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please make a story for me
hiii, can i request one story please. this is my plot, if you interested please reply me.
okay than, first of all i want to say thank you very much for your help. i just need a simple story, not so complicated. its about f/f or multiple f/f story and i know you are the specialist of this metter. about the idea, i will give you point per point so you can easily understand what i mean. let's begin.
The most important thing is don’t include me at this story. Make this story with third person view.
The story is about my friend, I mean my friend at office (because I;ve already graduated a week ago). Her name is Jane (22 years old), she is a supervisor at my office, she's my senior when I was in collagues and he is very smart. the first thing i want to say about this girl is she is very rich, spoiled and annoying, and she had a bad temper. In the office, they have a rule that every female employer have to wear a black blazer, white shirt, black skirt and high heels. The last thing that I said is the most important, every female must wear high heels.
Jane is the most intelligent person in this company, every manager like her, even the board member like her, she have a promotion in 2 months. She always overworked, busy because the assignment from the manager. Because of that she change her high heels into flat shoes a very very thin flat shoes (http://i3.iofferphoto.com/img/item/1...Q8jRJzjy6G.jpg). The flat shoes makes jane feels like she don’t wear anything on her feet and its very comfortable for her but not the other.
She has a secretary, but she is very annoying with her. Everyday at the break time, jane always order to the secretary to rub her feet, massage her feet, and make her secretary like a servant (this is 6th months already). The secretary know every spot on jane feet.
So the characters of this story are:
1. Jane = the victim;
2. Manager (female) = 1st tickler. Name: up to you;
3. Secretary (female) = 2nd tickler. Name: up to you;
4. Friend of the secretary/son of the police (female) = the one who call the police and give information about jane. Name: up to you;
5. Two Police officer (female) = the last person who tickle jane. Name: up to you.
Tickling Focus : feet (so many tickling soles and a little bit toes and top of feet)
So from now on, I will give you the plot. But for make you easier to write, I will give the plot step by step, one by one, okay !!! here we go:
1. Jane will come to the office like usual, and she still wear her high heels;
2. She come with a bad temper because of overworked, and she angry to her secretary;
3. The manager ask her to do something (make her walk everytime and her feet soar)
4. She's angry to her secretary and other female employer again and curse the manager because she make a rediculus rule ("every female employer must wear a high heels")
5. Jane ask her secretary to rub her feet because she is tired;
6. Next day, jane come to the office wearing a flat shoes, the secretary ask her why she wear a footwear againts the rules and after that jane get angry to her secretary but the manager see that. The manager look to jane feet and she wear a flat shoes.
7. The manager ask jane to come to her room
8. And the manager ask why jane wear a flat shoes. Jane reply that with an arrogant response, argue and a little bit angry. The manager said that she is agree with jane. But she make jane sign a contract that jane can wear flat shoes, but she forbid to took off her flat shoes, even she cant dangle her feet or slip out her feet from her flats even just a little. If jane breach that contract, she have to get a punishment. And jane agree with that with a wicked smile, and she think that the manager wouldn’t know if she wear her flat shoes or not at her desk.
9. Next day, jane come to the office again with her flat shoes. But today, the manager ask jane to do so many job that make her walk a lot (make her walk everytime until her feet soar).
10. Even with flat shoes doesn’t make her feet comfortable. Finally the job has done, and jane sit on her desk, she slip her feet out her flats shoes and ask the secretary rub her feet again. But the secretary ask jane why she bare feet right now, but she's already sign a contract with the manager. But jane angry again, slam the desk and ask the secretary to rub her feet.
11. Tommorow morning, I mean early morning, the secretary report to the manager that jane had bare feet yesterday, the manager believe that because she know that a woman like jane like to being bare foot all the time. But she need a prove. So befor jane come to the office, she put a camera below the jane's office desk. She put 7 (six) cameras. One at infront of the desk, two at both above post desk, two at both below desk and one at the desk, and one on the floor (ufff Its hard to describe, if you don’t understand PM me back ok). so the camera show every angle of her feet, even she slip out one centimeter from her flats shoes the manager will know.
