Off putting

[Volsung1]

One thing that I find that will cause me not to read a tickle story is if it is too long. I like (when I write, at least) is to be clear and concise...

What are some things that cause you not to read a par(tickle)lar story? :lol

 

[MistressValerie1]

1. Wall of text (no paragraphs)
2. Bad spelling or grammar

 

[Volsung1]

1. Wall of text (no paragraphs)
2. Bad spelling or grammar

Amen!

 

[Sablesword]

Too long? If anything I find the stories posted here to be too short.

OTOH, things like the Wall of Text, and bad grammar & spelling, can make even short stories seem too long. See my rant on the subject.

 

[Volsung1]

Too long? If anything I find the stories posted here to be too short.

I guess what I meant was one block of text... an example: I have a Remote Control Series that I have divided up into 5 (so far) posts, if you will...

I just think that 5 feet of text, and all in one post (haha) is too long.

 

[Sablesword]

Well, my longest story as a single post on TT would be "Adoria's Interrogation"

"Princess Alisha's Ransom" is longer, but is also broken into five parts.

My longest tickle-story ever is Tickle Witch which is a full-bore novel.

 

[Volsung1]

Yup, I think we agree...

 

[HouseOfTease]

Lots of lead-up, nothing sexy going on up front, too much backstory. I prefer stories that have something arousing going on from the beginning. I don't read through what looks like an introductory soap opera.