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This is a very unique first person story for us. It is Claire Littleton's viewpoint. This is a past extract from LOst. NO giving us any information from the future, only comment on story,please. Also please, tell us if it's any good. Our Futurama Story won't be ready till September. Love,
Heather and Anna (rare is it that we write this at the beginning of post, in fact this might be a first!)


Things had gone so terrible wrong (We are only midway in the season!!!!!). They were all gone. It was just Samuel, Sharon and me. The words of the psychic kept haunting me. Hurley, KAte, Zahid, Sawyer, Jack (our leader), John Locke, Michael and his son and Sharon's brother were all missing. So was Kim and her Korean husband.... and Charlie. Was it wrong to be more worried about Charlie then everyone else, especially Michael's son. Sharon was a mess, a beautiful mess but a mess nonetheless. "You must raise this child alone!" declared the voice. After finding Danielle's body, our nototrious French woman, things had gotten from bad to worse. Now only Sharon, Samuel and I remained. Some part of me feared Danielle's psychotic husband who attacked me and Charlie a.k.a Lance had got them. But then Zahid had killed him or so we thought. What if the monster ate them? What if the monster came after us? Sharon is so nervous and scared we just cuddle against each other. I must stay calm for both of them. After all I am a New South Wales Girl. A girl from the new millenium's wonder city. But then I worry, what if it all goes wrong?
"Hello there!"
C: "Who are you?" A:"I'm Alex, what's your name?" C:"I'm Claire Littleton and this is Sharon!" A:"Well I’m very glad to meet you both! Would you like to come with me? Because the others might be coming. They murdered my mother." S:"We're sorry! My brother and all the others got lost too!" A:"You mean the old man with the knife and his group?" C:"You saw them, where?" A:"COme I'll shall you!" S:"Can we trust her?" C: "We have to, Sharon!" S:"We've been walked for hours, where.......AHHHHHHHH!" C: "SHaron....AHHHHHHH!" A:"I got you both know"
Some time later
C:"Let us go!" S:"What have you done with our friends?" A:"They all were captured but the pretty girl, Kate. I keep her here in the catacombs. The others can't find us. You're pretty, Claire." C:"Where's my baby? Where's Samuel?" A:"He's here, see? You can take care of him, but as of know, I claim you both." S: "You can't do that, you psychoticHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA!" A:" I see poor Sharon has tickling armpits. Tickle, tickle, tickle on your bare underarms." C:"Alex, stop! Sharon doesn't deserve this, neither of us do. Release us, please and given us back our cloHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" A:"Boy, Claire has really ticklish ribs. Tickle, tickle, tickle." C:"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA" A:"'slurp'slurp'" S:" "puff" get your sick hands off her ribs "puff and your sick tongue out of her naHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" A:" defense means tickling and boy Sharon your ribs are almost as bad!"
Sorry its very late
Love,
Heather and Anna
 
aww, september? eh, i guess i can wait till then. the story was good, although the dialouge confused me at first as i havent seen lost and don't know the characters. but what i did understand was good, although a bit short. nice work and i look forward to your next one.
 
How does everyone feel about a story involving a multiverse with Heroes/Lost/Buffy/Roswell and Smallville?
Love,
Heather and Anna
 
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