12. Jane come to the office and she doesn’t realize that six cams has beed set up below her desk. Today the manager ask her to do so many thing, so she have to walk all the time and make her feet soar. And at the afternoon, she slip out her feet from her flat shoes again, work the assignment from the manager and finally one hour before the office close, she ask the secretary to rub her feet again.
13. When jane slip out her feet from her flat shoes, the manager watch at her monitor, she have 6 monitor at the office, every monitor show every angle of jane feet and record and capture every frame of her feet, even centimeter per centimeter captured when she slip her feet out.
14. Next day, jane still come with her flat again, but today, the manager ask nothing to her so jane doesn’t do anything, she free today. But still, she slip out her feet from her flat again but today is the worst, she just leave her flats around and being bare foot all the time at her room.
15. And the manager and the secretary see that thing at the monitor. The manager record them every frame. And she ask the secretary like this:
jane ask you to rub her feet everyday, you know something about that ???
and the secretary say that she is ticklish on her feet
and the manager ask if the secretary know about jane ticklish spot
and the secretary said that she's already learn jane feet and know every inch and every single space on jane's feet
the manager pick a picture of jane soles and ask the secretary to write and give a sign which part of jane feet ticklish and the secretary do as her say
the manager finally get jane weakness and make a plan to tickle her feet. (make this part intense and you know how to write this conversation more intense right)
16. Tommorow morning, the secretary send a messege through her cell phone to jane like this "please bring two shoes today, one high heels and one your flat shoes" but jane ignore her and answer "none of your bussiness". And after received the messege the secretary smile wicked and say to herself "jane, you will go home with bare foot today" (yeah like that, but please do like your own imagination, I know you are the specialist).
17. When jane come into office, she met the manager and the manager ask jane to go her room.
18. And the manager show to jane a hundred of picture show her feet in two days, jane angry but the manager show the contract, jane cant reply anything and ask what the manager want. And the manager said to jane that she must do everything her said. First jane reject it but finally she agree because the manager ask jane to stand in the circle that it have a glue, so jane with stand up postion step that circle and her shoes stuck there. And the manager said "I will force you until you slip out your feet from you shoes. If I can get out your feet from your shoes, I win and I can do whatever I want, but if I cant you win, I will give you freedom and promote you to manager like me" (make this intense)
19. Jane said "wow, what a stupid manager, you think you can do like that, you cant get my feet out from this shoes, this shoes is very thin and fit to my feet, and also with wear this shoes, I feel like I'm standing with my own feet and wear nothing, its so relax, it';s same that you want to drag all my feet out, you cant do anything to slip out my feet" ? well its like that jane give the information to the manager that her shoes is very thin like she wear nothing, it make the the manager easy to tickle her feet, that's what I mean. (make this intense)
20. And the manager said thank you for information and began to slip out the paper that contain list of jane weakness, and she said a little loud "hmm, instep, angkle, side", jane still confused what is that and ask the manager what is she talking about, and the manager said you will know soon. And after that she began to tickle her feet.
21. First, jane surprise that how the manager know that her feet is ticklish, but she don want to give up, she don’t want the manager know that her ticklish, and know she still wear her shoes, and of of course she don’t want the manager touch her soles. (intense please)
22. She still hold it until but she still can speak, but finally her voice turn weird and vibrating. Her feet shacking and moving, she really want to slip her feet out from her flat shoes. It's like a thousand ants on her feet, but she still holding until she broke, she slip her feet out.(intense)
23. The manager win.
24. And the manager ask jane to this : http://storage.canalblog.com/56/96/552942/42283580.jpg (do you know a tied like this Y and the feet face up at back, if you confused ask me again).
25. The manager get the pic again, look and say "hmmm, soles, arch, toes, heels but arch is the most ticklish spot." Jane shock and said "how did you know??" and the manager continue the tickling with the tease words.
