made this completely unbearable torture, as Rubys hands stroked and vibrated all around Rubys most ticklish areas.
"You gonna laugh when I tickle you? Coochie coochie coo." Ruby said teasing as she continued to torture her into hysterics.
"YYYYEEEEESSSS, HAHAHAH,"
Ruby stopped this, and went back to the feet, as further punishment, she decided ruby wasn't gonna laugh.
"Vocals, silent."
Amanda was now laying there, unable to move, unable to speak, and her only option was to sit and watch her self be tortured.
Amanda suddenly felt the worst sensation she had felt ever, Ruby's long nails lightly grazed Amanda's soft and extremely sensitive feet, as Amanda couldn't even laugh as a stress relief, she couldn't even wiggle her toes or defend herself at all! This was pure delight for Ruby, watching Amanda's head come close to exploding from the torturous tickles Ruby was giving her.
"Vocals, resume."
"HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!" An explosion of laughter came from Amanda as Ruby continued to tickle her. She couldn't even think to beg, more a less articulate the words.
"Come on, I've barely started, I haven't even touched your toes yet."
Amanda couldn't hear her, she was to busy laughing until she began to hurt from loss of oxygen.
Ruby backed off for a minute, trying to find a way to make this even more torturous, then she decided to stop playing around.
"Sensitivity, maximum, sides, tickle."
Amanda exploded with giggles before she even realized Ruby had spoke.
"NONONOONONNOO!!!! HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA."
Ruby decided that she wasnt laughing quite enough yet, time for everything there was. "Tickle everywhere minus feet and privates."
Amandas torture intensified, her entire body was still frozen and she was just laughing like a maniac, if anyone else were to look at her right now, she would been put in a mental asylum, luckily noone was.
Ruby walked up to her feet, and grabbed something Amanda couldnt see from under the table she was strapped to, but she was laughing to hard to notice her even walk over.
Then, she felt it, tons of little bristles vibrating and brushing her feet, she went from laughing to all out screaming. "AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!" It tickled more than anything else. That was when her senses went into overload and she was on fire all over, she was laughing all the air out of her lungs, she was dying, and couldn't even say that to her killer.
She couldn't fell the tickling anymore, but could still hear herself screaming, laughing I guess, she could only fell all the air leaving her lungs, see the world slipping away from her.
Ruby didn't even see Amanda turn pink, or start to turn blue, she just kept making her endure the torture, until everything stopped, the screaming, the laughing, for a second, Ruby couldn't even hear breathing, she panicked.
"OH MY GOD! I LITERALLY TICKLED HER TO DEATH!!!"
She started running around the room in panic, she went over to were Amanda was limp and dead, "I am so sorry, I never meant for this, I- I'm so sorry." Ruby was nearly in tears, until she opened her eyes again.
*Gasp* "I- I -believe you, thank you."
"For what? I nearly murdered you!"
"You didn't know I was dying, it just happened, I heard you freak out, thank you for not doing it on purpose, but I am totally getting you back someday."
Ruby was still crying, no from joy instead of sorrow, but still crying, "Mental link deactivate."
Amanda felt her brain stop waiting for command, and heard something she wished shed known before, "You know you could have told me to do stuff to, let me get you off the table."
Ruby unlocked Amanda with the key in her project, and they talked for a few minutes to wind down.
"So, are they gonna take these chips back out again?" Amanda asked nervous, she didn't like this mind control thing.
"No, they were only gonna do that if the chips failed, and they worked perfectly."
"Well, at least they didn't let me die laughing, the chip must've shut down when my vital signs started to drop."
"Yeah, how would you die from that anyway? Wouldn't you pass out before you died?"
"I think the chip kept me awake since it was doing the bulk of the tickling towards the end."
"Whatever, I'm gonna go file my report and come back, you just rest a minute."
THE END
Thank you for reading my first ever story! Hope you enjoyed.
She started to assess her situation, she seemed to be strapped down to a giant metal table in an X shape.
As far as she could see, the rest of the room was empty, and she was only wearing her thong and bra.
"Who are you! What are you doing to me!?" She said struggling against her metal shackles, they didnt budge.
