After godawful time of lurking around TT, I've decided to, ehm, "contribute".
Here's my first story, including loose Star Wars- ties.
Beginner's rubbish, almost readable, or something else? I acknowledge possible molestation of english languace, I donät speak it natively.
Bashing allowed, as long as it can been seen at least a bit constructive 🙂
'''Lying on the hovering table in the center of a small prison cell,bound from her wrists and having her feet secured with some kind of forcefield -completely immobile- Vella had time to think about it all. About the mission. About the torments her captors without a doubt were currectly preparing for her. Her armor and other clothing was taken away leaving her completely naked. She was a human, born in a cargo hold of gigantic trade ship where her mother was hiding as a stowaway. She was still young. Her hair was black and long, her skin slightly tanned. Her body was slim, in a very good shape. She looked like a nice girl, and if one wouldn't know better, she could never be guessed to be a bounty hunter.
In the middle of her currect mission, when she already had broken in the ship of her target, unexpected security unit detected and caught her.
Her thoughts were interrupted with a hissing sound, as cell's doors were opened. Vella managed to turn her head enough to see a blue skinned female twi'lek enter.
Twi'lek circled around the table, examinig Vella from feet to head. "My name is Sienna" twi'lek said. "I have a pleasure to be your interrogator tonight. The pleasure, of course, will be mine and only mine. You should make things as quick and comfortable as possible, so I advice you to talk before we even begin." Vella made no gesture. She was widely known of her loyalty to her employers, and she would not let one painful night here or there spoil her reputation. "I've been tortured before" she thought "I've endured a six hour session with an interrogation droid. This can't be worse than it." Sienna spoke again "You attempted to harm, possibly even kill my master, Sosta Injo. We would be glad to know who hired you and why." Sienna looked Vella straight in the eyes seeing that she had prepared herself for any torture Sienna might have in store for her. "Perfect." Sienna whispered to herself "I would have made a girl like that scream for mercy anyway."
She reache for a pouch she had hanging on her belt. She pulled out - for Vella's great amazement - two feathers. "I don't understand" she thought, trying to hide her surprised reaction "what is she going to do? Make me sneeze?". Sienna came closer and closer, positioning another weather to smooth skin of her left underarm. Vella felt strange sensation - she was a tough bounty hunter, she had never been tickled before - but managed to stay completely motionless. Sienna begun to move the feather downwards. Vella started to wiggle. Laughter tried to burst out from her mouth, but she held it inside. She didn't feel comfortable, not at all. As the feathermade it's on her belly, she let out first squeals. "Oh, no use to hold it inside" Sienna said. "Let it out! Let it out and beg!" Vella found the feather, which now tormented her belly button unstandable. She wiggled, shrieked silently, attempting to break free from her restrains. It was no use. "Time to get a bit more - persuasive" Sienna said, and attacked Vellas ribs with the second feather as the first one still danced at her button. Vella let out first burst of her melodic laughter. Sienna smiled as she watched her helpless captive struggling on the table, now giggling. After 15 minutes- which had felt like hours to Vella- Sienna lift the feathers. "Considered talking yet, darling?" Sienna asked. Vella remained silent. This was torture, but she would not talk! She would not say a word!
Hearing no response, Sienna begun her next brutal assault. With her ten fingers, she relentlessy tickled sides an ribs of Vella. Poor girl begun to scream. Scream and laugh, high and loud. There was no escape from those sadistic hands, but her body trembled like it was dying. Unfortunately for Vella it wasn't. It was beyond her control, She couldn't stand it anymore, not for a second. "Aahahahaa! Aaah! Nooo!" "What?" Sienna whisperd in ear of her suffering victim "What did you say?" "Ahahahaa! Haa-a-ave mercyy! Aahaha! I hahaha I can't take iiit! Ahahaha" "Then tell me what I want to know" "Nooo-ho-ho-ho! Haahaha! Hahahaa! Please!"
