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Quit Smoking Part 1-4

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Alright this is my first story, be kind but do give me constructive critiscism. I have broken it up into parts since it just kept going and going. I still haven't finished it yet either, my deviant mind just keeps coming up with more and more stuff. I took this from a Stephen King Movie called Cats Eye...Its one of those movies with multiple parts to it so this is the 1st story in the movie.

Characters:
Main-Mr. Jos Ware
Wife-Mrs. Lori Ware
Daughters-Erica and Nikki Ware
Mob Boss-Mr. Lugo
Doms-Ms. York & Ms. Zang coming in parts 2 and on

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Quit Smoking

It started out a typical Friday morning Mr. Jos Ware was getting ready for work. He could hear his beautiful wife Lori talking with his two twin daughters Nikki and Erica, both Sophomores in College. He gave his wife a kiss goodbye headed out the door, started up his car and drove to work.
This Friday though he was to go with his friend Jason to the Quit Smoking Organization after work to help him stop the addiction. Leaving his car at work, his friend Jason drove and dropped him off in front of the building where the organization was located. Jos leaving the car said thanks, turning around to enter the building; Jason showing a worrying look on his face as he drove off.
Opening the door and walking up to the receptionist; “Hi I’m Mr. Ware here for my 3 O’clock appointment”. Yes Mr. Ware, please fill out this questionnaire and Mr. Lugo will be with you in just a few moments. Sitting, he began to fill it out, just as a weary man walked into the reception area, hair a mess talking to himself. Jos wondering what was wrong with this person finishing up the questionnaire, just as Mr. Lugo entered and invited him back to his office.
“Mr. Ware welcome to the Quit Smoking Organization, your friend Jason has told us about your problem and we are here to help”. “Well thank you Mr. Lugo, hopefully you are able to help me out so I can quit this nasty habit.” “Let me tell you something about us Jos, may I call you Jos”? “We stem from a long history of founders and advocates to help people quit this nasty habit.” “Our methods are a little unorthodox, but effective to say the least….You have a wife and two daughters right”? “Well yes, but I don’t see what they have to do about me being here and wanting to quit smoking or how you know about them.”
“Oh Mr. Ware we know everything about you, that’s our business our family.” Just as Mr. Lugo spoke those words, Jos got a weird feeling in his gut and wanted out running to the door, but it was locked. Turning around Jos saw Mr. Lugo holding a document in his hand with a huge smile on his face. “Seems like I will have to show you something, to lets say make your decision a little easier to join us”.
Just as Mr. Lugo said that the wall just behind Jos opened to another room behind see through glass where he saw a nice looking woman restrained to some sort of a metal spreader table. She was terribly shaken and Jos could see tears flowing down her cheeks. She was also wearing just her bra and panties. “See Mr. Ware, her husband is a client like yourself and he was caught smoking just yesterday and now his wife must pay for his short comings”.
Mr. Lugo then produced a control panel with multiple buttons covering its face. He then pressed one button and Mr. Ware watched as some mechanical arms descended from the ceiling and positioned themselves at her feet, armpits, inner thighs, and belly. Mr. Ware turned looking at Mr. Lugo with a look of worry and astonishment on his face, just as Mr. Lugo give him a head nod to make Jos turn around. He stared hard at the hands and noticed they looked like stiff feathers or artist’s brushes. They sprung to life spinning and slowly descended touching her feet first.
The scream and laughter that Mr. Ware heard could not be described, the poor woman was thrusting herself and bucking like a mad woman as those tickly feathers moved along her arches, over her heals and across her toes. Her head now was thrashing back and fourth, screaming and begging for it to stop….unfortunately the other arms come to life and made contact with her skin. The poor woman’s eyes shooting open and are as large as saucers, feeling all these sensations at once she can do nothing but fall into silent laughter.
“Stop it you’re killing her Mr. Lugo”. “No I’m not Mr. Ware, she is just experiencing more sensation at once than her body ever has”. The feet mechanical arms stop and retract into the ceiling, the others humming away, just as the twirling feathers make contact with her bellybuttons rim and slowly move round and round getting closer and closer to her deep navel. Sweat pouring off her body, squirming and laughing like a mad woman…begging and pleading for all the torture to stop, offering anything for it to stop. The twirling feathers descend into her deep lovely bellybutton making contact with the bottom nubbin. Pushing her body up, screaming, thrashing, laughing. The others stroking her bare armpits slowly up and down. Finally, Mr. Lugo stops the treatment, watching the woman slump, her chest heaving up and down sweat and tears all over her face and gorgeous body.
“See Mr. Ware, this was her husband’s first offense so that’s why the treatment didn’t continue pass 5 minutes. Of course with his second and so on offense her torture will get much worse and I mean much Mr. Ware”. “Now go home to your wife and kids and stop smoking and just remember Mr. Ware we will be watching you”. Jos couldn’t believe what he just witnessed, a woman being tickle tortured because her husband was weak and tried to smoke again. That night he hugged and kissed his wife telling her how much he loved her, doing the same to his two daughters.

