Oh no, how embarrassing...

[TickleMantis]

I got a little nostalgic a few minutes ago and began looking through my old stories. Unfortunatley I came across my first effort which, after working the dates out, it seems I was 16 when I first posted it. Ugh...law breaker!

The story was called 'Beths Journey' and was posted on the 5/5/01. Reading back over it, it really is quite terrible...

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?t=613


Anyone else got some shamefull bad first attempts you'd like to share? Terrible dialogue, bad spacing, under developed characters...etc.

 

[Ace Riley]

Now this is embarassing, I didn't even format the thing from the notepad I wrote it in. I didn't even think about this until you reminded me of it so I did a search lol. Man, good times those years...

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?t=15722&highlight=Locke+Celes

LoL, I revised it later, but damn that was silly of me. ^^ I was just so desperate to get it out there. 🙂 Always good to see where you've improved.

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?t=44591&highlight=Locke+Celes

 

[Mostly Harmless]

Man, good times those years...

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?t=15722&highlight=Locke+Celes

Wow, there was my 1stline post on this forum! =)) Good times indeed...