request for artists' help with project

[biohazard]

(after a year of working on it) I have finished working on a neat pick a path story that focuses in depth on several aspects of foot fetishism, including bondage, underwater, tickling, among other things.

While I am proud of the story, I think that it would be vastly improved if the pages had an illustration to help set the mood (some scenarios I must admit, are less realistic and a bit more fantasy)

http://www.tickletheater.com/showthread.php?t=34218


redscript has already offered his support, but he feels the job is too big. If any other artists likes the story, please post/pm me if you are interested contributing to this cause.

thanks

 

[LonelyKimiko]

What kind of artwork are you looking to use for it? If it's anything anime related at all, I can point you in the direction of some people who may be interested.

 

[biohazard]

that would be fine, like I asked redscript any support would be appreciated. If someone wants to take their fav page and make a sample, I would like that too. thanks

 

[Relent<]

so you're looking for someone to make illustrations to this million page interactive tk story? I'll volunteer, but I'm not much for all that reading in one sitting, and its not as if I can just print all the content off could I? No, I'd kill my comp's ink....
well I'll try to post something involving the story as far as i got (I ended up getting her tickle by her boss on a couch. Chalk it up to my letharygy) and see where it goes.

 

[biohazard]

take your time, thx

 

[Relent<]

ok, this is a double success: not only is it my trial barefoot ninja drawing, its my first tickling submission to this site. Reina in her day-job clothes strapped to her couch and having her feet toyed with.

Edit: I need to re-post the pic later because the computer screwed up the DPI.

 

[Relent<]

okay, now this time for real....

this is the fixed DPI version. Much better in my opinion. Took me three days, well i did some concept sketches based on the stories escriptions first. I hope yo can find someone to color this, because I don't color myself and I don't have photoshop, so that's that, i suppose.
Comments, questions, here please; or should I have posted this as its own thread?

 

[Canadian Ninja1]

Criticism #1: Learn to shrink files. Right now, the options are what you see in the window or pixel-by-pixel. Something in-between is nicer.

Aside from that? Proportions. Her upper body seems to go on forever. The fact that she appears to be skin and bones could have been what you're aiming for, but I kinda doubt that. Also, call me odd, but I don't think breasts and the shirt behave like that. It would have been possible topless, but with the shirt, the way I'm looking at it, doesn't fly.

Apart from that, decent first appearance. One can only get better.

 

[Relent<]

I was going for an angle, and I don't have the software to educe my images. I suppose I could also request someone with that software to reduce it to 50%, but thats the only thing I can really propose to be done about it.

 

[Relent<]

Canadian Ninja:
thanks you so much for your critique!! Yours is the second critique telling of flaws in my proportioning, so i looked in some of my anatomical reference and found where my discrepancies had been made. I plan to re-do this picture after I have these editions to my style applied and do this character proper justice. Thank you again, as I have no idea how long this has been going on; it's like holding your chopsticks wrong and wondering why people look at you funny. ^_^