The artwork was very nicely done, and the story was not bad. The only thing I would suggest is pasting your text into a word editor so you can correct spelling errors. 🙂
@tickletheatre: Thank you. Yes your right, there were far too much mistakes in it 😱 , I edited the thread. But from now on I only take responsibility for the artwork 😛😉
@ There is definitely gonna be more stuff from me. Only not that big - cause even those three lil' pages were a hell lot of work.
But glad you liked them 🙂.