Chris Prime
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This is based on a very cute picture by Ninja Sammi here: :super_hap
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/...llery/In_a_Different_Reality____by_NinjaS.jpg
And it gave me an idea to a (slightly naughty, but not over the top) story which features alternate versions of Sammi & Jimmyjames' characters ^_^
It doesn't start much as a tickle story, but it does have some strokes on someone's soles, but It's going to end with a good tickle! Promised! 😱
I hope they like it.
Chapter 1: A messy start.
Darn! I thought to myself as my small car sputtered to a stop. And my sister said she'd filled the tank up yesterday. Thanks a lot!
I was in the middle of a half grazed field of farmland, on a hot near summer's morning breeze, and I was heading to off to see Jimmy (an Old school friend who's moved to the farmland to help with his grandparents. And somehow he's managed to make some good bucks to send them & himself on a holiday cruise) And I'm going to be late to take care of their farm. Great!
I'd managed to spot someone relaxing in the field. And managed to climb over the fence to see who it was....
"Hi there! I'm kinda stuck here & I was wondering if you can....help...."
I stopped to see who I was facing....a girl was sitting on two rolls of haybails & turned her head (revealing her flashy short, yet slightly longer, greasy brown hair & blue eyeliner.
She was wearing overalls of a baggy kind & (much to my suprise & delight) barefooted!
"Hi there stranger!" She replied. "What can I be of service?"
I shuddered a bit and edged a bit closer, looking at the details of this girl.
"Well you see I've got a bit of car troubles & I was trying to see if anyone could fix my car. I can't do it alone."
"Well why not relax for a moment & sit with me?" She asked. "I don't mind some company, you can explain what might be the cause of the problem. I cool with that. I'm just a bit of a grease monkey!"
A tingle went down my spine as I walked shakely nearer, & then with a yelp, I fell! I stumbled bewtween my legs & crashed in front of bail where her feet were resting. I heard her laugh as my face came up again, with a mouthfull of grass. Then my left arm streched upwards to grab at something, and it was at this moment that my hand swept across her soft soles.
"Hey! Quihihit ihihit!" I heard her giggle even more as my fingers slipped over the arches & balls of her dirty left barefoot. "That tickles!"
It was then, that I grabbed her foot (around the arches, which causes her to give a shrieking kind of laugh) & pulled myself back to my feet.
"I'm sorry! I was just a little clumsy thats all!" I hastily apologized, (not wanting to dwell on my childhood fetish) quickly trying to pull off some reeds off my shirt & spat some grass out of my mouth.
"It's okay!" She said with a tiny grin "I don't usualy enjoy that kind of tickling. You're the first person that made me kind of enjoy this!" She stood upright, allowing her dirty toes to wiggle amongst the grass. she was about the same height as me, except for the greasy brown hair, and she had a cute smile. "Now come on & show me your car."
We walked towards the fence that I had crossed over to the see the girl, explaining what went wrong with the car, & climbed back to see the cause of the trouble.
My cock went kinda rigid as I heard her bare feet slapping on the dirt road.
"Now let's see what all this hullabaloo is about." She said as she opened the bonnet. A slight hiss came out of the car. And We went to work.
We tinkered a bit & several minutes later, I decided to check the ignition was right. She stepped to the side to be at the safe side of things & I'd turned the key.
There was a shudder & a clutter. A puff of smoke appeared out, clouding our vision & then a spurt of greasy engine oil spilled out from the car making a tiny sticky puddle....Which the girl, not looking where she was looking, accidently stepped on asking what wrong.
"EEEeeeewwwww!!!!!! Gross!" She squealed. Then she laughed to see my cheeks all blackened by the smoke.
"Great!" I groaned rubbing by face with my sleeves. Then chuckled to finaly see the girl, who was still up between her toes in an oil puddle!
Not funny! She howled. And soon we managed to solve the problem.
Then I Cleaned myself & looked at the girl, who was sitting on the fence, looking into the distance. Her overalls were stained & so were her cheeks & mostly her bare handss & feet (still under the remains of the gooey oil she'd managed to remove the worst). I wanted to clean her up, but she declined.
"Aww! Come on! I want to at least clean you up a bit, as a token of thanks for helping me repair my car. Honest!"
I'd put my hands (one holding a cloth) on her filthy feet and began cleaning her soles, which tickled her enormously.
Hahahahahahahahahahhaahahahahaha! Cut it Out silly! She giggled.
"Oh, Don't be such a baby!" I complained. "It's just a clean up!"
Soon I managed to clean up most of the mess from the rest of her body. And she was a little suprised after how clean she was.
"Hey Thanks!" She said. Now I can look like I haven't been anywhere too far away!"
"Away from what?" I asked.
"None of your business!" She retorted, slightly irritated, then smiled rather shame-facedly. "I'm sorry, I just want to spend some time alone for the moment, just hanging around, that's all."
"Will I ever see you again?" I asked.
"Maybe...!" She said & flashed a rather cheeky smile.
It was when I got into the car, that I asked that question that changed everything: "What's your name?"
Samantha. She replied. "But my friends call me Sammi! What's yours?"
"Christian." I replied back.
"Well, Nice knowing you Chris!" She said with a warm smile. "Till we meet again!"
Yeah. I thought as I drove away, not knowing it was going to be sooner than I'd thought..........
