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Room 214

Nicelegs1

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(This is my first time posting a story, so be kind. The following is very loosely based, and extremely embellished, from a dream I had.):

My final paper in Mr. Teller's class had to be something innovative if I wanted to get that Journalism scholarship. Rumors had circulated about the supernatural occurances in room 214 of the Ashford Hotel. Staff and guests were always tight-lipped about their experiences in that particular room; only a smile would creep across their faces when asked about it. The few who would testify to their visits described some nonsense about a rejuvenation of the senses, like being treated to a waking erotic dream. This was supposedly attributed to the death of a glamorous starlet, Wendy Shine, who occasionally held lengendary fetish parties in that very room during the mid 40's. Urban folklorists theorized that the room was since populated by the ghosts of all her perverted guests, and that anyone who entered the room would be treated to their benevolent mischief.

The room had been locked for the last fifteen years, all of its contents preserved. Luckily, the hotel manager proved to be a dirty old man. A little flirtation and a plunging neckline won me his favor, and I was given the key to the mysterious room for one night. However, I had no intention of staying in room 214 for the entire night, so it took me nearly a week's pay just to check into the room next door. I was surprised to find that I was the only occupant on the floor; apparently the ghostly rumors had proven their longevity.

I felt a extremely defenseless, being the only person within earshot. If anything happened in that room, no one would hear my cries for help. This made me hesitate my exploration.

I was just stepping out of the shower when I heard a loud click from next door. I was surprised that I had instantly gained the nerve to check it out. All fear had left me, and I was so eager to investigate that I left my room wrapped only in a towel. I walked over to room 214 before I remembered I'd left the key in my room. Then I noticed that the room was slighlty ajar.

My mind wandered for an instant. I thought perhaps the manager had set up cameras in the room for his amusement. Maybe he was hoping the room's kinky reputation would get the better of me, and I would give in to masturbation once inside, for his visual enjoyment. I can't say that thought had not crossed my mind, and standing in front of the door now, I was a little nervous of what this room was capable of.

Only one way to find out.

I pushed open the door and was treated to a rush of warm air, intensely comforting. That pervert had been in there! He must have. Why else would he pre-heat this room except to provide a comfortable atmosphere for a girl with a curious itch? I didn't know whether to curse him or thank him, because the warmth was immediatetly taking its toll. And the rush continued, soothing my face and blowing up my towel.

I was suddenly reminded of times when I was home alone after a shower, crouching in front of the heater vents and letting the air blow up through my towel. Those sensations were so real to me now I could almost smell my mother's carpet freshener. The scent was coming from the room, a pleasant potpourri.

I threw the door wide open to the dark room, and the pleasant onslaught of warmth continued. I invited it completely, spreading myself in the doorway, legs apart. My towel balooned outward from the gust, giving the blissful air full access to me. The now torrid breeze lost no intensity as it brushed my pubic hair, rolled over my stomach, and cascaded over my nipples. I shuddered and sighed, being teased with a patience no boy had ever given me.

As I stretched my arms up to grab the doorframe, the feelings grew stronger, as if countless fingers were now exploring my flesh. I must be hallucinating, I thought. Then my eyes opened wide as these imaginary fingers found their way across my rib cage. I gasped as I was suddenly tickled by this sentient breeze. A giddy smile stretched across my face as I quickly looked back and forth down the hall to make sure I wasn't being spied upon. This wasn't the hotel manager's doing, I was being handed a full invitation to the legendary room.

While I decided whether to venture futher or not, the hot breeze continued to tease me with its almost tangible appendages. And the tickling persisted, my armpits, my stomach, my thighs. I was cackling in ecstasy, whipping my short hair around like a cheerleader's pom-pom. Then the sweet tickling wind took matters a step further, between my legs. All was brushed aside to expose my stiffened clitoris.

"Oh, no you don't," I giggled out loud.

But it did. Oh, it most definitely did. The absolute tip of my most sensitive spot was being rapidly flicked up and down by what felt like a pointed tongue. The bliss was maddening. I wanted to step away and protect myself from the almost unbearable enticement, but my body insisted on my staying, my hips thrusting as the invisible pervert had its way with me. I grunted and groaned like a *****. I bit my lip as the sweet moment gave its first hintful tingle. I was about to orgasm harder than I had ever dreamed, and not a hand had been laid upon me.

Then I noticed my towel being untied from under my arm. The fabric slid open, revealing my thrusting buttocks to anyone who might walk by. I suddenly realized the display I must be making, a prominent highschool senior humping the air like a slut with only a towel hanging on her large, proud bossom. I arched my back in both passion and a feeble attempt to keep my towel in place. But the towel began to fall. No, it was being pulled down ever so slightly. It wasn't enough that this room was treated to every inch of my flesh, but it wanted me completely naked. I was almost doubled over backwards, when the towel finally lost its sweet grip on my wet nipples. I finally convinced my arms to grab it and cover myself. I fell backwards into the hall and brushed the bangs out of my eyes.