Next hours were hell for Vella. She prayed, begged, screamed... But nothing would stop her restless tormentor. However, Vella could not be broken. Sienna decided that it was time for the final attack. She left Vella's ribs alone, but exhausted bounty hunter could not rest for long. Slowly, Sienna's fingers started to rub bottoms of Vella's feet. It tickled. Worse than ever. "Nooo! Oh NOOOO!" she shrieked in panic. "Not there! you can't do this to me! PLEASE!" Sienna hadn't even started yet! She took her time, intensified tickling all the time. "AAHAHAHAA! I HAAHAH I HAHA I CAAHAAHAA AHAAHAA!" Vella screamed, almost unable to even breath. "I'M GONAAHAHAA DIEE! AAH OOOOHOHOO! NOT THEREE!"
Sienna tickled her from between her toes. Forcefield prevented any movement. She was helpless. And going insane! Every minute seemed like an eternity in hell. "AAHAHA! HEEHEHEE! I TAAHAHAA! HAAHAHAA I HAHAHAA EEHEEHEEHEE!" "You what?" Sienna asked, intesifying tickling every time Vella tried to speak. She was going to make this last as long as possible. "I wa-AAHAH! I WAA-AA! STOOP! Was... Sent by AAHAHAA! EHEHEE! By Setar the Hutt! STOP IIT! SETAR THE HUTT! She want to seize Sosta's spice market! PLEASE STOOP!"
"Are you sure?" Sienna asked and continued the torture, teasing her soles for next ten minutes. She didn't change her confession, and Sienna stopped. She went to a monitor on the wall, and spoke to the speaker, telling everything Vella had revealed.
She returned by Vella and started speaking "Thank you for co-operating. Now we shall strenghten the security around the boss and sent our own assassins after your employer." Vella didn't care. She thanked the stars that the torture had ceased. "And talking about you" Sienna continued "I've gotten to like your company during these hours. You are not going anywhere from that table. I take you to my private cabin and have even more fun. I haven't used my custom tickle droids for ages, this gives me a perfect chance to test their calibration. And of course, me and my sisters need some past time back home. I'm sorry, but you are too dangerous to be freed, yet too wonderfully ticklish to kill. Let's go, there's lot of laughter left to laugh tonight!"
Other prisoners could hear Vella's horrified shouts from the corridor as Sienna brought her away. "Kill me! Please! I'll do anything, just don't tickle me anymore! Have mercy, mercy..." Few hours later they could hear tainted, unnatural voices from somewhere. It wasn't laughter. It was beyond laughter. It was sound of pure torture.'''
Here's my first story, including loose Star Wars- ties.
Beginner's rubbish, almost readable, or something else? I acknowledge possible molestation of english languace, I donät speak it natively.
Bashing allowed, as long as it can been seen at least a bit constructive 🙂
'''Lying on the hovering table in the center of a small prison cell,bound from her wrists and having her feet secured with some kind of forcefield -completely immobile- Vella had time to think about it all. About the mission. About the torments her captors without a doubt were currectly preparing for her. Her armor and other clothing was taken away leaving her completely naked. She was a human, born in a cargo hold of gigantic trade ship where her mother was hiding as a stowaway. She was still young. Her hair was black and long, her skin slightly tanned. Her body was slim, in a very good shape. She looked like a nice girl, and if one wouldn't know better, she could never be guessed to be a bounty hunter.
In the middle of her currect mission, when she already had broken in the ship of her target, unexpected security unit detected and caught her.
Her thoughts were interrupted with a hissing sound, as cell's doors were opened. Vella managed to turn her head enough to see a blue skinned female twi'lek enter.
Twi'lek circled around the table, examinig Vella from feet to head. "My name is Sienna" twi'lek said. "I have a pleasure to be your interrogator tonight. The pleasure, of course, will be mine and only mine. You should make things as quick and comfortable as possible, so I advice you to talk before we even begin." Vella made no gesture. She was widely known of her loyalty to her employers, and she would not let one painful night here or there spoil her reputation. "I've been tortured before" she thought "I've endured a six hour session with an interrogation droid. This can't be worse than it." Sienna spoke again "You attempted to harm, possibly even kill my master, Sosta Injo. We would be glad to know who hired you and why." Sienna looked Vella straight in the eyes seeing that she had prepared herself for any torture Sienna might have in store for her. "Perfect." Sienna whispered to herself "I would have made a girl like that scream for mercy anyway."