End of Chapter 1
Alternate Sammi Belongs to....Well, Her "Real Goth self"
Christian belongs to me
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/...llery/In_a_Different_Reality____by_NinjaS.jpg
And it gave me an idea to a (slightly naughty, but not over the top) story which features alternate versions of Sammi & Jimmyjames' characters ^_^
It doesn't start much as a tickle story, but it does have some strokes on someone's soles, but It's going to end with a good tickle! Promised! 😱
I hope they like it.
Chapter 1: A messy start.
Darn! I thought to myself as my small car sputtered to a stop. And my sister said she'd filled the tank up yesterday. Thanks a lot!
I was in the middle of a half grazed field of farmland, on a hot near summer's morning breeze, and I was heading to off to see Jimmy (an Old school friend who's moved to the farmland to help with his grandparents. And somehow he's managed to make some good bucks to send them & himself on a holiday cruise) And I'm going to be late to take care of their farm. Great!
I'd managed to spot someone relaxing in the field. And managed to climb over the fence to see who it was....
"Hi there! I'm kinda stuck here & I was wondering if you can....help...."
I stopped to see who I was facing....a girl was sitting on two rolls of haybails & turned her head (revealing her flashy short, yet slightly longer, greasy brown hair & blue eyeliner.
She was wearing overalls of a baggy kind & (much to my suprise & delight) barefooted!
"Hi there stranger!" She replied. "What can I be of service?"
I shuddered a bit and edged a bit closer, looking at the details of this girl.
"Well you see I've got a bit of car troubles & I was trying to see if anyone could fix my car. I can't do it alone."
"Well why not relax for a moment & sit with me?" She asked. "I don't mind some company, you can explain what might be the cause of the problem. I cool with that. I'm just a bit of a grease monkey!"
A tingle went down my spine as I walked shakely nearer, & then with a yelp, I fell! I stumbled bewtween my legs & crashed in front of bail where her feet were resting. I heard her laugh as my face came up again, with a mouthfull of grass. Then my left arm streched upwards to grab at something, and it was at this moment that my hand swept across her soft soles.
"Hey! Quihihit ihihit!" I heard her giggle even more as my fingers slipped over the arches & balls of her dirty left barefoot. "That tickles!"
It was then, that I grabbed her foot (around the arches, which causes her to give a shrieking kind of laugh) & pulled myself back to my feet.
"I'm sorry! I was just a little clumsy thats all!" I hastily apologized, (not wanting to dwell on my childhood fetish) quickly trying to pull off some reeds off my shirt & spat some grass out of my mouth.
"It's okay!" She said with a tiny grin "I don't usualy enjoy that kind of tickling. You're the first person that made me kind of enjoy this!" She stood upright, allowing her dirty toes to wiggle amongst the grass. she was about the same height as me, except for the greasy brown hair, and she had a cute smile. "Now come on & show me your car."
We walked towards the fence that I had crossed over to the see the girl, explaining what went wrong with the car, & climbed back to see the cause of the trouble.
My cock went kinda rigid as I heard her bare feet slapping on the dirt road.
"Now let's see what all this hullabaloo is about." She said as she opened the bonnet. A slight hiss came out of the car. And We went to work.
We tinkered a bit & several minutes later, I decided to check the ignition was right. She stepped to the side to be at the safe side of things & I'd turned the key.
There was a shudder & a clutter. A puff of smoke appeared out, clouding our vision & then a spurt of greasy engine oil spilled out from the car making a tiny sticky puddle....Which the girl, not looking where she was looking, accidently stepped on asking what wrong.
"EEEeeeewwwww!!!!!! Gross!" She squealed. Then she laughed to see my cheeks all blackened by the smoke.
"Great!" I groaned rubbing by face with my sleeves. Then chuckled to finaly see the girl, who was still up between her toes in an oil puddle!
Not funny! She howled. And soon we managed to solve the problem.
Then I Cleaned myself & looked at the girl, who was sitting on the fence, looking into the distance. Her overalls were stained & so were her cheeks & mostly her bare handss & feet (still under the remains of the gooey oil she'd managed to remove the worst). I wanted to clean her up, but she declined.
"Aww! Come on! I want to at least clean you up a bit, as a token of thanks for helping me repair my car. Honest!"
I'd put my hands (one holding a cloth) on her filthy feet and began cleaning her soles, which tickled her enormously.
Hahahahahahahahahahhaahahahahaha! Cut it Out silly! She giggled.
"Oh, Don't be such a baby!" I complained. "It's just a clean up!"
Soon I managed to clean up most of the mess from the rest of her body. And she was a little suprised after how clean she was.
"Hey Thanks!" She said. Now I can look like I haven't been anywhere too far away!"
"Away from what?" I asked.
"None of your business!" She retorted, slightly irritated, then smiled rather shame-facedly. "I'm sorry, I just want to spend some time alone for the moment, just hanging around, that's all."
"Will I ever see you again?" I asked.
"Maybe...!" She said & flashed a rather cheeky smile.
It was when I got into the car, that I asked that question that changed everything: "What's your name?"
Samantha. She replied. "But my friends call me Sammi! What's yours?"
"Christian." I replied back.
"Well, Nice knowing you Chris!" She said with a warm smile. "Till we meet again!"
Yeah. I thought as I drove away, not knowing it was going to be sooner than I'd thought..........
End of Chapter 1
Alternate Sammi Belongs to....Well, Her "Real Goth self"
Christian belongs to me
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