The room was still open, still inviting. My legs shook from the impending climax I was suddenly denied. There was no doubt I was at the point of no return. I could either go back to my room and finish myself off like a good girl, or I could surrender my body to the merciless perversions of this room 214.

It took me less than a heartbeat to decide. I hadn't even passed the threshold of the room before, and it proved itself capable of pleasuring me. I couldn't even imagine what would be in store inside. I couldn't just enter something of so much power; I had to offer myself.

"What are you going to do to me?" I asked the room rhetorically. I expected no answer, and was given none. I would just have to find out for myself.

I stood up and looked up and down the hall one last time to avoid any spying eyes. Then I cast aside my towel. The suddenly helpless feeling I had brought forth a girlish giggle.

I took the last few steps inside and closed the door behind me. This fantastic room was going to enjoy me. And I was going to enjoy being enjoyed!

-To be continued...
 
continuation please. This is one great story Nicelegs. Please post more on this wonderful story.
 
Part two

(WOW!!! Thanks for the enthusiasm, guys. I'm just experimenting here with erotic fiction, but I'd love to know what you think. I know there's not as much tickling in my stories as one might like, but I still hope it tickles your fancy. So, here's part two):

The pleasant warmth now filled the entire room. I took a few steps away from the door when I heard it click behind me.
“Hey!” I reached for the handle only to find it locked. I quickly covered myself and turned back to the room.
“What do you want?” I said, panicked.
There was no answer. I took a moment to regain my wits. I had offered myself to the whims of Room 214, and now I was going to have to earn my freedom. Besides, there’s no reason to fear pleasure…is there?
I shook my head and laughed, uncovering myself once again. I flicked the light switch on and took in my surroundings. The room was darkly lit, bathed in a subtle amber glow as warm as the air itself. There were only two doors: one to the large luxurious bathroom, the other to the walk-in closet. The rest of the room was vast, leading to a gigantic king size bed. Everything had in fact been left exactly as it was, even Ms. Shine’s possessions.
I spotted her dresser and large vanity mirror across the room. I sat down before the mirror and sampled her perfume collection. The sweet bouquet of smells stirred something inside me. I looked at my reflection and daydreamed of what must be the life of a care-free starlet.
Suddenly I dropped the glass cap from one of the vials. I dove after it as it rolled across the floor. When I caught it, I froze, thankful I didn’t break a possibly expensive little item. I found myself on all fours on a soft, fur rug which I didn’t recall being there before. I started to get up, but my nipples stroked the fur and my nerve-endings were once again awakened.
“Okay, this could be interesting,” I smiled to myself.
I began rocking back and forth on my hands and knees letting my hanging breasts sway across the rug. My nipples grew more turgent with each pass. I then slid down and sprawled myself over the rug. I reached my hands forward and pulled myself across the inviting material, then pushed myself back. I repeated this over and over, back and forth, until it seemed that the fur was writhing under me. Caressing every inch of my flesh.
“Mmm, that tickles,” I cooed.
I pressed my cheek against the rug spread my legs now. The rug seemed to fold perfectly, creating a hard ridge that ran from my feet to my belly. I began humping the ridge, slowly, than faster as I clenched the fur in my fists. The ridge had found it’s way between my labia and was working its magic on my tickle button. A series of perfectly space little knots in the fur each tugged slightly at my clitoris as I passed over it. I was becoming dizzy with lust.
“More,” I begged, “More!”
The rug obliged, as each hair on the rug wriggled across my ribs. I suddenly burst out into laughter.
“Wait!” I shouted hysterically, “That’s too much!”
My laughter was interspersed with moans of passion. I was grinding harder and harder against the rugs ridge as my upper body was being mercilessly teased.
Then I slowed down. My tows curled like the smile on my face, my breath shallow now. It was right there, a second away from the most deliciously intense orgasm a girl could ever ask for. My ears buzzed and my eyes watered. I could hear my pulse and feel it in my loins.
Then it all came to a cruel halt. The ridge sank away underneath me.
“Oh no,” I said, “not fair.”
I was a breath away from a much needed climactic rush, then denied, left lying there like a fool. I was furious.
“Is that how you’re going to do me? You want me to stay this aroused all night?”
I stood up and marched toward the door, when a feeling suddenly came over me. It was like the room was beckoning for me to stay, apologizing even. I took advantage of the situation, decided to take control.
“Look, I don’t know what your plans are for me, but I have never felt this horny in my life. If I want to play, you’d better let me play. And when I want to cum, you’re going to let me. Understand?” I couldn’t believe the words that had come out of my mouth, bold words. I’d never spoken like that before. This room was giving me a sexual confidence I didn’t know possible. I should have been more grateful.
Then something brighter than the rest of the room caught my eye. It was white lingerie, draped over a chair in the corner, like an offering. I smiled to the room now, apology accepted.
I took the underwear to the mirror and tried it on. It was much more risqué than would have been allowed in Wendy Shine’s time: a white corset, daringly skimpy panties, and a pair of long gloves, all satin. I put on the knee-high stockings and admired my own reflection. The material almost seemed to glow on me. Then I felt something peculiar against my skin. The fabric almost seemed to be coming to life, titillating every spot of my flesh that it touched. Every spot!
“Oh my,” I giggled, “now this WILL be interesting.”