26. The manager force jane to admit that she is ticklish, and force her again to tell all her ticklish spot every single of her feet, and if she lies, the manager concentrate the tickling to her arch and jane will scream. And finally she confess all her ticklish spot.
27. The tickling stop and The manager call the secretary
28. The secretary come in and the manager ask the secretary to tickling jane feet, and she said like this "your secretary have already learn your feet jane, she must know more than me"
29. The manager took jane flat shoes and take them on the desk infront of her (the manager), the manager touch the flat shoes like teaseing to jane and said "you must miss your shoes now, but I saw at the monitors you like to abandon this flat shoes" and jane angry again
30. This super intense part will begin from here
The secretary tease jane like this at the first time "well, everyday in 6 months I touch and rub your feet, I've already learn you feet, I know your feet better than anyone, I know every inch your feet, your ticklish spot, even you reaction and your feet position when I touch one of your spot … bla bla bla (you know how to make this intense). And the secretary tickle jane feet, touch her ticklish spot one by one, no left a single inch of jane feet untouch. (make this intense and good description, this is the main tickling scane and make more variation like play tic tac to or cleaning).
31. Finally jane lose and the tickling stop
32. The manager force jane to sign one of two new contract:
the first contract contains:
a. Jane must wear a super stilleto high heels (this make her feet more pain) every day
b. Jane forbid to took off the high heels or even slip or dangle even a little
c. Everyday, jane must get tickled, 3 times a day, morning, lunch, and after the office close
the second contract contains:
a. everyday jane must wear a flat shoes (she like this a lot)
b. before she enter the office, she must took off her flat shoes
c. every female employer can tickle her feet at anytime
33. Jane again reject the contract but the manager ask the secretary to continue the tickling. 30 min finally jane lost and sign the first contract.
34. The manager give jane the stilleto high heels and jane wear those heels. And the manager asking jane for so many assignment at the office and jane will do with those heels.
35. The secretary go to her friend and say this "hey call your sister, she is police right, I want her to tickling jane once more, so she really2 learn her lesson" and she call her sister and the secretary said on the phone like this "jane will go home at 2.00 in afternoon she will go to 4th avanue (or whatever street name),I know jane will throw her heels on the back seat, she will angry with those heels, so just stop her at the traffic light, and I guarantee she don’t have a time to take her heels back, ask her to step out on new prickly pavement, this is summer, so her feet cant stand on hot pavement, she will jump because of hot and it tickle like so many ant invading her feet, it make you easier to catch her, and after you arrive at police station don’t forget to wash her feet and tickle her, and force her to wear those heels every time, and said you will checking every she want go to office" and the policewoman said "may I know her weakness" and the secretary said "I will email all her spot"
36. Finally jane go home, go to her car, and curse the high heels, she throw her heels to back seat, she cant reach that again. She start the engine and go.
37. At the 4th avanue (or whatever street name) the police woman stop jane and ask her to come out, but jane said "wait a minutes" but the police woman said "no" but still jane insist the police to wait and the police said for what and jane said I want to take my shoes first and the police said "so you drive bare foot, it’s illegal, please come out" and when jane step the pavement she jump because of hot and she laughing bcause the pavement tickle her feet and she cant concentrate what the police ask to her and finally the policewoman cuff her and go to the police station
38. At the police station the policewoman tied jane spread eagle like this (http://storage.canalblog.com/78/78/552942/41118315.jpg) and jane see the computer monitor show her feet and many notes of her weakness.
39. The policewoman start to wash her feet and tickle her and force her to wear heels every time and finally jane agree and after 5 hours tickling she can go home with bare feet.
40. The next day, jane come up to the office with her flat shoes and she met the manager and secretary at front door. the manager ask her that if she want to change her contract. because the high heels was painful, she agree to sign the second contract. after that jane slip her shoes out from her flat shoes and give to the manager and they enter the office. after that the secretary she said to jane "how your feet feel for now ??" and jane said "that's enough for my feet" and the secretary give her hand to jane and said "your feet please" and then jane sit at her desk and give her feet to the secretary and she tickle her feet again
hiii, can i request one story please. this is my plot, if you interested please reply me.
okay than, first of all i want to say thank you very much for your help. i just need a simple story, not so complicated. its about f/f or multiple f/f story and i know you are the specialist of this metter. about the idea, i will give you point per point so you can easily understand what i mean. let's begin.
