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FEET - Caught Spying (M/FF, feet)

Ilohnoh1

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(NOTE: The text below contains some spoilers. You may want to read the comic page first before reading the text.)

(NOTE: If you are disgusted by feet you may want to stop following this comic from this point forward, because its content just isn't for you.)




What is the fetishist's worst fear? If he's not been open about it and feels a little (or a lot) embarrassed by his fetish, the worst fear is that someone will notice or find out. That would create an uncomfortable situation, right? Or bigger would the fear be that people would not understand... or even laugh about it and start making jokes.

Well, that's why this page speaks so much to me and is to date perhaps my favourite of the series. What if you have a foot fetish and five quite beautiful neighbour girls find out? And you love looking at their feet but... doing so now makes you blush even more and make you feel even more uncomfortalbe, because they know?

Here's where the series maybe REALLY kicks off... so get some soda and chips and enjoy the show! The girls won't leave it at this and later today you will see what evil THEY come up with! Oh yeah!


Honestly, if you dislike feet, are disgusted by them or something... please steer away from this comic because you probably won't like what you see. 😉 On the other hand, if you are into feet... your wet dream may come true as the girls come up with their devious plans to execute on the poor guy who can't help but getting turned on by a couple of pretty feet.
 
Looks pretty good, Ilohnoh, but if you will, allow me to add my two cents to this because it's bugged me for a while.

You obviously like to draw and create - the sheer amount of stuff you contribute is proof enough of that. Your style can also be rather charming in general(although the furry things look somewhat creepy to me :stickout). In addition, you have gotten better, objectively speaking, from when you first started out here.

I don't know what your goals as an artist are, maybe you don't care either way, but I would heavily implore you to do some studies on human anatomy, and more specifically, body proportions. I guess what really bugs me, is that you have the energy as an artist that I seem to lack, and your art could be really great, but I just haven't seen your art evolve all that much given the amount that you actually seem to draw. Futhermore, I'm not at all implying that your anatomy is bad but that it's so close to being good, but it never quite gets there.

I'm not trying to say this from any sort of pedestal or anything. I say this because I do like your art, and I think it could be really good. I hope you don't let this discourage you in any way, because it is the opposite of my intent. I could recommend some books if you are interested.

I hope you don't take this the wrong way. Please, keep up the good work!
 
I don't know what your goals as an artist are, maybe you don't care either way, but I would heavily implore you to do some studies on human anatomy, and more specifically, body proportions. I guess what really bugs me, is that you have the energy as an artist that I seem to lack, and your art could be really great, but I just haven't seen your art evolve all that much given the amount that you actually seem to draw. Futhermore, I'm not at all implying that your anatomy is bad but that it's so close to being good, but it never quite gets there.

Thanks for your feedback.

I know that my artwork is not perfect and the body shapes (although they must be a 100% or more better than what they were in the beginning) are not entirely accurate. Personally I think they 'do the job', at least for my own feelings at the moment. I am not a professional artist, nor do I try to be or become.

Doing artwork is just a hobby and although it's (clearly) my main hobby, enjoying is the most important facet to me. That doesn't mean that I don't try to improve my artwork, it just doesn't come on the first place.

For drawing humanoids I'm using a simple technique where i just draw some general shapes with the desired size and angles, after which I start working from there. You can easily guess that that's not a good base for an anatomically correct representation.

I also mess up from time to time, as you can see in the first picture of this comic. Sherry is actually a lot taller than she should be in that picture. I could have corrected this a little afterwards on my computer but I didn't want to. The (need for) computer manipulation actually takes away from the fun again, I much prefer to draw rather than do the cleaning up or colouring. Nowadays I try to keep the sheet clean as possible so as little as possible time goes into cleaning up... Earlier on it could take easily an hour to get all the smudges and help lines out.

No, my ways are not perfect, but at the moment I'm happy with the results. There'll undoubtedly come a time again that I'm going to look into books and see if I can improve a bit or two again, but I don't expect I'll go anywhere near what looks really perfect or professional.

I have many various skills (artwork is just one amongst a lot of other things) and more of a 'jack of all trades' than a 'master of one'. I am also not naturally gifted with being able to draw (you should see my early artwork, really) so all considering I've come quite a long way.

But this kind of feedback does tell me that people think my artwork is quite nice and they'd be happy to see it improve, in time I think it will, but maybe not as much as you'd like to see.
 
I wanted to make another note about the anatomy in my characters, specifically regarding body proportions.

I know they're quite irregular at the moment and that's because I'm not measuring anything, only taking very rough estimates and using some (possibly wrong) rules of thumb to create the bodies. I'm not measuring heads and the fact is that actually when I really draw the head it can sometimes grow or shrink a little in the process, making the rest of the body too tall or short. (not related to the first frame in this page, that's a totally different thing going on there).

From origin my characters have typically had way too large heads compared to the rest of the body. This may (have) give them a more child-like appearance although that's not the intention. Just that I tend to draw heads too big. (maybe I just like Little Big Head or something 😛 ) Another (mostly past tense now) problem in my artwork has been that limbs (legs especially) have been too thick. I never really saw that back then but luckily my eyes opened on that at some point.

Of course now I'm looking at my artwork (more critically than normally) with open eyes again and wondering what's the biggest thing that could use improvement now. (I said already I like to improve now and then but only when I feel it's necessary or possible). Maybe it'll improve soon again, who knows. (But definitely not on the next page because I already finished that one).
 
excellent two parter ^^

Oh, this is a little more than a 'two parter'. The next pages, even though not being entirely a 'flowing story' are also based on the fact that the girls found out about John's secret fetish and are coming up with devious plans to confront him with it.

AHyeah, stay tuned. 🙂 There's more!
 
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