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Fantastic story!

milicko

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This is my first post in story section, hope it's succesfull:

Heidi goes hiking. Heidi enjoyed hiking, it was as simple as that. Now that she was out of college, it was a chance to put on her kelly green sweats, get away from city life for a few hours and go deep into the woods, away from all her problems and troubles. And so far, today's hike had been pretty terrific. Taking a break to rest her weary feet, Heidi slipped out of her sneakers and socks and let the grass tickle her bare soles, as she thought about the various trees and bushes that she had seen today. Wriggling her toes, she ran her fingers idly through her dirty blonde hair and she sighed happily as she relaxed against the large oak tree.
Suddenly, there was a large whistling sound, and then the sounds of many leaves tearing and branches breaking. Jumping to her feet, Heidi whirled around and saw that a parachutist had come crashing down into one of the large sycamores behind her.
Heidi sprinted over. "Hello? Are you all right?"
"Hi!" came back a friendly, high-pitched voice. "My name's Teri. I just joined the local parachuting club. I wanted to prove to my friends that I could do this with them, but I got separated and drifted off by myself."
There was a thrashing above, and some of the leaves parted. Heidi could just make out a shapely brunette hanging above her, struggling to free herself from her chute and come down.
Heidi looked up. "Are you ok?"
"I'm fine, no bumps or bruises, but all my ropes and lines and cords are tangled everywhere. I'm totally stuck, can you help me down?"
Heidi went to tug on Teri's ankles, but saw that there were cords lashed around each one, running in and out of several branches. "You've got some lines around your legs."
"I know, I can feel them. I just tried yanking my feet up, but my boots keep getting caught."
"Oh, I can help you. I'll yank off your boots, and you can try yanking your bare legs up."
"Ok, if you think that will help. Can't you just yank the lines off?"
Standing on her tip-toes, Heidi was able to unlace first the left boot and then the right. "I can just barely reach your feet as it is, sorry!" She quickly tugged off the first boot, but the second boot was on a little tighter, and she ending up yanking off the sock as well, leaving that dangling half on and half off Teri's foot.
"Ok, let me try to pull my legs up, now."
"Wait, let me just fix your sock."
But no sooner had Heidi touched Teri's bare sole, meaning only to slide the sock up, when the bound brunette let out a surprized squeal. She giggled once and kicked her foot, letting the sock drop to the ground. "Watch it, I have to warn you that I have very ticklish soles!"
"Oh? well, I guess I have to warn you that I have very long nails, see?" And she raked her nails up and down on Teri's exposed sole.
"That is so not funny! Hahahahahaha! No, really, cut it out!"
"Really? Cootchie cootchie coo!" Heidi slid her fingers back and forth across the sole.
"Ahahahahaha! HAHAHAHAHAHA! Come on, really, I'm not kidding, I'm terribly ticklish!"
Heidi laughed. "Wow, you really are!" She raked her fingers along the sides of Teri's foot. "And you have such a great laugh, like a little schoolgirl!" She ran her nails up and down Teri's foot, now sweeping around her arch and insole.
"Stop! Stop! Ahahahahahah! HAHAHAHAhahahahaha! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA"
Heidi laughed along with Teri, she had never known anyone so ticklish. "Cootchie cootchie coo!" She tapped with her long nails on her toes.
"Please! Come on, cut it out! HAHAHAH ahaHAHAHAH AHahaha AHAHAHAHAH! This isn't funny, hahhahahaha!"
"I don't know, you're laughing pretty hard! Tickle Tickle!" And she wiggled her hand again.
"Oh my god, that tickles so much! AhahahahahahahahA! Hahahahahahahahah! Stop, stop, please stop, I mean it! Please!"
Heidi nodded. "Ok, ok, I'll stop. Here, I'll take off your other sock, and you can slip your legs up out of the cords."
"Ok!" Teri was glad to stop giggling!
Heidi peeled off the other other sock, then glanced up at Teri's bare legs and feet. "Ok, I can think you can land on that branch there to your left. See if you can move now."
Teri looked dubious. "I don't know, that branch seems pretty far away."
Heidi reached up, and tickled both bare feet. "You can do it," she said encouragingly. "Here's some motivation!"
"Heehahaha.. oh! hahahhah! Oh god, stop it, stop tickling me, hahahaha... no no, not both feet at once, hahahahah. stop! stop! please! HAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAH!"
Teri tried yanking on her bonds, seeing if she could slip her bare legs up and away. For a moment, she was able to pull them up, as the branch below her bent a bit. But then it snapped back, tightening the lines around her ankles even more.
Below, Heidi watched as Teri tried bringing her legs up, then saw as her two bare feet popped down through the canopy of leaves again. Idly, she reached up and tickled them again. "No luck, huh?"
"Hahahahahah... oh, don't start tickling me again! Please! I'm still stuck, worse than ever I think! Help me down, please!"
Heidi nodded, raking her nails along both soles. "Ok, hmmm... Maybe if I keep tickling your feet, you'll laugh so hard you'll fall out of the tree?"
"What? Oh come on, no! No, please! HAhahahahahah! AHAHAHAHAH! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Oh my god, your nails tickle so much! HAHahhehehehehehe! hahahahah! Oh god, oh god, stop tickling my bare feet! hahahahahaha! Please, please, I'm too ticklish!"
"Cootchie cootcie coo!"
"Oh come on, hahahah! Don't leave me hanging barefoot and helpless! Hahahahahaha! No no, not your nails again! hahAH AHAHAHAHAH! HAHAHAHAAAHAH! Oh my god, please! PLEASE! Hahahahahahahahahah!"
Heidi nodded, and stopped tickling. "Ok, sorry if I got carried away. How about I if I try and climb up myself? Maybe I can help you down from the other side or something."
She gave Teri's toes one last tickle, then gathered up her boots and socks and put them back in the woods with her owns sneakers. "Here, I'm just making sure our stuff is safe... I'll be right up! And she came back, gave Teri's soles another tickle, then started climbing....
The End
 
