job problems part 2 (f/m, */f)

[Raven_kirsaen1]

I have been busy and it's been a while since I can get some time, but I finished another chapter of the tickler Raven work.

In the second page be careful with the order of the last two pictures, I put two arrows to indicate this in the page.

Sorry about the text, I tried to do it in other way than the other chapters and I think the result it's worse.

Tell me what you think, I hope you like it.

 

[Low_Roads]

I was able to follow the panel order with ease! Those arrows directed the eye most effectively! Well, Yuri's having an awfully good time with her target... the first time the pair's employed tickling as a punishment (or, maybe more properly, as a warning), I believe. The back-and-forth chat illuminates much of the Tickler Raven's modus operandi, too! Meanwhile, the feathery one (he's got a lair?... this guy's starting to seem a lot like Batman!) has stumbled across a crisis his system can't solve... or can it! He seems to know this mystery cat... a furry arch-villain? We'll see!

 

[Bashiku]

Said the Raven... 'Never more'... great chapter... Please try your best in future too 😀

 

[Wii]

Hm, seems this white cat appears to be some kind of rival to the Raven.

I definitely like where the story is going, even though the first strip isn't my cup of tea. I'd love to see how deep this story goes. ^^

 

[ohstalon06]

Not my cup of tea either, but I am less opposed to F/M. I have been thinking of maybe sending in another request, but I don't know if you'd have the time.

Regardless I cannot wait to see how you continue this series.

 

[Raven_kirsaen1]

Littlebighead: I'm glad that the arrows make their work well. You're right Yuri really enjoy her new job, I think she really don't care why she is administrating the treatment:laughing: . I wasn't sure how to make the place for treatment and I thought in the idea of the lair. We'll see more of the white cat in other chapters.

Bashiku: Glad you like it, Don't worry I'll try to make better every new chapter.

Tickler21: Thanks for follow the history. Stay here for the coming chapters too. About the first strip, making the history I thought in that scene.

Skinfan87: I hope that you like the full chapter. I think that I can take care of a request now.

 

[His Divine Shadow]

Yuri's face in panel two is most entertaining, aye. What's this about white cats? I thought we were sticking to ravens. 😛 Excellent pair, aye. :happy:

 

[Raven_kirsaen1]

I'm preparing this character between some options HisDivineShadow, I hope this caharacter will make a good role in the history. Stay here for the next chapter.

 

[Bashiku]

Stay tuned for next episode of Raven's ticklish predicaments... Is white cat a fiend or old friend of raven, will Raven solve the case, will Raven actual abandon his job as a tickler? Find out in next episode...

 

[Wii]

Stay tuned for next episode of Raven's ticklish predicaments... Is white cat a fiend or old friend of raven, will Raven solve the case, will Raven actual abandon his job as a tickler? Find out in next episode...

Stop making me remember Saturday morning cartoons! xD

 

[Raven_kirsaen1]

Thanks for keep the expectation Bashiku.
Don't worry Brenan, I'll try to make something that don't remember saturday cartoons :laughing:

 

[Spud_Mobile]

I really enjoyed it, and thanks for including f/m. 🙂

 

[Raven_kirsaen1]

You're wellcome Spud_Mobile, Glad you like it.