Greetings all-
I'm the the process of writing a story. It's my first attempt at including tickling, so I'd like someone familiar with the technique to take a look at it. The editor must be open to the following:
Fanfiction (This one's a Zelda 64 fanfic)
erotic content (I actually attempted to make it just tickling as a nod to those who write stories involving pure tickling. It didn't quite work out)
urophelia (Specifically, a character is tickled until they pee)
little girl role play
embarrasment fantasies (one might say consentual humiliation)
f/f pairing
comfortable with descriptive passages (this story) and the 'hahahaha' stuff (assuming the editor would be willing to work on the follow up). I'm attempting both modes, since there seems to be a line of folks who like one or the other
...and that's just the tickle scenes... so far. The story is only half written and involves a great deal more than just tickling. I can either send just the tickling passages to the editor, or the entire thing (once it's in a solid form) if they'd like to see the rest of it. So far, the rest of the erotic parts of the story involve heavy D/s, heavy bondage, riding the edge of orgasm type stuff, f/f, m/f, humuliation, and the stuff mentioned above. There's also a plot in there somewhere.
I'm mainly looking for tips on technique. How to tweak it so the scenes entertain without becoming repetative and boring. When to extend something and when to keep it short.
If anyone is willing to take a look at the sections as I finish them (or at the whole thing when I get it together), please either post a place where I can reach them or PM me. Expect long (meaning days and perhaps a bit over a week) periods without contact. I'll be going out of my way to reach the net.
To the message board as a whole, is it permissable to post a story that includes but does not focus on tickling here? I can post the scenes separately for those interested with a link to the complete thing, if that would be preferable. This presumes fanfictions are welcome, but I seem to recall seeing multipart sailor moon and princess zelda/toadstool fics here, so it's probably not an issue. *Nods respectfully to the referenced authors*
Lastly, does anyone know what a fantasy style castle chamber that *doesn't* have a window would be lit with? Torches, I'm guessing. Any history buffs around to confirm?
-Mark Reed
I'm the the process of writing a story. It's my first attempt at including tickling, so I'd like someone familiar with the technique to take a look at it. The editor must be open to the following:
Fanfiction (This one's a Zelda 64 fanfic)
erotic content (I actually attempted to make it just tickling as a nod to those who write stories involving pure tickling. It didn't quite work out)
urophelia (Specifically, a character is tickled until they pee)
little girl role play
embarrasment fantasies (one might say consentual humiliation)
f/f pairing
comfortable with descriptive passages (this story) and the 'hahahaha' stuff (assuming the editor would be willing to work on the follow up). I'm attempting both modes, since there seems to be a line of folks who like one or the other
...and that's just the tickle scenes... so far. The story is only half written and involves a great deal more than just tickling. I can either send just the tickling passages to the editor, or the entire thing (once it's in a solid form) if they'd like to see the rest of it. So far, the rest of the erotic parts of the story involve heavy D/s, heavy bondage, riding the edge of orgasm type stuff, f/f, m/f, humuliation, and the stuff mentioned above. There's also a plot in there somewhere.
I'm mainly looking for tips on technique. How to tweak it so the scenes entertain without becoming repetative and boring. When to extend something and when to keep it short.
If anyone is willing to take a look at the sections as I finish them (or at the whole thing when I get it together), please either post a place where I can reach them or PM me. Expect long (meaning days and perhaps a bit over a week) periods without contact. I'll be going out of my way to reach the net.
To the message board as a whole, is it permissable to post a story that includes but does not focus on tickling here? I can post the scenes separately for those interested with a link to the complete thing, if that would be preferable. This presumes fanfictions are welcome, but I seem to recall seeing multipart sailor moon and princess zelda/toadstool fics here, so it's probably not an issue. *Nods respectfully to the referenced authors*
Lastly, does anyone know what a fantasy style castle chamber that *doesn't* have a window would be lit with? Torches, I'm guessing. Any history buffs around to confirm?
-Mark Reed