Part 2
Days have passed by and it was now Monday, Mr. Ware was going crazy because he hadn’t smoked since early Friday afternoon. He knew though he was being watched and couldn’t risk putting his wife or daughters into the hands of those sick men. He was sweating, fidgety, and looking for anything to get him through today.
Driving home he was stuck in traffic and opened up his glove compartment, a cigarette falling out onto the floor. His heart began to pound hard in his chest, looking around he just had to smoke this cigarette. Grabbed his lighter and light it up taking a few puffs trying to hide himself and the smoke, until a horn was honked he looked up and saw two people in a car next to him smiling. They took off waving; Jos threw the cigarette and took off towards home.
Slamming on the brakes in his driveway, the side door was wide open. “Lori, Lori, where are you”? Just then the phone rang. “Hello", "Ah Mr. Ware I think you should make your way down to our office”. “My God if you touch my wife….No no Mr. Ware not your wife your two daughters were home”. “See you soon”? He dropped the phone and couldn’t believe what he just heard, running out of the house he was to the "Quit Smoking" office in no time.
“Please, Mr. Lugo not my daughters please no”. "Mr. Ware apparently you didn’t listen to me when I said you will be watched at all times”. They walked to another room where he saw his two beautiful daughters restrained in the same way as the other woman was, they were visibly shaking and looking around wondering what was going on. A door opens and in walks two gorgeous women with brief cases; sitting them and opening them up they begin to lay down their assorted instruments across the table.
Jos could hear his daughters pleading with the women, but they did nothing but continue to be diligent. Jos knew how incredibly ticklish both his daughters are, and knew all the pleading and begging in the world wouldn’t save them.
Blind folds were slipped over the girls eyes, the two women walked down along their forms dragging their nails over their bodies producing some giggles and screeches.
One of the women spoke, “I am Ms. York and this is Ms. Zang we were hired to teach both of you a lesson so just lay back and enjoy it”. They both took up positions around Nikki who was breathing really hard and already sweating, 20 nails at once went to work on poor Nikki’s body. Ms. Zang began scratching and sweeping her nails down and across her pits, while Ms. York attacked her defenseless belly digging in and dragging them all over. Nikki threw her head back and screamed bloody murder, began thrashing immediately, bucking, squirming like mad.
Zang wiggling her nails down to her protruding ribs and digging in making her laugh and scream even louder, while York was wiggling her finger inside her bellybutton and running her other fingers along her sensitive panty line. Nikki’s body was thrashing all over, her hair a mess now, sweat all over as Ms. York, attacked her soft and warm inner thighs dragging those nails up and down and wiggling them. While Zang was nibbling and licking her right pit and attacking her poor sides, hips and belly.
Erica could do nothing but lie there and listen to her sister being tickled beyond her limits knowing she was next. “Please Mr. Lugo you are killing my daughter you ass”. At that last statement Jos made a lunge for Mr. Lugo, but Lugo produced a gun and told him to sit down and enjoy the show.
Poor Nikki was in tickle hell, thrashing, bucking, screaming, begging, and pleading, sadly no mercy came until she slipped into unconsciousness. “No please, God no, don’t tickle me now, you did enough to my sister I can’t take the tickling”. “Hush my dear Erica, you will enjoy it”. “Won’t she, Ms. Zang”? “Oh yes Ms. York, she definitely will enjoy it”. They both had evil grins on their faces and decided to tease this one beyond her limits. Popping the top Zang let some drops of baby oil fall onto Erica’s belly making her flich, spreading it around, filling up her bellybutton with to the top as she gently plays with her baby oil filled bellybutton.
Erica squirming and giggling, head moving side to side while she continued to rub the baby oil all over her body. Ms. York giving Mr. Lugo a wink, letting him knowing what they were about to do to her and he knew Mr. Ware couldn’t see this.
The wall began closing, “hey what’s going on here”? “My other daughter is still down there, what are sickos up too”? “Nothing I assure you Mr. Ware the ladies are cleaning them up and will be released right now, just remember this was your first offense so we will be watching even more now. As the wall closed the two women looked at the squirming, oiled body of Erica, how lovely and sexy she looked.
They got their stiff feathers and slowly began teasing Erica dragging them up and down her exposed armpits. Instantly her mouth shot open with an ear-piercing screech, she was pulling and struggling to get loose but it was no use. Her body was going to be their play ground for a while. Ms. Zang stayed at her pits wiggling her fingers into her right pit while dragging the feather across the other. Ms. York was using feathers on her poor soft soles….god how it tickled. The instant those feathers touched both her soles she bucked really hard and was thrashing, wiggling and laughing like they both had never heard or seen. Zang was nibbling and whispering in her ear, using the feather to tease her cleavage, stroking and caressing the soft skin.
Erica couldn’t believe what these women were doing to her, her mind was turning into mush and the baby oil they used on her belly was suddenly starting to tingle and produce a warming sensation. York was now nibbling and sucking on her toes using the feather to stroke in-between those cute toes. Erica was moaning, giggling, laughing, and struggling to get away. York gave Zang a wink, she unclasped Erica’s bra in the front, letting her luscious breasts fall free, instantly Zang noticed how hard her nipples were. “No please, what are you doing”? “Not that, please no, that’s j..just cruel”. Zang dabbed some of that warming oil onto both nipples, and watched as Erica’s body reacted to the sensation. Her pelvis was thrusting and moving which caught the attention of both women immediately.