The story is pretty good. it flows nicely and it's fairly well written. I am sure glad it's fictional though because the chances of that ever really happening are pretty slim
 
Great story, but I thought when Heidi slipped off her trainers and socks, that she might get tickled in return. Perhaps a sequel could be written where Terri, finally free of her parachute and back on the ground, turns the tables and get Heidi's ticklish feet...? 🙂
 
I liked your story. I liked the accidental bondage, especially when it gave a complete stranger tickle access. I liked the accidental discovery of her ticklishness, and the interaction between the characters, the tickle words, how the tickler was enjoying it, etc. In a way, the story was mostly one recurring event, a foot tickling, with slight variations. Because the story was kept short, that wasn't a big problem. The revenge tickle idea mentioned by koopacooper would be one way to give it more variety, or expand it into a sequel. But I found your story exciting just as it is. I'll watch to see more of your stories.

A parachute in a tree with the person accidentally tickled would be a rare event. However, the only time I ever jumped, my parachute really did get caught in a tree. The tree was only about 12 ft tall, and my lines were longer than that, so I still hit the ground, safely. So no woman came by to tickle me at all *sigh*.
 
good point. well it took me 2 weeks to write this story so you'll have to wait for another story for a while...
 
Nice Idea, Well Written. I Like The Misdirection With Heidi Being The 'ler And Not The 'lee. A Nice Variation On The Ol' Girl Has Stepped Through The Ceiling And Is Being Tickled.
 
Ive never posted before, but unless you wrote this in two weeks 4 years ago, this isnt yours. This story has been around a long while.
 
Excellent story! I love the idea of employing unusual forms of bondage, where the lee is secure but not in pain.
 
I'm not saying that you didn't, all I'm saying is that this story has been out for at least 4 years. It was posted on Josie's site. No author is listed there. I just found it strange that you commented that it took you 2 weeks to write it and people would have to wait a while for another when the story has been around that long. the Josie site has been down for a while but if you google search the story you can see where it was first posted. http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&q="teri's+tree+tickle"
 
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