Improvements?

[Satur1n]

I like how my art seems to improve every time I create something new, however small that increment is.
But where do YOU think I can get better?

Any advice is good advice; I welcome all artistic critique.

My most recent work:
http://satur1n.deviantart.com/art/Comic-Property-Damage-303837437
http://satur1n.deviantart.com/art/SkrRn-Ribs-Grow-Back-298475323?q=gallery:satur1n/32710133&qo=0
http://satur1n.deviantart.com/art/T...11?q=in:scraps sort:time gallery:satur1n&qo=0
http://satur1n.deviantart.com/art/G...53?q=in:scraps sort:time gallery:satur1n&qo=3
http://satur1n.deviantart.com/art/G...26?q=in:scraps sort:time gallery:satur1n&qo=4
http://satur1n.deviantart.com/art/G...81?q=in:scraps sort:time gallery:satur1n&qo=5

 

[yanneilucia]

It's really hard to say. It's very good and anything I find of dislike, It would be either nitpicking or just my personal problem with the matter.

It has come to the point in which you have to either choose a much better artist then yourself and strive to beat him, or learn a yet unfamiliar drawing technique, or take professional lessons.

As for what I don't personally like looking at the images you linked (just disregard it as an opinion):

-too thin outlines, all outlines of same thickness (maybe you didn't even notice)
-awkward blend of photoshop and normal drawing in two of them
-lack of shadowing in some of them
-yoko is far the greatest image of them, but background doesn't fit in correctly (she and boots look out of place because of it)

On the other hand I must say that faces are supreme (look extremely cute and give the right sense of their feelings). Feet are very nice, but there could be more detail on them (use shadows and colours), postures are done with good sense of depth.

You should try as much with every pic as you did with Yoko.

 

[Satur1n]

It's really hard to say. It's very good and anything I find of dislike, It would be either nitpicking or just my personal problem with the matter.

It has come to the point in which you have to either choose a much better artist then yourself and strive to beat him, or learn a yet unfamiliar drawing technique, or take professional lessons.

As for what I don't personally like looking at the images you linked (just disregard it as an opinion):

-too thin outlines, all outlines of same thickness (maybe you didn't even notice)
-awkward blend of photoshop and normal drawing in two of them
-lack of shadowing in some of them
-yoko is far the greatest image of them, but background doesn't fit in correctly (she and boots look out of place because of it)

On the other hand I must say that faces are supreme (look extremely cute and give the right sense of their feelings). Feet are very nice, but there could be more detail on them (use shadows and colours), postures are done with good sense of depth.

You should try as much with every pic as you did with Yoko.

Yeah, my shading's not so good; ^_^;
I agree the lines need more variation, too.