The most important thing is don’t include me at this story. Make this story with third person view.
The story is about my friend, I mean my friend at office (because I;ve already graduated a week ago). Her name is Jane (22 years old), she is a supervisor at my office, she's my senior when I was in collagues and he is very smart. the first thing i want to say about this girl is she is very rich, spoiled and annoying, and she had a bad temper. In the office, they have a rule that every female employer have to wear a black blazer, white shirt, black skirt and high heels. The last thing that I said is the most important, every female must wear high heels.
Jane is the most intelligent person in this company, every manager like her, even the board member like her, she have a promotion in 2 months. She always overworked, busy because the assignment from the manager. Because of that she change her high heels into flat shoes a very very thin flat shoes (http://i3.iofferphoto.com/img/item/1...Q8jRJzjy6G.jpg). The flat shoes makes jane feels like she don’t wear anything on her feet and its very comfortable for her but not the other.
She has a secretary, but she is very annoying with her. Everyday at the break time, jane always order to the secretary to rub her feet, massage her feet, and make her secretary like a servant (this is 6th months already). The secretary know every spot on jane feet.
So the characters of this story are:
1. Jane = the victim;
2. Manager (female) = 1st tickler. Name: up to you;
3. Secretary (female) = 2nd tickler. Name: up to you;
4. Friend of the secretary/son of the police (female) = the one who call the police and give information about jane. Name: up to you;
5. Two Police officer (female) = the last person who tickle jane. Name: up to you.
Tickling Focus : feet (so many tickling soles and a little bit toes and top of feet)
So from now on, I will give you the plot. But for make you easier to write, I will give the plot step by step, one by one, okay !!! here we go:
1. Jane will come to the office like usual, and she still wear her high heels;
2. She come with a bad temper because of overworked, and she angry to her secretary;
3. The manager ask her to do something (make her walk everytime and her feet soar)
4. She's angry to her secretary and other female employer again and curse the manager because she make a rediculus rule ("every female employer must wear a high heels")
5. Jane ask her secretary to rub her feet because she is tired;
6. Next day, jane come to the office wearing a flat shoes, the secretary ask her why she wear a footwear againts the rules and after that jane get angry to her secretary but the manager see that. The manager look to jane feet and she wear a flat shoes.
7. The manager ask jane to come to her room
8. And the manager ask why jane wear a flat shoes. Jane reply that with an arrogant response, argue and a little bit angry. The manager said that she is agree with jane. But she make jane sign a contract that jane can wear flat shoes, but she forbid to took off her flat shoes, even she cant dangle her feet or slip out her feet from her flats even just a little. If jane breach that contract, she have to get a punishment. And jane agree with that with a wicked smile, and she think that the manager wouldn’t know if she wear her flat shoes or not at her desk.
9. Next day, jane come to the office again with her flat shoes. But today, the manager ask jane to do so many job that make her walk a lot (make her walk everytime until her feet soar).
10. Even with flat shoes doesn’t make her feet comfortable. Finally the job has done, and jane sit on her desk, she slip her feet out her flats shoes and ask the secretary rub her feet again. But the secretary ask jane why she bare feet right now, but she's already sign a contract with the manager. But jane angry again, slam the desk and ask the secretary to rub her feet.
11. Tommorow morning, I mean early morning, the secretary report to the manager that jane had bare feet yesterday, the manager believe that because she know that a woman like jane like to being bare foot all the time. But she need a prove. So befor jane come to the office, she put a camera below the jane's office desk. She put 7 (six) cameras. One at infront of the desk, two at both above post desk, two at both below desk and one at the desk, and one on the floor (ufff Its hard to describe, if you don’t understand PM me back ok). so the camera show every angle of her feet, even she slip out one centimeter from her flats shoes the manager will know.