Part 3
Nikki began to stire a bit, looking over Ms. York noticed this and got an evil idea in her mind. She would leave Erica to Zang and have Nikki all to herself. “What, where am I”? Kneeling down to her ear, “Hi there Nikki I’m Ms. York and we are torturing both you and your sister”. “Oh God no, let use go now”. “Sorry can’t do that cutie, but listen”. Nikki could hear her sister moaning and giggling trying to plead with her captors. “See she is all busy right now and so will you be in just a few minutes”. York stood and turned to see Zang had totally stripped Erica naked and was using a very fine artists brush to apply some of that warming baby oil on her protruding clit. She stood there and watched Erica go absolutely crazy not just from the stroking of her clit but also when that tingling warming sensation kicks in, she just had to see it.
Erica’s hips were thrusting hard now, she was moaning, and grinding herself into the table. Zang began to lightly stroke her oiled belly and hips, instantly she screeched and was laughing with some giggles mixed in. Zang looked down and noticed a wet spot was forming in-between her legs, so she grabbed an electric toothbrush off the table turning it on letting the bristles and the buzz stroke Erica’s inn thighs.
Ms. York had to hold her hands to her ears cause it produced such a high-pitched scream. She slowly moved it around and round letting her inner thighs feel the spinning bristles and then pressed it against her wet and utterly sensitive clit. Poor Erica didn’t know what hit her…she bucked so hard almost ripping herself off the table, but the straps held. “Oh God n…no wait I’m a…about to c…cum”. Just as she said it Erica erupted into a gut wrenching orgasm, her body going as stiff as a board watching her juices shoot straight out onto the table. Then falling limp, totally exhausted.
Putting down the toothbrush Zang goes to work caressing and stroking Erica’s now very sensitive body. Attacking every where watching her scream with pure laughter, soles and toes were stroked and nibbled on while kneading her knees than up to her hips, belly, ribs, and armpits. She was thrusting, thrashing and bucking so wildly Zang knew she had to slow down or this girl was going to hurt herself. Finally poor Erica passed out after Zang had began wiggling her finger inside her bellybutton while stroking that senstive panty line area.
Ms. York turned her attention to Nikki who had listened to everything that had just transpired between some woman and her sister. A door opened and in walked Mr. Lugo. “Ladies we have to let them go, you have tortured them way passed the time limit for a first offense”. “Damn, alright Sir we will release these cuties, alright Zang release her”. They were released, left to shower and dress for a trip home where their father and mother were just sitting down to eat dinner. The car dropped them off in front of the house. “Nikki, what do we um tell mom and dad”? “Nothing Erica, how the hell can we tell them what just happened to us”?
Mr. Ware, was sitting there knowing that his daughters were just viciously tickle tortured today because he had a weak moment and tried a cigarette. He heard the door open and in walked his two daughters, instantly jumping up from the dinner table and hugging them close. His wife Lori watching on and wondering what was going on here. Later that night the two girls were talking in their room about what happened today and asking why it happened. Nikki was staring at Erica, “So um Erica what um did they do to you”? Instantly Erica turned bright red, “I don’t want to talk about it ok Nikki”. They both just got into bed and tried to sleep and forget about what they experienced today.
Jos just laid there in his bed with his wife Lori sound asleep in his arms, thinking and remembering about what had transpired earlier that day to his two daughters. What had he done and what had his so called friend Jason gotten him involved in. The next morning it was all quiet, as he got ready for work and his wife still in bed and no daughters to be heard of. At the office Jos couldn’t work, all he could do was sit there and think about his daughters. Jason walked up and Jos grabbed him taking him outside. “What the hell did you get me into with that damn organization”? “T…They took my daughters and, um tortured them Jason”. “Oh no Jos I am so sorry, they um did the same thing to my wife”. “Then why would you tell them about me”? “They told me if I didn’t start recruiting people, they would take her again and take her treatment up to level two”. “I couldn’t let that happen to her again Jos, you have to believe me I had no other choice”.