"Silly, don't you remember, a brought you here." She said giggling.
"I don't remember anything like that!" Amanda was getting angry now.
"You signed up to be part of a scientific experiment, you don't remember that?" She was taunting her like she was a child, this was only contributing to Amanda's anger.
"Yes, I remember that, but what does that have to do with strapping me to a table half naked?"
"I guess the doctors didn't fully explain the experiment to the did they? Well, they insert one chip into each of our brains, one in me to transmit, and one in you to receive, when I tell you to do something, you do it, whether or not you want to."
"What!! I dont even know you!"
"Ohh, im sorry, I havent introduced myself, the names Ruby. The actual experiment is whether or not the chips function correctly, so they have let me test it, and my terms were your bound beyond escape to make sure you dont accidentally harm me during testing."
"Okay, so how are you gonna test it?"
Ruby didn't respond to her question the way Amanda was hoping, "Mental link, activate." Ruby said blankly.
Amanda felt something in her head, it wasn't pain, or anything good, just something. She didn't lose control, she could still think and struggle against her cuffs, just that neutral feeling in her head.
Ruby decided to do something before she started testing, still standing in front of Amanda's vision, she curved her fingers like a hawks, and started walking towards Amanda's feet.
Amanda immediately knew what she was doing. "Please!! Please don't tickle my feet! Anywhere, anything please just not that!"
Since she pleaded so nicely, she decided to save the cute little feet for later, save the best for last. She instead moved up towards Amanda's upper half, sending Amanda into horror.
This is it, im done, im too ticklish to survive a harsh tickling. She was freaking out, when she was little, her older brother used to pin her down and tickle her when her parents werent around, and she hated it, it was torture for her.
"Sensitivity, drop heavily." Ruby commanded.
When she touched Amandas armpits, Amanda was barely giggling, it didn't tickle nearly as much as she remembered, but it was barely enough to keep her from holding it in, she couldnt help but giggle as Ruby expertly danced her nails on Amandas pale white skin.
"Geez, you must be really ticklish if your laughing already, I mean we barely started."
What? This is torturous! What had happened when Ruby gave her brain that command?This was when Ruby worked her way down to her sides, and ruby lost and thoughts. "HAahaah! please stop!"
Ruby stopped, and moved back up to her ribs, this lead less of a reaction. "hahaha, haahha." Amanda moaned.
Ruby was just testing how ticklish each spot was before she went all in. Now she went to the stomach, Amanda barely giggled, weird, Amanda knew she was REALLY ticklish in her stomach, besides her feet it was her worst place.
Ruby decided to leave the feet, she had to wait for the grand prize. She went back to her sides for a few seconds, then stopped.
"Sensitivity, increase to base levels." Amanda was to busy still giggling to notice Ruby say this, and was unprepared when she got her sides attacked.
"HAHAHAAH pl-plelelese, stohohohop, ahahannnythi-" Was all she could get out before her words when engulfed in mass hysteria.
Amanda found this torture, she hated it. She kept trying to hold in her laughter so she could ask Ruby to stop, beg Ruby to stop, but she was relentless, she just kept attacking for at least five minutes, after which Amanda was in tears from the tickling, her sides burned from the sensation.
"Tickle, pits." Ruby commanded the chip, and Amanda exploded.
"T-t-tttttururururnnn it oooffff hahahahahhaha." She again attempted to no avail to get this to stop.
"Cease tickle." She walked back to Amanda. "I didn't even touch you that time."
Amanda was to exhausted, to heavily breathing to respond.
"Body, paralyze." Amanda practically turned into a statue of flesh, her breathing could still be heard, so Ruby knew she hadn't died.
"Head, mobilize." Amanda could now move only her head, the rest of her still immobilized, so she could laugh, and beg.
Ruby walked to the feet, seeing Amanda's face filled with more fear than the first time, knowing that now she had no way to stop it.
Ruby simply scratched one of her scarlet painted nails don the sole of Amandas right heel, she didn't move, but she didn't even giggle either. Ruby looked at Amandas face, she was refusing to laugh, she wouldnt give Ruby the satisfaction.
