Re: Need artist's help on project

[Relent<]

Re: Need artist's help on project

I also, today, got around to re-doing that submission fopr the barefoot ninja "choose-your-own-tickle" story. Here is the penciled version of that Reina-couch pic I submitted last time. I really wish I could remember the name of the person who wanted this....
either way, anyone is welcome to critique this (I was smarter this time and posted it while it was still editable ^_^)

 

[IMxAxMONSTERx]

i love the picture, but her feet could be a little be thicker

 

[Relent<]

how do you mean? Thicker??

 

[U.N.Owen]

As I see it, the legs are too thin and the feet too large in proportion to the body. Very promising, though.

 

[Relent<]

once again, I was goig for an angle T_T
If anyone can give me tips to convey this properly, please let me know. The picture was somewhat based on this one:
http://wusfeetlinks.com/feature/kristi/20050426/KRS05042622.jpg

 

[Umojar]

What Owen said is right on the money. Also, the problem with the angle is that you didn't foreshorten her legs, which is why it seems awkward. Foreshortening is pretty difficult to get right, but it's almost necessary for tk and foot fetish art especially. But with practice, it'll come.

Oh yeah, also, this is more of a preference issue, but she's really skinny and doesn't have any curves. Everything should be a little thicker. The feet should be a little smaller. Take a look at the reference pic to see what I mean.

 

[Relent<]

thanks for the input Umojar. I'll try, but I'm not a terribbly accomplished artist; however with the aid and feedback of the community, I hope to improve.If you could provide something of a tutorial on how this is properly done; it would be greatly appreciated. (the angles and fore-shortening, that is)