Part 4
Months had now passed since that incident with his daughters and the Organization. Jos had been struggling with telling his wife and daughters about that Monday, but he never did. He was also struggling with the smoking, even though it had been a few months since his last smoke it still wasn’t any easier. But, his wife Lori was happy that he wasn’t smoking anymore and so were his daughters.
It was a Saturday, he was home alone and months had passed since he had heard from Mr. Lugo or anyone at the Organization. He walked down into the basement, turned on the light and closed the door locking it behind him. His hands were sweating, legs shaking, and was mentally battling with himself about what he was about to do. Opening a cabinet there it was a metal box full with his private stash of cigarettes. Opening a small window, so the smoke could slowly rise out of the room, Jos lit up his first cigarette in over three months.
Music playing, drinking some nice whiskey, and puffing on his cigarette, Jos just sat back and relaxed. Unfortunately he never noticed the man in the bushes watching the little smoke rise from the tiny window in the basement. Making a call to Mr. Lugo, the group was organized and set out to find his wife Lori this time. Sitting there a tiny note was slipped inside the window and hit the floor startling Jos. He got up, looked at the note on the floor and could be heard gulping across town. Putting everything down, he opened it and read it. Mr. Ware your lovely wife is in with us at the office, please be kind and come down for a small chat.
Jos fell to his knees, thinking about how stupid could he be for doing this and now his wife will be tortured probably worse than his daughters were. He drove to the Organization and was greeted by Mr. Lugo at his office door. “Mr. Ware I have another person in here with me incase you intend to try something”. “Him and I will both leave once your wife comes out so you can watch her treatment in private”.
They entered together and discussed the contract, Mr. Lugo and his man left. The wall slowly opened up and there was his wife Lori laying they completely naked, struggling, and whimpering. Jos began pounding the glass and screaming, but she could not hear him. Only he could hear her because of the speakers in the room. In walked the two women who had tortured his daughters just months before.
They slowly surveyed their next target and were very pleased with how gorgeous and luscious her body is. Sliding in some earplugs into his wife’s ears, Ms. York grabbed a mike and spoke. “Mr. Ware we are going to ultimately sensually tickle torture your wife just like we did to one of your daughters some months ago, and all you can do is watch”. Removing the earplugs, Lori his wife began to struggle and plead with her two captors. They slid a blindfold over her eyes and then injected her with a serum similar to the drug X or ecstasy. Watching his wife Lori, she began to feel the effects of the serum it was lighting up all her senses and every nerve was now heightened because she was squirming, giggling, moaning without even being touched yet. Ms. Zang and York looked at each other smiling knowing this one will be very fun to tickle torture.
Lori’s nipples instantly became as hard as pencil erasers and her slit was already starting to moisten. Jos just sat there with a heavy heart, watching his wife react, toes clenching, hips thrusting and belly showing that nervous quivers. Slowly the ladies both slowly began stroking her body at different spots Zang taking her soft soles and York taking her armpits. The reaction was nothing like they had seen in their lives….Lori’s body shot up arching as far as the restraints would let her letting an ear-piercing scream of pleasure and torture. Their long nails were devastating her body dragging them, wiggling, stroking sweeping those devilish nails all over her soles and toes.
Lori’s head was whipping so hard side to side they thought she might break her neck. “OHHH my GODD please stop”!! “You’re killing m…me”! Her body was now a sweating mess, make-up screeching down her face, hair just plastered to her forehead. Ms. York as now feasting on Lori’s breasts and exquisitely hard nipples, making Lori thrust her hips and moan out louder than Jos has ever heard his wife moan. While stroking and caressing her bare soles.
Zang looked up and noticed how wet Lori was between her legs. How she loved hearing a woman scream with pure laughter…Lori was laughing so hard and wiggling so much they both thought she might break this table. Ms. York’s fingers as she just couldn’t get enough of her breasts and nipples began playing with Lori’s belly and bellybutton. Lightly stroking the rim and giving it a little poke here and there. This was making Lori screech and laugh even harder and louder.
Lori’s eyes shot open underneath the blindfold when she felt a warm, wet, tongue touch her very sensitive clit. Her mouth wide open but nothing coming out, like all her wind was sucked out of her at once. Just her body was in a permanent arch, toes clenched hard, heart pounding, then it happened she could see stars before her eyes. The most gut wrenching orgasm slammed into her body, all of sudden her voice came back and she screamed louder than ever in pure pleasure, her juice squirting out between her legs. While Zang continued to lick and suck on her now sensually sensitive clit, Ms. York was grabbing some special tools from the table and approaching Mrs. Ware with the most sinister grin on her face.