She reache for a pouch she had hanging on her belt. She pulled out - for Vella's great amazement - two feathers. "I don't understand" she thought, trying to hide her surprised reaction "what is she going to do? Make me sneeze?". Sienna came closer and closer, positioning another weather to smooth skin of her left underarm. Vella felt strange sensation - she was a tough bounty hunter, she had never been tickled before - but managed to stay completely motionless. Sienna begun to move the feather downwards. Vella started to wiggle. Laughter tried to burst out from her mouth, but she held it inside. She didn't feel comfortable, not at all. As the feathermade it's on her belly, she let out first squeals. "Oh, no use to hold it inside" Sienna said. "Let it out! Let it out and beg!" Vella found the feather, which now tormented her belly button unstandable. She wiggled, shrieked silently, attempting to break free from her restrains. It was no use. "Time to get a bit more - persuasive" Sienna said, and attacked Vellas ribs with the second feather as the first one still danced at her button. Vella let out first burst of her melodic laughter. Sienna smiled as she watched her helpless captive struggling on the table, now giggling. After 15 minutes- which had felt like hours to Vella- Sienna lift the feathers. "Considered talking yet, darling?" Sienna asked. Vella remained silent. This was torture, but she would not talk! She would not say a word!
Hearing no response, Sienna begun her next brutal assault. With her ten fingers, she relentlessy tickled sides an ribs of Vella. Poor girl begun to scream. Scream and laugh, high and loud. There was no escape from those sadistic hands, but her body trembled like it was dying. Unfortunately for Vella it wasn't. It was beyond her control, She couldn't stand it anymore, not for a second. "Aahahahaa! Aaah! Nooo!" "What?" Sienna whisperd in ear of her suffering victim "What did you say?" "Ahahahaa! Haa-a-ave mercyy! Aahaha! I hahaha I can't take iiit! Ahahaha" "Then tell me what I want to know" "Nooo-ho-ho-ho! Haahaha! Hahahaa! Please!"
Next hours were hell for Vella. She prayed, begged, screamed... But nothing would stop her restless tormentor. However, Vella could not be broken. Sienna decided that it was time for the final attack. She left Vella's ribs alone, but exhausted bounty hunter could not rest for long. Slowly, Sienna's fingers started to rub bottoms of Vella's feet. It tickled. Worse than ever. "Nooo! Oh NOOOO!" she shrieked in panic. "Not there! you can't do this to me! PLEASE!" Sienna hadn't even started yet! She took her time, intensified tickling all the time. "AAHAHAHAA! I HAAHAH I HAHA I CAAHAAHAA AHAAHAA!" Vella screamed, almost unable to even breath. "I'M GONAAHAHAA DIEE! AAH OOOOHOHOO! NOT THEREE!"
Sienna tickled her from between her toes. Forcefield prevented any movement. She was helpless. And going insane! Every minute seemed like an eternity in hell. "AAHAHA! HEEHEHEE! I TAAHAHAA! HAAHAHAA I HAHAHAA EEHEEHEEHEE!" "You what?" Sienna asked, intesifying tickling every time Vella tried to speak. She was going to make this last as long as possible. "I wa-AAHAH! I WAA-AA! STOOP! Was... Sent by AAHAHAA! EHEHEE! By Setar the Hutt! STOP IIT! SETAR THE HUTT! She want to seize Sosta's spice market! PLEASE STOOP!"
"Are you sure?" Sienna asked and continued the torture, teasing her soles for next ten minutes. She didn't change her confession, and Sienna stopped. She went to a monitor on the wall, and spoke to the speaker, telling everything Vella had revealed.
She returned by Vella and started speaking "Thank you for co-operating. Now we shall strenghten the security around the boss and sent our own assassins after your employer." Vella didn't care. She thanked the stars that the torture had ceased. "And talking about you" Sienna continued "I've gotten to like your company during these hours. You are not going anywhere from that table. I take you to my private cabin and have even more fun. I haven't used my custom tickle droids for ages, this gives me a perfect chance to test their calibration. And of course, me and my sisters need some past time back home. I'm sorry, but you are too dangerous to be freed, yet too wonderfully ticklish to kill. Let's go, there's lot of laughter left to laugh tonight!"
Other prisoners could hear Vella's horrified shouts from the corridor as Sienna brought her away. "Kill me! Please! I'll do anything, just don't tickle me anymore! Have mercy, mercy..." Few hours later they could hear tainted, unnatural voices from somewhere. It wasn't laughter. It was beyond laughter. It was sound of pure torture.'''
