me need you to choose my idea.

[putri@nila]

hello there, i just finished my first mini novel, i mean mini tickling novel and i will post it to the stroy section forum after the proof read progress finish.

i'm willing to make my 2nd mini novel, but i'm a little bit confused. so i just need ppls here to choose one between this two:

1. a rich bitch who like clubbing in the night club get tickle because she like fluttering every man in the club.

2. a rich, spoiled, arrogant girl who study in "somewhere asia" get tickle by a women striper dancer in snow season.

well, i hope you want to help me.

and if you don't mind, i wanna know how to make a tickling story more intense than usual, what you expect or how to do it.

thx

regard


putri nila.

 

[FeatherDaemon1]

hello there, i just finished my first mini novel, i mean mini tickling novel and i will post it to the stroy section forum after the proof read progress finish.

i'm willing to make my 2nd mini novel, but i'm a little bit confused. so i just need ppls here to choose one between this two:

1. a rich bitch who like clubbing in the night club get tickle because she like fluttering every man in the club.

2. a rich, spoiled, arrogant girl who study in "somewhere asia" get tickle by a women striper dancer in snow season.

well, i hope you want to help me.

and if you don't mind, i wanna know how to make a tickling story more intense than usual, what you expect or how to do it.

thx

regard


putri nila.

I think that the second idea has some nice potential.

I have read your first story. You already have many good writing techniques which add to the intensity. I would suggest to practice working with your style first. Become a master of your style. In addition, read other stories and incorporate what truly strikes you into your writing. Don't attempt too much too soon. Believe me, you are already on the path.

 

[putri@nila]

wuaaaooooo thank you. i got advise from the master again 🙂