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Opening Her Eyes (scifi, ?/f full-body, gift+story)

Khali

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-The following image (and accompanying short story) is a belated tribute/gift art to the artist Bandito. Only a week late for his b-day. <:

-Features Bandito and White Lotus' Bounce Chix character Jane in a scifi setting and trappings (pun intended). Tickling is full-body, ?/f. No, you're not supposed to know what the tickler is.

-Gets a tad erotic near the 'end'...

-Both pic and tale are meant to titilate your imagination...

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Opening Her Eyes
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"NO! No...ahhhh..."

Her eyes still shut, Jane slowly regained consciousness. She felt an icy cold upon her bodysuit-clad back.

"A nightmare...just...whe...where am I?"

The words dribbled weakly from her mouth as she found her weary form unable to move much. Her eyelids were extremely heavy, as if she was asleep for days...or weeks...

"Eyes..."

She exhaled deeply, feeling the numbness ever-so-slowly fade toward her extremities. Even with her eyes closed Jane could tell that it was extremely dark wherever she was. A low humming permeated the room.

"Andi? Hailey?" she whispered.

There was no response. Jane found her memory to be somewhat foggy but she could vaguely recall that the three of them were exploring a derelict spacecraft of some sort. They had split up for some reason...what was it...

The dark-haired young woman coughed as more of her limbs gradually gained feeling. She was suddenly aware that her arms were in an awkward position. Something tight and metallic was clamped on both wrists as they were raised above her head and out to the sides.

"Eep!"

Jane also shuddered a little as she felt intense cold on the soles of her feet. She wondered what was inside her boots...

Her eyes forced their way open finally somwhat, giving her a blurry view down her body. Two slim pink blots of color were on the floor below where she hung.

"Wha...where are my boots?" she quested to no one.

The view coming more into focus, Jane soon clearly made out her feet sans footwear amidst the darkness of the room. The lovely appendages with their cute dark blue nails were flat against the metallic floor. Her gaze raised somewhat and she found that a lot of her black bodysuit had been ripped up. The eerie blue glow from the 'stripes' on the garment illuminated the shreds and revealed more holes. One exposing her belly and the bottom half of her right breast particularly made her shiver.

"Eyes...where...what has happened?"

Shaking her head of more cobwebs, the beautiful bouncy gal strained to focus on the chamber where she was being restrained yet all she could make out were the tight bindings holding her arms up and some sort of monitor on the wall to her right. Her gaze snapped to the device on her left wrist...a communicator. But the gadget was unlit and apparently turned off...Jane obviously couldn't reactivate it in this position.

A vague memory popped into her mind the instant that she could detect another sound above the humming: a faint creak of metal. Something green...no, two green circles...

With a feeling something else was now in the room...or had been there all along...Janey kept from calling out for help. She thought she heard breathing...and a very faint hiss. The creak of metal resonated gently in the shadowy room again...then again...and again...its rythym almost akin to...slithering...

Her heart racing and her breaths increasingly both in depth and rate, Jane shivered in terror as she heard more hissing.

The other breathing noise got closer and abruptly stopped. Silence enveloped the chamber as Jane began to sweat.

...

Abruptly, the young woman saw a pale green light reflect off something long, curved and metallic on the floor to her right. The illumination flashed several times and she realized something had appeared on the monitor, too extreme an angle from her position to read. The 'thing' waved in the dim light and Jane audibly gasped.

And then she emitted a shrieking giggle...something small yet wet was gently moving along the edge of her belly button.

Another passed by one of her hips for a fleeting moment, almost teasingly, then slid slowly along her ribs.

"Eee...hee hee hee...."

Suddenly she detected a larger movement just at the edge of her field of vision. It briskyly made contact with her right arm, wrapped around a bare patch of skin and then forced its way behind her back to push her body slightly away from the cool wall. Her laughter interrupted, she interjected in shock as it entwined her other elbow and then roughly spiraled around her left knee, lifting her leg high in the air.

The wet thing at her belly continued to play around her navel as she struggled, giggling madly. Another tiny feeler began to brush the underside of her now raised left thigh. With how sheer and form-fitting the girls' bodysuits were (Jane slightly remembering her own words of admiration as she thought back to how perky her friend Hailey's breasts looked within the material), the forked moist tentacle felt like it was tickling against the skin itself.

Something else grasped her bare right calf....hands. She felt smooth skin touching her trembling flesh and gently raising the limb to a height comparable to the other. A palm encircled her waving ankle and lifted. Jane's weak body was raised further from the wall, her lower torso forward toward whatever was holding her.

"Ooh!! OHHH AHAHAAAAHHAAAHAHA!!!" she blurted out as that slimy projection near her stomach finally stabbed its tip directly into her navel and rolled around like a little finger.

Jane sweat (and laughed) harder, her body tensing up in response to more little 'tongues' slithering here and there on both skin exposed to the frigid air and against the sheer suit.

"EEEHEEHEEHEHEHEHEHEEEEHEEHE...OH NOOOAOAAHAHAAAAHAHAHAHA!!!"

She still didn't know just WHAT was holding up her left leg...it was cold like some sort of metal but oddly pliable. But that was no longer a concern as something rapidly proceeded to rub the ball of her left ped. A feathery mass with a very rigid shaft had found her bare sole and gleefully was fingering the delicate skin, prompting her to scream with mirth and try to see what was happening in front of her.

A quick green movement caught the corner of her eye and vanished before she focused, leaving her to stare...with tears starting to flow from her eyes...at her raised foot. There was definitely something moving around underneath the crazily waving foot with its flexing blue-painted tootsies. She foolishly tried to stop and grab the thing between her big and second digits and was 'rewarded' with even more ticklish torment as its fluffy edges pressed deeply against her wiggling toes.

