Ninja girl to the rescue

[mpeyton]

Just a sample comic, but I'm still developping the story. Anyway a familiar character is captured as a master enjoys his pets licking her feet. An unexpected intruder arrives and begins to mop the floor with his guards!
Is this intruder friend or foe?

 

[Kenny Xiraka]

*Thumbs up*

Pretty good.

 

[His Divine Shadow]

Foe to the guards, at least. 😛 Looks good thus far, that it does.

 

[milicko]

do you have a second part of this story?

 

[general zod1]

Very nice Can't wait for part two

 

[DarkPoet]

I also like. I will, however, comment on the slight cliché of the dialogue. Just a place where you might want to consider improvement. Or you could always co-work with a writer. The art and idea, however, is great and I'm eager to see the next episode! Keep up the great work.

 

[Kalamos]

🙂

 

[Low_Roads]

Oh, the poor puppies (the canine varitey, I mean, not Amy's)! I do wish the ninja intruder had waited a bit longer. That tickling session was good fun! But the kung-fu fighting is well done too! The comic breezes along at a spritely pace, with lots of dynamic action! I'm most intrigued to find out where this will go!

 

[a1532b]

Man, this is turning out to be awesome. Blood, ninja's, tickling, and a girl in stocks, what more could I ever ask for? Oh, yea, more tickling.....😀

Amazing comic sample. Now I am anxious for the full thing!

 

[ghostshinobi]

O_O

Awesome work.

 

[Tickle Don]

ghostshinobi your group are damed cool

 

[Budweiserbob!]

😱

That was UBERLY COOL!

I LOVE YOU!!

😀

 

[Abadon XXX1]

Go bad ass ninja girl! ^_^

 

[Dark_Rain]

I think it's great ^_^ Keep it up!

 

[foottickler4u]

wow great comic great link!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Sockstickler]

This is a really great comic! Can't wait for the second part 😀

 

[LonelyKimiko]

Fantastic! I'm looking forward to part 2!
5 stars!

 

[*LadyNerd*]

It wasn't bad, but blood doesn't splatter like that. That and the dialogue should be fixed, otherwise not to bad.

 

[grippedchimp1]

I be digging this comic! Still, the barefoot ninja is a curious thing... I've a feeling she might suffer the same fate as Amy (is that her name?), but I wouldn't wanna get in to deep with this just yet! 😉

 

[mpeyton]

That was just a sample of what this comic will contain. i'm still working on the real story.

 

[El Teka]

Nice work!!!! I hope that Ninja Girl also be captured and put in stocks.

 

[Budweiserbob!]

Will there be a sequel to this?

if so WHEN!!!

😛

 

[cyclypse]

Poor puppies =(

Awesome work though! =) Keep it up!

 

[mpeyton]

Since so many requested, here is the conclusion of the comic. The suits get the crap kicked out of them, Amy gets tickled, and the ninja girl reveals her identity!

 

[Sockstickler]

Thanks for putting up the conclusion! I somehow KNEW that the ninja was Amelia (Only one person I've seen has quite that sort of hairdo), and I love the ending 😀