First Tickling Picture (Mild Nudity)

[Battousai]

This is my first tickling picture. It took me a few hours, but I ran out of time before I could completely finish it. Oh well, not bad for a first try, at least in my opinion.

PS: Please forgive the badly drawn hands (and not-quite-so-badly-but-still-badly drawn feet -- the fact I can't draw them has a lot to do with why this is the first time I've done a tickling picture).

 

[Darth Godflesh]

Not bad for a first attempt!
welcome to the "let's-rate-the-artwork-arena"

 

[Low_Roads]

Well done! The scenario is clever (if familiar), the girl is plenty cute, lots of variety and action in the tickling attack, and the nudity isn't particularly objectionable. Good body proportions, with a credible "twist" to the torso to show she's struggling. The hands and feet didn't bother me...they look just fine!

 

[laughingboy2000]

That's actually a great first attempt. It has its own unique art style and it looks cute. Great job!

 

[hydra904]

great job

I would have never though this was a first attempt. Very good

 

[solleticosoffro]

veeeeery funny! thank you!

 

[Battousai]

Thanks for the kind words, people. ^^

I'm quite a perfectionist, so I've actually made a modified version to fix something that was bothering me (her legs looked way too short). They're still not perfect, but it's an improvement. Oh, and I fixed the hair a bit, too.

I may completely finish this version later, like I'd originally planned to do with the first. It depends how long my attention span and urge to draw lasts.

 

[Falcon Tk]

Funny and very good first work my friend (cool work)...One new and good Artist in the tickling art world is one good notice...OH YEA...WELCOME FRIEND.

good luck in your day...Greetings to all here.

My MSN (and clear) your MSN link is:

http://groups.msn.com/FalconTkAnimeticklingplace

 

[Italian_Touch]

Very good job! Keep drawing!!!!


PS I'm back!

 

[ghostshinobi]

Hey , thats pretty cute.

Simple yet stylish. I love the facial expression

 

[rajee]

Cool artwork Battousai. 😎

 

[CoreyFarmer]

Great job! It reminded me of Ranma 1/2 for some reason...which is good 😛

 

[Darth Vegeta]

hmm

Very good for a first one 🙂