This made Ruby angry, she jumped back up to ruby sides sides and attacked with everything, and Amanda lost it. "NONONONONONNOHAHAHHHAHHAHAAH"
Now not even being able to squirm, that made this completely unbearable torture, as Rubys hands stroked and vibrated all around Rubys most ticklish areas.
"You gonna laugh when I tickle you? Coochie coochie coo." Ruby said teasing as she continued to torture her into hysterics.
"YYYYEEEEESSSS, HAHAHAH,"
Ruby stopped this, and went back to the feet, as further punishment, she decided ruby wasn't gonna laugh.
"Vocals, silent."
Amanda was now laying there, unable to move, unable to speak, and her only option was to sit and watch her self be tortured.
Amanda suddenly felt the worst sensation she had felt ever, Ruby's long nails lightly grazed Amanda's soft and extremely sensitive feet, as Amanda couldn't even laugh as a stress relief, she couldn't even wiggle her toes or defend herself at all! This was pure delight for Ruby, watching Amanda's head come close to exploding from the torturous tickles Ruby was giving her.
"Vocals, resume."
"HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!" An explosion of laughter came from Amanda as Ruby continued to tickle her. She couldn't even think to beg, more a less articulate the words.
"Come on, I've barely started, I haven't even touched your toes yet."
Amanda couldn't hear her, she was to busy laughing until she began to hurt from loss of oxygen.
Ruby backed off for a minute, trying to find a way to make this even more torturous, then she decided to stop playing around.
"Sensitivity, maximum, sides, tickle."
Amanda exploded with giggles before she even realized Ruby had spoke.
"NONONOONONNOO!!!! HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA."
Ruby decided that she wasnt laughing quite enough yet, time for everything there was. "Tickle everywhere minus feet and privates."
Amandas torture intensified, her entire body was still frozen and she was just laughing like a maniac, if anyone else were to look at her right now, she would been put in a mental asylum, luckily noone was.
Ruby walked up to her feet, and grabbed something Amanda couldnt see from under the table she was strapped to, but she was laughing to hard to notice her even walk over.
Then, she felt it, tons of little bristles vibrating and brushing her feet, she went from laughing to all out screaming. "AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!" It tickled more than anything else. That was when her senses went into overload and she was on fire all over, she was laughing all the air out of her lungs, she was dying, and couldn't even say that to her killer.
She couldn't fell the tickling anymore, but could still hear herself screaming, laughing I guess, she could only fell all the air leaving her lungs, see the world slipping away from her.
Ruby didn't even see Amanda turn pink, or start to turn blue, she just kept making her endure the torture, until everything stopped, the screaming, the laughing, for a second, Ruby couldn't even hear breathing, she panicked.
"OH MY GOD! I LITERALLY TICKLED HER TO DEATH!!!"
She started running around the room in panic, she went over to were Amanda was limp and dead, "I am so sorry, I never meant for this, I- I'm so sorry." Ruby was nearly in tears, until she opened her eyes again.
*Gasp* "I- I -believe you, thank you."
"For what? I nearly murdered you!"
"You didn't know I was dying, it just happened, I heard you freak out, thank you for not doing it on purpose, but I am totally getting you back someday."
Ruby was still crying, no from joy instead of sorrow, but still crying, "Mental link deactivate."
Amanda felt her brain stop waiting for command, and heard something she wished shed known before, "You know you could have told me to do stuff to, let me get you off the table."
Ruby unlocked Amanda with the key in her project, and they talked for a few minutes to wind down.
"So, are they gonna take these chips back out again?" Amanda asked nervous, she didn't like this mind control thing.
"No, they were only gonna do that if the chips failed, and they worked perfectly."
"Well, at least they didn't let me die laughing, the chip must've shut down when my vital signs started to drop."
"Yeah, how would you die from that anyway? Wouldn't you pass out before you died?"
"I think the chip kept me awake since it was doing the bulk of the tickling towards the end."
"Whatever, I'm gonna go file my report and come back, you just rest a minute."
THE END
Thank you for reading my first ever story! Hope you enjoyed.