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New member giving a shot at a story (details inside)

carmen hu1

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That really isn't the title, at the moment I cannot think of one. But, as you can see this is my first post, however, it is not my first story. I hope you are pleased with it.

This story is (f/f) by the way. Nothing sexual just, tickling and a foot worship. It is entirely fictional...although I did base the main character of me.
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Driving home from the hospital, which is where I am employed as an EMT, I can't help but remember the words the patient had said to me. He had spoken to my partner and I in seclusion, knowing full well that charges were going to pressed against him, for it was he who caused the auto wreck that landed him there in the first place, and we would be put up to testify against him. First he offered both of us a bribe, roughly four-thousand dollars each. I turned it down, but my partner graciously accepted it. Guess he was willing to risk a federal offense for something that wouldn't match bail. My partner left, leaving this man to threaten me alone. "
Listen, lady." He had said. "If you testify against me...I'll make sure the following day ends in tears."
At this point, my eyebrow was raised. "Really? How? You're going to be in a wheelchair."
"Don't believe me?" His voice was serious. "Guess you'll need to see tonight. Off with you now."

His threat gave me some anxiety, but I was sure nothing would be able to catch me as long as I was going above forty in this sedan. At the next moment though, I saw hazard lights on the turn out ahead of me, and a woman was waving at me to come help her. I figured this would help ease my mind of the earlier encounter, and I pulled in behind.
"Oh thank you so much!" The brunette woman said graciously, as she lead me to the front of her car. "Hi, I'm Mia. I was just driving down the road, and my car goes dead. I think I could use a jump. Can you do that."
With a smile, I nodded. "My husband has a set of cables in the trunk, I'll get them." And so I did, turning my back to the female stranger...which was a big mistake. I faced around, cables in hand, and the next moment, the very same woman who had asked me for help was forcing a cloth over my nose and mouth, which was moist with a chemical. Didn't need to be an EMT to know that the chemical was chloroform. Within seconds, my vision started to go black; I had passed out.

I woke up sometime later, in a chair with arms, and a stool before me, where my feet were resting. The first thing I tried to do was stand up, but I learned soon that would be impossible to accomplish. My wrists were tied to the arms with nylon ropes, and my ankles seemed to be shackled to the stool. It was dark where I was...I could only see so far in front of me...which was just the stool. Then the door opened, and a light went on. I winced, and as my eyes adjusted to the dim light, I saw Mia standing there, just smiling.
"Hello, Carmen!"
My eyes went wide. "H-how did you know my name?"
"Oh...let's just say a bird told me...a bird named "Patient 202."
I should have figured. "Release me at once! Do you know how severe the consequences for you will be?!"
"Oh no! I can't do that. Not until I show you something...and then you promise me something."
"And what would those "Somethings" be?"
She only smiled, and stood beside my feet. It was at this point I realized my shoes had been stripped. Mia plucked both socks off of my feet with the swiftness of a swordfish through water.
"I know what you're thinking." She said. "But...that's not going to happen...at least not yet."
"What?! Then why di---" The next thing I felt from my mouth was the cotton from one of my socks mixed with the sweat I made this day. I then felt a strip of linen or nylon secure the sock in place.
"There we go." Mia said evilly. "Now you aren't saying anything." She came behind me. "Now then. Let's have some fun, shall we?" I felt her fingers dig into my exposed sides, her arms had curved under mine to get there. I had expected to be hit with something, not be tickled, so I was caught of guard, as my gag caught my giggle.
"Aww...I think Carmen is ticklish here...is she?"
I only shook my head.
"Liar!" Mia put her hands down and up my shirt, so her cold hands were now clutching my sides from within the shirt, which forced a squeal out of me. She was merciless next, wiggling them about. I struggled and cried through the gag, but these bonds were tough. "Mrrmmmphh!!! Moppht!!!! Moppht!!"

"Do you not like being touched there? Fine!" The brunette woman left her post behind me and stood by my feet again, this time kneeling beside them. Not a moment after I finished catching my breath, I felt a nail glide up my right sole. Again, I was not expecting this, and I yelped loudly. Mia said nothing, just let more of her fingers join in the assault. Soon, tears were forming in eyes, as all ten of her nails were attacking both of my feet, five to a foot. I was bucking and kicking wildly, but being held fast to this chair, I went nowhere. "Have you had enough?" Mia finally spoke, but not letting up on the tickling. I did the best I could to respond. "MrAHAHAAHAHAH!!! MRRHMM!! MRRRHMM!!"

"Well, Carmen. Good news for you then, if that is how you really feel. Just one more thing for me to do." I felt her nails depart, but the burning of them didn't. I could only think of how red my soles were right now. "I know your feet are still holding that burning sensation." The other woman began again. "But...I'm willing to offer them soothing."
I could only wonder what she meant, as I watched. She knelt down by my right foot, and took the big toe into her mouth. I squealed again. It's not that it tickled, it's that I have never felt a sensation like this ever in my life. Soon, the toe next to it joined the big one into her mouth, and then she started to suck. It must have been love at first taste with her...she seemed to be enjoying herself at the same time enjoying me. And I couldn't say I felt any different. She started to moan, like one would if they were eating their favorite pie. "Mmmmmm..." I tried to shadow mine by matching the timing with hers. Then her tongue started to inspect every toe in her mouth, gliding over the entire surface. This made me just want to spread them...and I did. Her tongue entered the crevice between them, and I kicked then. THAT tickled. I think I caught her smiling, this was what she must have been looking for. All five toes on my right foot were put into her mouth now, as the slimy tongue slithered between them. I started to laugh and kick again, but she didn't mind, and I couldn't bat her away...not as long as these shackles were in place.

This went on for maybe ten minutes more, before Mia finally stopped for good, and ungagged me; drool that had accumulated was hanging off the sock that had been placed in my mouth. I felt her grab my head, and licked the tears from the side of my cheek. "Now...that was just pleasurable, wasn't it?" She didn't let me answer. "I know you thought it was. And I can assure you. If you testify against our "Bird" friend, it will be nothing like this. You will suffer more than you did tonight. Are we understood." I nodded.
She said nothing, and just knocked me out with the very same rag.

I woke up again, this time, it had to be near dawn, as I could see the sun peeking out from the mountains. I was back in my car, safely buckled in, my shoes and socks in the passenger seat beside. But, there was also a lined-paper note taped to my forehead. I ripped it off, and read the writing.

Remember, Carmen. If you go back on our deal, you will be sorry!
Mia

I let out a sigh, then crumpled the note. I knew what happened last night happened, but I really didn't want to accept it. My mind was addled, and as I shifted my car into gear...I kept thinking. Would it really be worth another session?

End (maybe...)!
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I had more in mind, but I skimmed on the details a bit. If you are content with this one, I'll try to write up a second part...and I'll do my best to not cut any details. Go ahead and tell me what you think about this one though. :redface:
All criticism is welcomed.
 
Amazing Story !!!!!
cant wait for a part 2 =)

Welcome to the forums carmen_hu , always lovely to have new writers amongst us ^_^
 
Well thank you very much! Glad I could hop aboard. Oh, and I was reading a few of the other stories posted here..and I think I can safely say that detail is a real ally to this forum, and as such, I will not be afraid to add a little more. I can prove that in the next story I write. Anyway, thanks for the feedback!
 
Allow me to extend the salutations and welcome you to the forum, Carmen. I'm always glad to see a new face around here, especially if it's a fellow writer. I hope you enjoy your stay here. Also, if you need any hints or tips, and think that I can help you, feel free to ask.

Magnificent story, by the way.
 
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