tickle12345
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Hello there everyone! I have an RPG idea I would love to share with you guys, it is called The Valley Of Laughter I would very much love for you guys to give it a chance and give some feedback on my idea and if possible i am looking for people willing to help me create it (I lack the technical knowhow to use RPG maker so i would be more than grateful to have someone way more skilled to help me out) I have a plot summary just below:
A young girl by the name of Lola decides that she should get away from the big city and travel out to the countryside for a long and relaxing vacation, as she travels through the tranquil countryside she comes across the pleasant village that resides in the pleasant Feather-Pine valley.
Whilst entering the village, everything seems quiet and calm, people smiling sweetly and getting on with their business, after she has a firm look around Lola checks into a hotel in order to rest for the time being.
A number of hours pass and she has a nightmare (which involves her being tickled from all areas of the shadows whilst tied to her bed) she then wakes up startled by this so in order to take her mind off of it she decides to go for a walk around the market to clear her head.
Although everything seems normal in the village, Lola can’t help but think something isn’t quite right its almost eerie that pretty much everyone is smiling but she eventually shrugs it off assuming its just her nerves, as she treks through the market place she comes across a fruit stall owned by a sweet lady, she decides to buy an apple as a snack but after she pays for it and is about to walk away the lady clutches her wrist.
Lola is kind of unnerved by this and asks what’s the matter in which the woman insists she follow her into the back room, after heading inside the woman explains that ever since Lola arrived the village has become "interested" in her, this confuses Lola but then…the woman explains in a more detailed fashion that the village isn’t what it seems, it is run by a mysterious cult that specialises in tickle torture.
This is too hard to believe for Lola who calls the woman crazy until there is a sudden bang on the door, a deep voice demands that Lola is handed over to what the voice calls “The brotherhood” the lady hastily tells Lola to escape out the back entrance in which she does.
After fleeing the back alleys, Lola runs back to the safety of the hotel and tries her best to get to sleep…after locking the door of course, the next morning there is no sign of the cult but that doesn’t stop Lola from trying to get to the bottom of this mystery, she must embark on a precarious journey to stop this “evil” cult from tickling anymore helpless bystanders.
But she must be careful…one false move and she could find herself in a rather laughable situation.
A young girl by the name of Lola decides that she should get away from the big city and travel out to the countryside for a long and relaxing vacation, as she travels through the tranquil countryside she comes across the pleasant village that resides in the pleasant Feather-Pine valley.
Whilst entering the village, everything seems quiet and calm, people smiling sweetly and getting on with their business, after she has a firm look around Lola checks into a hotel in order to rest for the time being.
A number of hours pass and she has a nightmare (which involves her being tickled from all areas of the shadows whilst tied to her bed) she then wakes up startled by this so in order to take her mind off of it she decides to go for a walk around the market to clear her head.
Although everything seems normal in the village, Lola can’t help but think something isn’t quite right its almost eerie that pretty much everyone is smiling but she eventually shrugs it off assuming its just her nerves, as she treks through the market place she comes across a fruit stall owned by a sweet lady, she decides to buy an apple as a snack but after she pays for it and is about to walk away the lady clutches her wrist.
Lola is kind of unnerved by this and asks what’s the matter in which the woman insists she follow her into the back room, after heading inside the woman explains that ever since Lola arrived the village has become "interested" in her, this confuses Lola but then…the woman explains in a more detailed fashion that the village isn’t what it seems, it is run by a mysterious cult that specialises in tickle torture.
This is too hard to believe for Lola who calls the woman crazy until there is a sudden bang on the door, a deep voice demands that Lola is handed over to what the voice calls “The brotherhood” the lady hastily tells Lola to escape out the back entrance in which she does.
After fleeing the back alleys, Lola runs back to the safety of the hotel and tries her best to get to sleep…after locking the door of course, the next morning there is no sign of the cult but that doesn’t stop Lola from trying to get to the bottom of this mystery, she must embark on a precarious journey to stop this “evil” cult from tickling anymore helpless bystanders.
But she must be careful…one false move and she could find herself in a rather laughable situation.