12. Jane come to the office and she doesn’t realize that six cams has beed set up below her desk. Today the manager ask her to do so many thing, so she have to walk all the time and make her feet soar. And at the afternoon, she slip out her feet from her flat shoes again, work the assignment from the manager and finally one hour before the office close, she ask the secretary to rub her feet again.
13. When jane slip out her feet from her flat shoes, the manager watch at her monitor, she have 6 monitor at the office, every monitor show every angle of jane feet and record and capture every frame of her feet, even centimeter per centimeter captured when she slip her feet out.
14. Next day, jane still come with her flat again, but today, the manager ask nothing to her so jane doesn’t do anything, she free today. But still, she slip out her feet from her flat again but today is the worst, she just leave her flats around and being bare foot all the time at her room.
15. And the manager and the secretary see that thing at the monitor. The manager record them every frame. And she ask the secretary like this:
jane ask you to rub her feet everyday, you know something about that ???
and the secretary say that she is ticklish on her feet
and the manager ask if the secretary know about jane ticklish spot
and the secretary said that she's already learn jane feet and know every inch and every single space on jane's feet
the manager pick a picture of jane soles and ask the secretary to write and give a sign which part of jane feet ticklish and the secretary do as her say
the manager finally get jane weakness and make a plan to tickle her feet. (make this part intense and you know how to write this conversation more intense right)
16. Tommorow morning, the secretary send a messege through her cell phone to jane like this "please bring two shoes today, one high heels and one your flat shoes" but jane ignore her and answer "none of your bussiness". And after received the messege the secretary smile wicked and say to herself "jane, you will go home with bare foot today" (yeah like that, but please do like your own imagination, I know you are the specialist).
17. When jane come into office, she met the manager and the manager ask jane to go her room.
18. And the manager show to jane a hundred of picture show her feet in two days, jane angry but the manager show the contract, jane cant reply anything and ask what the manager want. And the manager said to jane that she must do everything her said. First jane reject it but finally she agree because the manager ask jane to stand in the circle that it have a glue, so jane with stand up postion step that circle and her shoes stuck there. And the manager said "I will force you until you slip out your feet from you shoes. If I can get out your feet from your shoes, I win and I can do whatever I want, but if I cant you win, I will give you freedom and promote you to manager like me" (make this intense)
19. Jane said "wow, what a stupid manager, you think you can do like that, you cant get my feet out from this shoes, this shoes is very thin and fit to my feet, and also with wear this shoes, I feel like I'm standing with my own feet and wear nothing, its so relax, it';s same that you want to drag all my feet out, you cant do anything to slip out my feet" ? well its like that jane give the information to the manager that her shoes is very thin like she wear nothing, it make the the manager easy to tickle her feet, that's what I mean. (make this intense)
20. And the manager said thank you for information and began to slip out the paper that contain list of jane weakness, and she said a little loud "hmm, instep, angkle, side", jane still confused what is that and ask the manager what is she talking about, and the manager said you will know soon. And after that she began to tickle her feet.
21. First, jane surprise that how the manager know that her feet is ticklish, but she don want to give up, she don’t want the manager know that her ticklish, and know she still wear her shoes, and of of course she don’t want the manager touch her soles. (intense please)
22. She still hold it until but she still can speak, but finally her voice turn weird and vibrating. Her feet shacking and moving, she really want to slip her feet out from her flat shoes. It's like a thousand ants on her feet, but she still holding until she broke, she slip her feet out.(intense)
23. The manager win.
24. And the manager ask jane to this : http://storage.canalblog.com/56/96/552942/42283580.jpg (do you know a tied like this Y and the feet face up at back, if you confused ask me again).
25. The manager get the pic again, look and say "hmmm, soles, arch, toes, heels but arch is the most ticklish spot." Jane shock and said "how did you know??" and the manager continue the tickling with the tease words.
