Nice to see Jason taking an interest in something other than slicing and impaling! The pose looks okay to me, and the gal is mighty cute (I like the framing hair)... but if you want suggestions, here's one: how about having a girl on her belly, stuck half-way through a hole in a brick way where she was attempting an escape. Upper body on one side, legs and feet on the other (shown, possibly, in a cutaway view). The tickler could lounge and take his (hers, its) time, very leisurely. I am with you about stocks... that scenario has become quite predictable and tiresome.