-To be continued…
 
Highly Erotic

You truly have a gift for writing erotic fiction. I can't wait to read more!
 
heh, what can i say, sex sells 😛. You've got a really nice style. Fleshing things out a bit more (no pun intended) would be cool though. Oh, and by the way... could she not have just have used her hands?! lol 😉
 
Well, this should finish it up. I hope you all enjoy the climax as much as I enjoyed writing it. I've taken a lot of advice from those of you who were so sweet to give it (you know who you are, kisses), so I hope no one is disappointed. I look forward to your opinions and criticisms:

Part 3:
The sensations created by this charmed attire continued. I closed my eyes, leaned my head back, and swayed on my heels.
“Mmmm, nice.”
The corset was undulating against my skin with every movement, the satin massaging my breasts. The panties slid across my flesh almost like liquid, causing goosebumps all over. I ran my gloved hands over my curves, but the moment they hit flesh, I was tickled so severely it was startling. Light a pleasant shock of electricity. I paused for a moment, then contemplated the possibilities. I slid my corset down ever so slightly to reveal my nipples. I hesitated for just a moment then brushed a fingertip over my right areola.
“Unh, God,” I laughed, “Lucky, lucky girl.”
My nipple grew erect and tightened right before my eyes, practically reaching just one more touch from my enchanted glove. I looked at my hands, then down at my panties, and I did the math.
“I think it’s play time,” I giggled.
I realized the crippling pleasure I was in for, and decided to move my fun to the bed. A red feather boa spiraled around the bed post. I addressed it as if teasing an anxious lover.
“There might be time for you too, if I’m not too worn out.”
I plunged into the feather comforter, hugged by the cushioning like lying in a cloud. I stripped off the corset and let it fall beside the bed. When it came time to lose the panties, I started to chicken out. I looked again at the gloves and felt a little nervous. I reassured myself aloud, hoping whatever spirits blessed this room would understand the degree of my threshold.
I spoke quietly to myself, “It’s okay. You’re ready for this. Just let it happen. It’s only pleasure.” I looked at the gloves again, now almost glowing white, and I chuckled to myself, “Yeah, it’s only going to be the best tickle-fuck in history. And if you faint, maybe the gloves will take over.”
Then, as if by cue, the gloves truly took over. They began with my ribs, running up and down them methodically.
I howled with laughter, “Oooh, God, no! Stop!” My words pled for mercy, but my insane tittering just invited the onslaught. And my body was practically begging for it. My stomach flexed tight, and each breath stretched my ribs out to be fiendishly attacked. Then the possessed gloves moved to my armpits, and my sanity was truly tested. I was laughing so hard, I couldn’t even beg. I tried to roll off the bed, but I’d sunk so far into the cushion that I was trapped, on my back, delightfully vulnerable. Inevitably my hands moved to my breasts, groping and squeezing with an artist’s perfection. The pleasure was a welcome bliss to the hellish tickling which presided. I had just a moment to gather my wits.
I looked around desperately to any solution to this predicament. And that’s when I noticed the feather boa was missing.
“Oh, please don’t tell me,” I fretted.
Sure enough, I looked down to see the boa snaking its way toward me from the foot of the bed. I thought my eyes were playing tricks on me. Then my stockings fell victim to the same influence as my gloves. As if magnetized, the stockings forced my legs apart. Far apart.
I laid my head back and closed my eyes. I couldn’t watch what was about to happen. Feeling it would be too much as it was. Then came the first sensation. The feathery serpent slipped under the elastic of my panties. I gulped and held my breath. With fantastic speed and grace the boa slid along a well-thought path in my underwear, a repeated figure “8” around my thighs, against my crotch, and (God, help me) right between my goose-pimpled cheeks.
“Are you kidding me?” I screamed, “Somebody help me, please!”
I knew my cries would go unheard. My spread legs forced my pelvis into the air, leaving my ass completely open for the most brutal and pleasurable tickle of my life.
“Oooo,” I giggled, “That is so kinky.”
The train of feathers had not ignored my anxious clitoris either, slithering against it with a lover’s care.
“You better not stop,” I commanded, “Unnh! You better not fucking stop.”
I surrendered to the ecstasy, to the puppeteers pulling all the right strings.
“I want this,” I gasped, licking my lips in welcome.