To Be Continued.....
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I love Cat's eye, has to be the best cat movie in the 20th century. Now, this story was very good. I encourage you to write more. The only thing I have a problem with is how you put the dialogue. You should put each phrase the characters say, on separate lines, like this:

You don't know hwat you are saying." Jennis Said.
"I know exactly what I am saying, and I shall do it tonight!" William Sparrow said.


See?
 
Cat's Eye!!! Thanks Journia! It was driving me batty! Even so, it's a wicked spin. I'm happily awaiting the rest of the story. Keep up the good work.
 
thanks

Thanks Journia and vllk8tr for the kind words and constructive criticism

BB
 
That was a great movie. I totally had forgotten about it, until I started reading this story. Then I was like, I know this from somewhere. Great story BTW and a nice twist on the original. I remembered the lady in the electrified cage. Rather brutal scene, this scenario is quite a bit nicer to the captives.

I'm remembering the movie now. I loved the fight at the end between the cat and the goblin. Also starring a rather young Drew Barrymore.
 
My friend... my words are lost... but if I had to say anything... it would be this... THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO F*CKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good job BB!!!!! I hope to see the next installment soon 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀
 
Wow thanks jewels I completely forgot I wrote this story so long ago....shall I continue the saga of the organization?
 
Lol...ok you got it..maybe ill throw a cameo with you jewels as an unsuspecting relative of the wares
 
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