FeatherFeet
3rd Level Red Feather
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So the tickling doesnt take place in the poem, i wrote it for school afterall heh but it has a good allusion to it. tell me what you think please ^.^
Childhood Evils
As I'm walking on sea shells and rocks,
Covering the sand at the beach,
I look down at my bare feet,
And I wish I brought my sandals.
My cousin Meliah, and her friend Alyssa,
Both 13 years old run far ahead of me,
"Hurry up pip-squeak!" Meliah yells,
My 10 year old legs not up to their speed.
The soft sand is a comfort,
Despite being hot to the touch,
The shore smells so sweet,
Unlike the chlorine at the pool.
I put one foot in the water,
Oh boy is it cold,
I have no time to adjust to the feeling,
As I'm pushed into the water face first.
One minute out of the water,
Shivering from the cold,
I'm shoved into a hole in the sand,
And then I proceed to be buried alive.
My head and feet the only things I can move,
Meliah smiles with evil holding a long seagul feather,
I look down at my bare feet,
And I wish I brought my sandals...
Childhood Evils
As I'm walking on sea shells and rocks,
Covering the sand at the beach,
I look down at my bare feet,
And I wish I brought my sandals.
My cousin Meliah, and her friend Alyssa,
Both 13 years old run far ahead of me,
"Hurry up pip-squeak!" Meliah yells,
My 10 year old legs not up to their speed.
The soft sand is a comfort,
Despite being hot to the touch,
The shore smells so sweet,
Unlike the chlorine at the pool.
I put one foot in the water,
Oh boy is it cold,
I have no time to adjust to the feeling,
As I'm pushed into the water face first.
One minute out of the water,
Shivering from the cold,
I'm shoved into a hole in the sand,
And then I proceed to be buried alive.
My head and feet the only things I can move,
Meliah smiles with evil holding a long seagul feather,
I look down at my bare feet,
And I wish I brought my sandals...