I had said just the right words. Just as my climax gave that tingling hint, I was given control of my hands again…and the sweet electricity remained in my fingers. I tore off my panties and threw them across the room. I rolled over on my stomach and plunged a finger inside myself. The energy from the glove filled me like a lover ejaculating. It threw an arc of electricity right to my g-spot. I clenched the sheets in my free hand, bit my pillow and groaned. My orgasm was right there at my beckon call.
Then I took full control. Apparently a night of being teased by this room had taken its toll on me. I had developed a sadistic appetite for teasing myself. I removed my finger and rolled back over, face up.
“It’s all about taking your time, girl,” I told myself, “and now you’ve got all night.”
I plucked a feather from the boa, spread my legs, and proceeded to tantalize my ticklish clitoris for the next two hours. I fell in and out of consciousness several times, wrapped in sweet, prolonged pleasure. Each time I slipped into a dream filled with visions of glamorous men filling this very room and giving my body their full, expert attention. And each time I awoke, my magical gloves had continued to pleasure me during my rest.
“Thank you,” I whispered with a giggle to my little helpers.
I teetered on the edge of an impending climax and enjoyed every minute. I kept myself just close enough, until I knew my sweat drenched body would wait no more. I was in perfect syncronicity with my libido, and I knew the exact minute amount of stimulation I needed.
Just three more ticklish strokes on my aching button.
“Here we go,” I panted. I took a deep breath and counted out the tickles.
“Coochie…”
Tickle one.
“…coochie!...”
Tickle two!
The third stroke, fuck yes, that third stroke was flawless.
“…COOOOO!”
My back arched and I screamed so loud, I probably woke the whole hotel. Each pulse of my orgasm brought about a high-pitched shriek of passion. Every contraction two-fold the previous in intensity. My body shuddered and my pelvis humped the open air. Every fantasy raced through my mind at once. Every boy I’d ever had and every one I’d ever wanted was inside me all at once. I was overwhelmed.
I fainted only for an instant. The cumming had calmed down, bringing giggles from my lips now. I waited until I could feel my legs again, and I tried to stand, clumsily. Then I heard a sound from outside the door. Someone had been standing out there. Someone heard everything. I was past any shame. I took pride in this pleasure; I’d deserved it.
I walked to the door and threw it open. To no surprise, I found the hotel manager with his ear to the door.
“Were you listening to me,” I asked playfully.
He gasped at my nudity, and the impressive bulge in his pants twitched as he looked me up and down.
“So, mind if I come back tomorrow?”
He couldn’t speak, just nodded.
I strutted past him, proudly. As I opened my door, I cast him a backwards glance.
“Oh, and I get the room for free, right?”
He didn’t have to answer. I was in control of the situation, and I loved it. Room 214 had given me all the confidence I needed, and I would repay it with all the visits my body could bear…and then a few more.

-The end
 
I enjoyed last part as much as the first two. Hope you will write more great stories and post them. Thanks and keep up the great work.
 
Ace! You should do a sequel where the room turns EVIL! Haha, Dynamite!! Ah... Good times. Well, at least she took my advice and just used her hands 😛 hehe. Let's see, criticism... criticism... um... I suppose if I *HAD* to say something it would be that it might be better to spend more time on a description of whats going on, physically i mean, more detail in that department, but less in terms of how great it is how good it feels etc... generally i find people create the emotions for themselves; its the power of the scenario and the description that's important. But that's partly just my preference... I liked it! lol Def loved it when she just struts out the room naked, ha, Take that FCC!
 
Hey all, i just thought while i was on here that this story deserved to be bumped up again - a story which is as sexy as this *and* as well written is an incredible rarity.
Peace and Love.
 
Dude'sonfire said:
Hey all, i just thought while i was on here that this story deserved to be bumped up again - a story which is as sexy as this *and* as well written is an incredible rarity.
Peace and Love.

And thank you for doing so! Excellent story!
 
Frick on a stick!
One of the best erotic stories i have ever read by far!!!
 
Volcom said:
Frick on a stick!
One of the best erotic stories i have ever read by far!!!

I totally agree. Nicelegs seems to have dissapeared though 🙁 ... shame. Aside from her blatantly obvious writing skills, she was really nice.
 
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