Hinata's Training

[Ravenfan1]

Im so sorry......It got really late and so i couldnt be bothered giving 100%

Well here it is.....requested by somone who i forget.....soo tired.....

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feel free to be honest. I take it as what i need improvement in.....but remember..... it is MS paint.

 

[F.L. Atlanta 10]

awesome pic to me. keep up the great work.

 

[noneya]

sweet, maybe this is the start of a flood of new naruto pics like that one for kim possible that happened a few months ago when i requested some

 

[Plague Doctor]

nice pic dude hehe really hope we'll get some naruto pics * shame shame * 😛

 

[Umojar]

Pretty good for MS Paint, I must say. Anatomy's a little off, but hey, it's MS Paint! I've done things with MS paint before, so I know that must've taken forever.

 

[TKLVR181]

*giggle* good question, how is that training? Cute puppy, and I like the background!

~K

 

[FT Genikit]

It's your art, so I'm not gonna complain. Nice display. 🙂

 

[jgracie]

That's really awesome work! =D I love the lil' puppy, too. XD

 

[Hahathna]

Ravenfan--

The illo is adorable! Nice reaction from Hinata and your Akamaru is really cute (he certainly seems to be enjoying himself too). Thank you for sharing it with us, and looking forward to what you come up with next!

 

[FeatherDaemon1]

A very nice pic, however I do have a critique of the pic. The most charming point of Hinata is her eyes. In this pic her eyes are closed with that she becomes 'generic anime girl'. Open up her eyes in ticklish surprise. She is also slightly over-endowed for Hinata. Criticism aside, your style is very good.

 

[Celtic_Emperor]

Pic recieves instant approval because of Akamaru. I've always loved the little guy. He's so cute =3

And Hinata ain't bad, herself. LOL

Approved. 😛aw:

 

[FeatherHead]

Quoting Bruce Almighty: "It's good! It's gooooooood!" Nice work!

 

[Timewarp]

A dog....now that's unusual.....yeah...

uhhh....nice pic.....5 out of 5.

 

[Big_Dogg85]

Akamaru rocks!!!

I also have to agree about the eyes critique as I too believe that her eyes make her "Hinata"... and not just the fact of the role her eyes play in the series/manga. Her eyes and sweet hair style are the foundation of her entire body, by having her eyes closed removes 1/2 of that foundation...and many generic anime characters share hair styles with more popular ones.

That being said, apparently like Vlad, I also share a big soft spot for the resident doggy Akamaru and I must applaud your use of him. The usual Hinata (Naruto series characters) pics have the tk being done by Naruto or invisible presence... the use of Akamaru was about time. Thank you! 🙂

 

[Coldeyes2]

Very cool picture RavenFan!

The background is cool; and the girl & dog are both cute. =)

 

[Ravenfan1]

A very nice pic, however I do have a critique of the pic. The most charming point of Hinata is her eyes. In this pic her eyes are closed with that she becomes 'generic anime girl'. Open up her eyes in ticklish surprise. She is also slightly over-endowed for Hinata. Criticism aside, your style is very good.

Thankyou for the honesty and yes, I too was considering keepng at least one eye open, but i was too tired. Maybe ill come back and re draw it. I was totally out of it about the time i started Akamaru ( the dog...) but yeah.

Ill probably redo the whole pic when i get my Tablet working again....
Again thanks for the comment.

 

[Ravenfan1]

Pic recieves instant approval because of Akamaru. I've always loved the little guy. He's so cute =3

And Hinata ain't bad, herself. LOL

Approved. 😛aw:

Now that you have approved it my life is complete!
hehehe.....thanks for the comment!😀

 

[Ravenfan1]

Akamaru rocks!!!

I also have to agree about the eyes critique as I too believe that her eyes make her "Hinata"... and not just the fact of the role her eyes play in the series/manga. Her eyes and sweet hair style are the foundation of her entire body, by having her eyes closed removes 1/2 of that foundation...and many generic anime characters share hair styles with more popular ones.

That being said, apparently like Vlad, I also share a big soft spot for the resident doggy Akamaru and I must applaud your use of him. The usual Hinata (Naruto series characters) pics have the tk being done by Naruto or invisible presence... the use of Akamaru was about time. Thank you! 🙂

YOUR WELCOME!😀

and since i have so many responses about the eyes, i guess ill redo this one after all.

thanks everyone.

 

[Ravenfan1]

Pretty good for MS Paint, I must say. Anatomy's a little off, but hey, it's MS Paint! I've done things with MS paint before, so I know that must've taken forever.

Trust me, If i was trying this would have been done on photoshop.
but thanks, Im gonna redo this any way so keep watching.

 

[Ravenfan1]

It's your art, so I'm not gonna complain. Nice display. 🙂

thankyou for your concern, but please do comment.
I do not take offense, so please share what you think should be changed.

 

[Ravenfan1]

Ravenfan--

The illo is adorable! Nice reaction from Hinata and your Akamaru is really cute (he certainly seems to be enjoying himself too). Thank you for sharing it with us, and looking forward to what you come up with next!

thanks. lets see if i cant get one done very soon then eh? 😀

 

[Ravenfan1]

That's really awesome work! =D I love the lil' puppy, too. XD

Thanks. appreciate it!😍