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Necra cruel to Laurel (f/f, mini-comic)

Khali

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This was my entry for Sozokureed's 'Cruelty To Angels' contest. It features Reed's lovely angelic character Laurel in a bit of 'torturous peril'...at the hands of my original Egyptian-themed character Necra (or at least a 'version' of her) in a fitting dungeon somewhere.

2 pages...

The first page is actually a set of supplemental panels leading up the main image (page 2).
#1 - Necra, with a small smirk, coming up to the chained Laurel and holding up the strange metal glove/claw she's wearing on her left hand.
#2 - Laurel looks fearful as thin blades 'shak' out of the claw's fingers right in front of her eyes...this might hurt...
#3 - Laurel, eyes getting even wider, looks shocked and in terror as feathered barbs and plumes 'thup' out of the blade shafts in front of her face...this WILL 'hurt'!

Trying to put a bit of suspense, then fear, then full-blown surprise/shock/terror as the scene unfolds unexpectedly to lead into the real (tickle) 'torture', which is...

The second page is the main image, showing full-body shots of poor Laurel strung up by chains to her wrists and one of her fancy high heels into a very uncomfortable looking position. Not to mention a few other bondage...er...BANDAGES (heh, was Necra trying to mummify Laurel before the latter was tickled to death? ). Or, at least, it would be uncomfortable if Necra wasn't slashing the 'blades' of her metallic glove/claw against Laurel's smooth belly and sides...those ticklish feather-fingers might be as painful as blades to the ticklish angel. ^^

Necra, of course, is enjoying it as she stands there posing. And is that a small viper of some sort also getting into the act, lapping Laurel's inner (raised) leg?

A few random notes:
-Obviously Laurel's outfit fits the...situation.
-No, I have no idea HOW Necra's metallic skirt there stays on.
-Also on Necra, I was planning on her wings being more Horus-like, but the focus here is poor Laurel anyway. ^^
-Background is kinda iffy...eh, the characters are the main parts.
-A possible followup was going to involve a facet of that pose and, perhaps, Necra jealous of Laurel's fancy heels (though Nec's snake-themed ones aren't too shabby either ) and a different tickle target.

(as usual, linear versions of both pages are attached as well)

BTW, check out Sozokureed's DA gallery if you haven't before for some VERY nice artwork (non-tickling though). Laurel of course belongs to him.

Kh
 

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Holy Fantastic Feathery Fingers!!!!!!!

Wow...

I mean W O W.

First of all the detail is amazing. I love the backgrounds, and the care you put into the outfits. I love the set up page and that moment of dawning comprehension when she realizes what is about to happen.

And, of course, the tickle action is wonderful.

As a long time fan of your work, I gotta say - this is just delightful.

Loveit. Absolutely LOVE it!

Best,

Bandito
 
Keen, fantasy-inducing, costuming... spare, but well distributed; perfect for a pair of fanciful winged females and a feathered attack! Much rich shading (the fully filled version provides good focus), particularly effective in the columned, heiroglyphed setting! Laurel's sweaty anxiety is a fine build-up to the tickling panel! I'd like to see a complete story done this way, Khali! Your grasp of comic continuity is strong and quite pleasing!
 
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That is so awesome, Khali! The last frame of the first page is absolutely perfect. And of course, page 2 is as well. 😉
 
Great piece of work! I also just love the knee-bending effect of the Feathery fingers! Gives me all sorts of ideas! lol! Magnificent work! 🙂
 
Very beautifully drawn. There isn't a person on this forum with a style close to yours.
Personally i think it's one of your best in quite a while.
I'm not sure wether i like the coloured one over the black and white though. Both have something.
 
Bandito:
Heh, again, thanks much. And again, I adored making both these outfits and (Laurel's) fitting expressions for this set. 😉

Tickler Dae:
Thank you. ^^

Littlebighead:
Much thanx for all the feedback there. I know the costumes are a bit skimpy but, eh, this is torture, and they still fit the themes (Egyptian and 'victim' 😉 ). As for a full comic...I don't know if I could pull one off, really. Tho the 'suspense' DID work here as a buildup. 🙂

Sammi-Chan:
Hee, hee...yeah, that final panel of page 1 just says it all...hopefully pefectly (?) setup the following panel/page. ^^

Feathers:
Heh, well, she'd HAVE to be squirming if she's ticklish and has 5 feathery 'blades' (and one little forked tongue) sliding all over her sensitive skin. 😉

Blackmagicjack:
Yeah, I always try to keep and post the linear versions of my images just in case people don't like how the shading came out (or if anyone ever wanted to color one).

Darth Vegeta:
Thanks and, well, I haven't posted in quite awhile really either. Again, I keep both versions available for just this purpose, good or bad.

Kh
 
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