my first tickle drawing */f

[captain bender]

Hey everyone,

this is indeed the first tickle related drawing ive done. i think i would benefit from some good constructive criticism (i still havent gotten the hands and feet right, but theyre there this time.) its kind of a fantasy piece, the lee is a typical fantasy barmaid, and the ler is an elf, of indeterminable gender.


Cap

 

[Ninjaboo]

I love this drawing! You really should draw more! ((And scan them quickly so I can see them and not make me wait like the meanie you are! :teehee🙂) Yay drawings for Lexie! :ggrin:

I give you stars!
:bluestar::greenstar:redstar::yellowsta​

 

[synapss]

Good stuff for a first try! That poor girl is too ticklish to be a bar wench. They have to be able to deal with a little slap n' tickle without spilling ale everywhere.

I know what you mean about the hands and feet, they are difficult to get right. But you show promise. Keep it up!

 

[Featherdemon]

Good work - takes a lot of courage to post first time. well done.

 

[The Bandito]

Whoa Cap!

Digging it. The bar maid theme is always good for a few laughs!

You draw well. Don't worry too much about the hands and feet - those are pretty damn tough to get right (I still struggle with them on each pic). But the drawing is really good.

At this point my best advice is to draw and post more. Your skillz will improve with each pic, and the community will benefit from another skilled artist contributing content!

^^

B

 

[FeatherDaemon1]

I have no drawing talent so you're are light years ahead of me. It's very good. I like the facial expression. The forearms are a little off proportionally. I would also try to work a little more of her figure through the dress. The inanimate objects cups, tray, etc. are very well done. Good job!!

 

[captain bender]

wow. thank you everyone for the words of encouragement.
lexi- im sure you'll get to see more drawings. and chances are you'll get to see them before anyone else.
bit - thanks a lot. the barmaid thing came to me while working on a d and d campaign. but id agree, shes far too ticklish for bar-maid-ery.
feathers - yeah, i suppose there was some courage involved, but im sure most of it was shear attention *****-age. thanks for the kind words, ive always been a big fan.
mr. dito - thanks man. glad you dig it. i assure you, this isnt the last pic you'll see from me. thanks for the advice and maybe someday my skillz, too, will be able to pay the billz.
featherdaemon - thanks for the constructive criticism, it is duely noted. and i reduced the size of her forearms a few times before that. she started out looking like a female popeye. im glad the facial expression wasto your liking as well.

thanks all,
Cap