Where to start....well...I always like to give
posotive criticism to any artist/writer....being
one myself. So...I will say the art is...not
very flashy...but well crafted. I'm certain a lot
of hard work went into it and the artist should be very proud of his/her accomplishments. I'm sure they will
be quite good doing future comics as they develop
their skills.
Ok..I said something nice..now for for the blunt truth.
This book blows big time!!! Out of 24 pages..there are 4...count
them 4...pages with tickling...mediocre tickling at that.
You don't even get to any tickling till the 11th page.
I've seen more sustained tickling scenes in mainstream comics than this book. What were you thinking??? This is more a mainstream
Dungeons and Dragons comic than a tickling book. It advertises
the second issue do out for July. I certainly won't be buying that...not if it's anything like it's predecessor.
Guys..take a page from BZ & FTKL or Ozzy...intros are great..but get to the point of the book. If your point was to sell a Dungeons and Dragon story...don't advertise it as a tickling comic. If it was
to sell a tickling comic....you missed your mark by a long shot.
As a comic writer and artist...I sadly have to rate this as the
WORST attempt at the genre. For $19.95 it's a complete rip off
and I strongly suggest you reavaluate your next production.
Sorry...but I just wasted $20 and I'm not happy just saying..."Oh well".
reguards
posotive criticism to any artist/writer....being
one myself. So...I will say the art is...not
very flashy...but well crafted. I'm certain a lot
of hard work went into it and the artist should be very proud of his/her accomplishments. I'm sure they will
be quite good doing future comics as they develop
their skills.
Ok..I said something nice..now for for the blunt truth.
This book blows big time!!! Out of 24 pages..there are 4...count
them 4...pages with tickling...mediocre tickling at that.
You don't even get to any tickling till the 11th page.
I've seen more sustained tickling scenes in mainstream comics than this book. What were you thinking??? This is more a mainstream
Dungeons and Dragons comic than a tickling book. It advertises
the second issue do out for July. I certainly won't be buying that...not if it's anything like it's predecessor.
Guys..take a page from BZ & FTKL or Ozzy...intros are great..but get to the point of the book. If your point was to sell a Dungeons and Dragon story...don't advertise it as a tickling comic. If it was
to sell a tickling comic....you missed your mark by a long shot.
As a comic writer and artist...I sadly have to rate this as the
WORST attempt at the genre. For $19.95 it's a complete rip off
and I strongly suggest you reavaluate your next production.
Sorry...but I just wasted $20 and I'm not happy just saying..."Oh well".
reguards