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Mia's Techno-Tickle Dreamscape (part 1.0)

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had to cut this part in half cause its so big and its almost 2 a.m. now.
other half up real soon.

Mia's Techno-Tickle Dreamscape (part 1.0)


Falling, Mia was falling in a dark pit. While she was waiting to hit her feather laden trampolien, she practiced a few flips. She hit the trampolien 5 times before coming to a stop.
She blinked, and in a snap she was in her dominatrix tickling suit. She was dressed in all bright red tight leather. there were circle holes where the leather should've covered her armpits,
tummy, ribs, knees, and of course her feet were bare. There were also holes where her plump breasts would be well exposed. 16 red leather ropes that were 6 feet long were attached to the back
of her outfit, and on each tip tthere were 2 stiif feathers. She glided an inch off the featherduster floor, so everywhere she went in her tickle chamber, she would have her soles feathered. She glided through
a short tunnel gigling all the way and stoped to look at the walls which displayed stats on all sides about todays tickle victim, Avril Lavigne. It showed pictures of every part of her bare body, her
biography, personal secrets and other detailed details. She continued through the tunnel till she reached the mouth of a massive cavern. It was far as the eye can see and cotained females, celebrity
and not, strapped in every piece of bondage equipment imaginable. Standing at attention next to her, was a life size version of Teddy, except he was made of silk cloth, had a black general's uniform on
with medals all over that were in the shape of every type of tickling instrument. He still had the same black beret on, with a feather on front, the true symbol of tickling, but this time he was very alive.
When Mia glided to him, he saluted and said in a strong, yet gentle voice, "Tickle slave #390675 is in Virgin Chamber #1, ready and waitingfor you to break her, Malady."
"Very well, thank you, TT, what would i do without you?" replied Mia. "You would have more work and less tickling to do, Malady" said Teddy.
She glided through the main hall with women in stocks all along the sides, their bare soles facing the center of the hall. "Good evening, ladies" commented Mia. The 200 ladies in the hall all started at once to beg her for freedom.
Some wept, some were silent, and most begged.She glided through, gigling as the feathers stroked her soles. All of a sudden the 16 "ropes" on her back came to life and tickled the soles on each side of the hall as she passed them.
8 feather-ropes stroked each sole for a second as she passed, and laughter and giggles erupted through the hall, better than any music in reality. Mia tried to stiffle her own own giggles to drink in the sound waves of the torture.
15 minutes and 400 soles later, she reached the end of the all, and entered the Virgin Chamber #1. Avril Lavigne looked up from her spread eagle position on a table lined with feathers. "Who the fuck are you?!?" screamed Avril.
"I'm Mistress Mia and you are in Virgin Chamber #1." said Mia, calmly. "I'm not a virgin, you dumb bitch, now let me out of here!" ordered Avril. "First off, you'll regret that rude remark, and second, this is where i break you.
This were i pop your "tickling" cherry, so to speak." said Mia. "Wha-What? your not gonna......." gasped Avril. Mia nodded with an evil grin, "Do some lung exercises, Ms. Lavigne, cause your going to laugh your head off."

END PART 1.0

feedback please
 
That was great!

That was amazing! Great work my friend, I can't wait for the rest!
 
thank you, more to come, soon.

p.s. thanks for making your first post dedicated to giving my story props.

more feedback, please.
 
Bump time. That is a stupendous start Big Norm. Please post more of the story.
 
surprised people wanted more, it started to get a little repeditive. anyway, i'll pick a celeb or 2 that i have the hots for lately and write a smashing story, ok?
 
Still a great tale! WEll done M.C/B.N
Love,
Heather and Anna
P.s What think you of our Carrie story?
 
thanks, i'll make a sequel of it for sure, any sugestions for a victim?

anna and heather, i'll make another charmed and a willow and tara story for ya, been itching to write some more, just can't get enough of them.

also, i've finally seen the buffy episode where Tara dies, and when Willow goes on a rampage, CRAZY good episodes, though i cried like a baby, lol.

p.s. i'll read your carrie story asap when i get a chance, and let ya know what i think.
 
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AWESOME idea, but its shouldnt be a dream... it should be some kind of quazi, female ruled hell, and Mia should have unlimited satan esque powers... then you could base the story around a group or a single female who was trying to escape... It would be a bloody goldmine!! Heh, well if you want to you'll have to hurry up, cause i'm starting to want to write it! 😛
... lol just a thought.
P.s. Dude, your quote about the duck.... Utter genius. 😀
 
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thanks, i love the duck quote too.

now, with the hell place, sorta like transport the celebs there, have mia have her fun, maybe even make them learn a lesson? like for example, tickle wynono rider till she promises to never shoplift again? what exactly do you mean?
sounds like a great idea, just wanna know exactly how to fit this quazi-hell into everything.
 
lol that would be fairly amusing! Mia just came as such a sinister character, the way she randomly tickled hundreds of people without turning an eye, with big tentacle like appendages, giggling malevolently all the while... Genius! Now as to more on the hell idea... She should have 'tickle demons' who can tickle others while she's kicking Avril's ass or whoever, and... OR... WOW! Then she could try to invade earth! HAHA! A legion of tickle demons erupt from a rift under beverly hills, find Britney spears having a party with all her A list invites... Dynamite! Then Mia takes over hollywood, enslaving all its talent (pffft!) and plots to dominate the world... Ooooh i smell an Oscar!!!
 
hhmmm... i'm thinking, mia, ruler of another dimension, kidnaps celebrities, and tickles them for her sadistic pleasure. gonna keep the 100's of tortured ticklees.

sounds good, i'll ponder over it all, any more ideas?
 
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