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My own She-Ra tickle fiction part one:Bow bewitched

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Here is the first part of my own She-ra tickle story.Yatsabel's one was excellent,so mine will be certainly less good.But I hope a few of you will like it.
This part is M/F.

This afternoon,in the planet Etheria,Princess Adora,the chief of the great Rebellion against the Evil Horde's armies was asleep a tree in her scecret hideout in the Whispering Woods.What a surprise when she awakaned to see her hands tied behind the tree and her bare feet tied together.She begun to panic but the presence of her friend;the archer Bow,reassured her a little bit."What does this little game mean"she asked him,half angry,half laughing."Nothing,except I wanted to tie you up to tickle you without letting you escape".In fact,adora was so ticklish she escaped each time her friend tried to tickle her and when he reached to catch her,she struggled so much he couldn't get through totally safe.But he never tied her up and this idea and this idea scared her.Bow begun to attack her ribs,making her burst out laughing.
"HAHAHASTOPHIHIYOUREMADHAHA"."Stop it?OK,but with onre condition"."HAHAHAWHICHONEHAHAH".At this moment,a red flash came in Bow's eyes,the same flash than in Shadow Weaver's, the sorceress of the Evil Horde."Give me the true identity of She-Ra"he answered with hate in his voice while he stopped the torture.Then,Adora understood the truth:Shadow Weaver had cast a spell to Bow and she used him to know the the true identity of the Princess of Power who helped the rebellion to fight the Horde and who was Adora herself,which only a few persons knew,even in the Rebels's side."You know I can't do that.It's for our all security"she cried."The truth is you had never trust me.But believe me,I'm going to make you talk!Now,Dear Princess,let's see if your tummy is as sensitive as your ribs".Then,he begun to scratch her tummy during ten minutes.Then,despite Adora's supplications and her attempts to come him down to reason,he begun to tickle her soles,,wich made her yell and burst into tears.After fifteen minutes of this treatment,she surrendered."IMSHERA"she yelled."Really?what an interesting new.Hordak,th Evil Horde's lord,will be glad to know it".
"Adora"a voice called and two Adora's friends,Glimmer,a young girl with long purple hair and Kowl,a funny big-belled bir,came from the forest.Bow escaped to their astonishment and they were even more astonished to see Adora to find Adora tied to a tree.They untied her and she summed up the entire story.,except the fact she was She-Ra,which Kowl knew but Glimmer didn't.Once the young girl was send to find the archer,Adora confessed the truth to Kowl
Then,she heard a voice call her in her own mind.It was the Sorceress who lived in Eternia,the same planet in which lived He-Man,Adora,s twin brother."Bow have been bewitched by Shadow Weaver but if you find a way to distract his attention,i can cast him a spell wich will cancel Shadow Weaver's one and and make him forget all you had to confess to him But be careful:you mustn't use violenceagainst him because if you do,he will become cefinitively to Horde's side".Adora begun to think about it and an idea came to her mind:Bow was as ticklish as her and finally,it was an excellent way to fight him without using force.But under Adora's form,she couldn't hold him down.Then;she grabbed her sword and shouted:"By the Honor of Greyskull,I am She-Ra".Then,she became She-Ra,the most powerfull Woman in the universe.
 
nice start, cant wait for part 2- i hope a few more female rebels e.g. she-ra, glimmer and angella and horde members e.g. catra get foot tickled

heman2045
 
Hello,He-man2045.Thank you for the feedback.She-ra and Glimmer will be tickled in the sequel of my story but they will take part of it mostly as ticklers.Catra will take part in it only as a tickler but another Horde Woman will be tickled.For Angela,I'm sorry but she doesn't take part in the story.
 
It's a good start. My suggestion would be to try and stretch the story out more with more detail to the story. A strong story background gives for a great tickle story, I think. Good luck with part two.
 
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