"Shh....SHHHHHIIIAAAOOOOOOOOOHHH!!! Jane howled suddenly, saliva dripping from the corner of her mouth.

One of those tongue-like extensions had just found its way underneath her right breast. Flicking rapidly yet carefully, the thing slid around the bouncing boob. Her shaking movement from guffawing crazily had more or less popped half of it from what remained of her bodysuit in that area. She tensed up as the wet touch moved higher and closer to the nipple...

A brief sound like a sword being unsheathed emitted around her arms...multiple times. The next thing Jane knew, more rigid shafts with faintly textured surfaces were poking and sliding underneath her bound arms. She wailed and threw her head back as her armpits were feverishly tickled.

"AWWWW GAAWWWWDD!!!! HAA...AHAHAA...HE...HEEEELP OHAHAAHAA!!!"

Babbling and sweating profusely through the slim garment, the poor girl was being overwhelmed by the 'rings' of shafts that were encircling her armpits and sides...it felt like a giant serpent was tickling her instead of constricting her...

As the assaults continued all over her form, the tongue upon her bare breast finally reached the nipple...and coiled its length evily around the rigid protrustion.

Jane gasped in deep breaths amidst chortles, feeling pressure building up inside her quivering and spent form. Her eyes snapped back open as the little feeler playfully lapped the tip of her nipple...

...And they saw one the hand grasping her right ankle. Pale skin with pointed green-colored nails composed the appendage there, tightly but not roughly holding her leg up. She caught another dark emerald movement near the hand and it disappeared before she could focus yet she definitely felt another little tongue near her knee immediately after.

A finger brushed the big toe of her right ped. Jane opened her mouth in response to another 'lick' at her chest, a thick strand of saliva connecting her upper teeth to her lower lip on one side...and then burst out in pained, moaning laughs as the fingers moved to her instep and dug in their nails.

Her words undecipherable and breathing extreme, Jane shut her eyes again tightly as she groaned in pain and pleasure. Her body was throbbing all over from the tongues and hard shafts ravaging it.

Her right sole wrinkled up as she tightly clenched her cute toes but the pale fingers of the hand there immediately countered. Long nails scratched slowly down her sole from ball to heel, their tips briefly dipping between each sensitive wrinkle and driving poor Jane mad. The lovely foot flexed and opened itself up to more torment as the digits only increased the rate of their feverish tickling.

As another tiny tongue swiped the heel of that same foot, Jane tried to keep herself from giving into the passion this hideous torture was about to unleash...

...

A brief moment of clarity brought words to her insane mind as her body became more tense and tightened up.

"Eyes...no control...only...pleasure..."

Her eyes tightened harder as sweat and saliva flowed freely...soon to be joined with other fluids. Her fingers and toes clenched despite their torments...

Jane's gasping laughter stopped and turned to surprised moans as she felt another tongue...a far larger appendage than the others...slithering up her inner left thigh. Although apparently not-forked it was just as devious as its smaller sisters in its movements.

The black-haired young woman was about to burst from pressure as the tongue went higher between her raised legs...higher...higher...closer to her sex. Her mouth opened wide yet made no noise as the wet tentacle neared...

Jane's eyes snapped open at the point of orgasm and found themselves locked staring into something. A voice, sultry and female, softly chuckled...as if in triumph...

She saw two green orbs...eyes...

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Sorry it was a week late, B.
Notes to come, maybe.
Enjoy.
 
Chesterpacific:
Thanks very much, I'm glad it was worth the delay (the story took awhile after the actual art was done). ^^
 
So awesome, Khali.

Thanks so much for the wonderful gift art! I totally feel like I've been neglecting the Bounce Chix lately with all the other projects I've been madly working on. So it's so wonderful to see Janey getting a little love.

OUCHIE! **gets the snot slapped out of him by a frowning Jane**

LMAO.

Seriously, as mentioned the lighting looks great. Jane's expression is wonderful...I really like how you always manage a terrific mixture of pleasure and torment. The story is awesome - I enjoy your writing more and more (and especially enjoyed how secretive you kept the tickler). And all in all it's just a really fun, sexy, titillating piece of art and fiction.

Thanks so much again, amiga.

You're wonderful.

Although as soon as Jane gives me another black eye...she might start trying to think of ways she can "repay" you as well. ;-)

Cheers my friend,

B
 
Hmm, an especialy devious picture, i only just got the whole Medusa ler thing, very very nice Khali, and its oh so lovely to see you writing a Yuri piece, you have quite a talent for it, can't wait to see what you've got next.

As always foot tickling and cunninglingus is a winning combination with me.
 
Bandito:
*smirks*

I bet both you...and Jane...didn't see that coming. ^^

You're quite welcome, and deserved a little image gift for the bday of course.

Heh, I like that sort of expression in tickle art...when it goes beyond merely 'fun' and mixes pain and pleasure. 😉 Terror and delight...forced by whatever thing has strung Jane up in the dark. ^^ As for the story, I hope it augmented the theme/feelings behind this one. The darkness in the image goes with the 'what the hell is it ahahaahaha!' elements of the tale, of course...to make you use your imagination and enjoy it more, I hope. 🙂

You're quite welcome...although I worry about the 'repayment'. You might want to duck, btw...looks like Jane's winding up again. 😉

Player 0:
Well, it's deliberately dark (both in pic and story...barring 'glows') to keep who/what the tickler exactly is up to your imagination. ^^ I also never clearly either show (the darkness and positioning in the pic) or tell (the end of the story) just exactly how far whoever/whatever it is went...ah...'down there'. 😉

Hopefully my future writings will be interesting.
 
Bill:
Thanks very much, glad you liked it.
 
Reepero:
Thanks very much. I love working on little details (both drawn and textual 😉 ).
 
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