26. The manager force jane to admit that she is ticklish, and force her again to tell all her ticklish spot every single of her feet, and if she lies, the manager concentrate the tickling to her arch and jane will scream. And finally she confess all her ticklish spot.
27. The tickling stop and The manager call the secretary
28. The secretary come in and the manager ask the secretary to tickling jane feet, and she said like this "your secretary have already learn your feet jane, she must know more than me"
29. The manager took jane flat shoes and take them on the desk infront of her (the manager), the manager touch the flat shoes like teaseing to jane and said "you must miss your shoes now, but I saw at the monitors you like to abandon this flat shoes" and jane angry again
30. This super intense part will begin from here
The secretary tease jane like this at the first time "well, everyday in 6 months I touch and rub your feet, I've already learn you feet, I know your feet better than anyone, I know every inch your feet, your ticklish spot, even you reaction and your feet position when I touch one of your spot … bla bla bla (you know how to make this intense). And the secretary tickle jane feet, touch her ticklish spot one by one, no left a single inch of jane feet untouch. (make this intense and good description, this is the main tickling scane and make more variation like play tic tac to or cleaning).
31. Finally jane lose and the tickling stop
32. The manager force jane to sign one of two new contract:
the first contract contains:
a. Jane must wear a super stilleto high heels (this make her feet more pain) every day
b. Jane forbid to took off the high heels or even slip or dangle even a little
c. Everyday, jane must get tickled, 3 times a day, morning, lunch, and after the office close
the second contract contains:
a. everyday jane must wear a flat shoes (she like this a lot)
b. before she enter the office, she must took off her flat shoes
c. every female employer can tickle her feet at anytime
33. Jane again reject the contract but the manager ask the secretary to continue the tickling. 30 min finally jane lost and sign the first contract.
34. The manager give jane the stilleto high heels and jane wear those heels. And the manager asking jane for so many assignment at the office and jane will do with those heels.
35. The secretary go to her friend and say this "hey call your sister, she is police right, I want her to tickling jane once more, so she really2 learn her lesson" and she call her sister and the secretary said on the phone like this "jane will go home at 2.00 in afternoon she will go to 4th avanue (or whatever street name),I know jane will throw her heels on the back seat, she will angry with those heels, so just stop her at the traffic light, and I guarantee she don’t have a time to take her heels back, ask her to step out on new prickly pavement, this is summer, so her feet cant stand on hot pavement, she will jump because of hot and it tickle like so many ant invading her feet, it make you easier to catch her, and after you arrive at police station don’t forget to wash her feet and tickle her, and force her to wear those heels every time, and said you will checking every she want go to office" and the policewoman said "may I know her weakness" and the secretary said "I will email all her spot"
36. Finally jane go home, go to her car, and curse the high heels, she throw her heels to back seat, she cant reach that again. She start the engine and go.
37. At the 4th avanue (or whatever street name) the police woman stop jane and ask her to come out, but jane said "wait a minutes" but the police woman said "no" but still jane insist the police to wait and the police said for what and jane said I want to take my shoes first and the police said "so you drive bare foot, it’s illegal, please come out" and when jane step the pavement she jump because of hot and she laughing bcause the pavement tickle her feet and she cant concentrate what the police ask to her and finally the policewoman cuff her and go to the police station
38. At the police station the policewoman tied jane spread eagle like this (http://storage.canalblog.com/78/78/552942/41118315.jpg) and jane see the computer monitor show her feet and many notes of her weakness.
39. The policewoman start to wash her feet and tickle her and force her to wear heels every time and finally jane agree and after 5 hours tickling she can go home with bare feet.
40. The next day, jane come up to the office with her flat shoes and she met the manager and secretary at front door. the manager ask her that if she want to change her contract. because the high heels was painful, she agree to sign the second contract. after that jane slip her shoes out from her flat shoes and give to the manager and they enter the office. after that the secretary she said to jane "how your feet feel for now ??" and jane said "that's enough for my feet" and the secretary give her hand to jane and said "your feet please" and then jane sit at her desk and give her feet to the secretary and she tickle her feet again
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