The_Kev1
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Hey all,
I've been brainstorming some scenarios for tickle stories, most of which just stay "concepts". So it got me thinking, let's all post some quick, one-off micro-stories and see how long we can keep it going. The goal is to present a scenario that's as lucid, but concise as possible. Give feedback to the story above you and write your story in italics.
I'll start:
"They told you not to go in the forrest but you never listen! Oh well, who are they?
You run freely through the forbidden Forrest when all of a sudden your feet aren't getting as much traction. You quickly realize that you're sinking into quicksand!
In a panick, you look for something to grab onto to pull your self out....
What was that? It feels like something is taking your shies and socks of...
Eh... Ehhehehehehehehehehehe!
You giggle as some unseen creatures start tickling your feet driving you crazy! It feels like twenty little claws skittering around both feet! You have to get out of this! What happens when your whole body goes under?
You can't bare the thought. Why did you go shirtless today?!
Just then you see some branches hanging down from a nearby tree! Desperately you grab hold and start pulling your self out.
Just then you feel something pulling against your ankles while still tickling your feet
"No Stahahahahahahahap!!!!" you shriek and pull harder against the unseen thing.
All of a sudden, some vines come from out of the tree. You see them moving toward your bare and stretched out stomach, sides and armpits!
"Oh that's just wro-AAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!"
I've been brainstorming some scenarios for tickle stories, most of which just stay "concepts". So it got me thinking, let's all post some quick, one-off micro-stories and see how long we can keep it going. The goal is to present a scenario that's as lucid, but concise as possible. Give feedback to the story above you and write your story in italics.
I'll start:
"They told you not to go in the forrest but you never listen! Oh well, who are they?
You run freely through the forbidden Forrest when all of a sudden your feet aren't getting as much traction. You quickly realize that you're sinking into quicksand!
In a panick, you look for something to grab onto to pull your self out....
What was that? It feels like something is taking your shies and socks of...
Eh... Ehhehehehehehehehehehe!
You giggle as some unseen creatures start tickling your feet driving you crazy! It feels like twenty little claws skittering around both feet! You have to get out of this! What happens when your whole body goes under?
You can't bare the thought. Why did you go shirtless today?!
Just then you see some branches hanging down from a nearby tree! Desperately you grab hold and start pulling your self out.
Just then you feel something pulling against your ankles while still tickling your feet
"No Stahahahahahahahap!!!!" you shriek and pull harder against the unseen thing.
All of a sudden, some vines come from out of the tree. You see them moving toward your bare and stretched out stomach, sides and armpits!
"Oh that's just wro-AAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!"