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CrystalLight

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Dance with me.
Wrap yourself around me and strip me bare.
Unfold what lies within and breathe life into me.
Bind me, chase me, work me, mold me.

Fight with me.
An art so beautiful, it cannot be confined to a canvas.
A desire that blooms with every waking hour.
Two Wills pushing, pulling, giving..taking.

Learn with me.
A lesson best taught with no sound.
Encompassing every part of us.
Building a plethora of new possibility.
One Challenge at a time.

Console me.
I cannot do this alone.
It's just within my reach, but I'm too scared to touch it.
A dance so beautiful.. so enamoring..
Creating a voice within me, one that's become harder to quell.

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Danse avec moi.
Enroule-toi autour de moi et déshabille-moi.
Dévoile ce qui se cache à l’intérieur de moi et insuffle la vie en moi.
Attache-moi, poursuis-moi, travaille-moi, façonne-moi.

Combats avec moi.
Un art aussi beau ne peut pas être confiné à une toile.
Un désir qui fleurit à chaque heure d’éveil.
Deux Volontés poussant, tirant, donnant... prenant.

Apprends avec moi.
Une leçon qui s’enseigne mieux sans bruit.
Englobant chaque partie de nous.
Créant une pléthore de nouvelles possibilités.
Un Défi à la fois.

Console-moi.
Je ne peux pas faire cela seule.
C’est juste à ma portée, mais je suis trop effrayée pour le toucher.
Une danse si belle... si séduisante…
Générant une voix au plus profond de moi, de celles qui sont les plus difficiles à réprimer.
 
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Exterior looking at inside.



With just 18 lines of text you've managed to pack in so many raw emotions that I actually feel...different, after reading this. Changed somehow. This is something very, very special. There's such a yearning truthfulness in this it's just unbelievably touching.

Sitting here, with this Reply to Thread box still open, I read it a fourth time just now and realized how honestly positive it is. How hopeful.

This needs to be written out, framed and hung somewhere. Seriously.
 
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Excellent ! Full of emotions and cute. Could easily be made a song, I think. Ask Bohemianne for the music, we all know since her "MTV spoof" she's got a knack for this 😀

One thing though : why a title in French ?
 
Marquis said a mouthful. Could have just as easily been titled "The Dance". Beautifully done JJ. :redheart:
 
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