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She didnt know she was extremely ticklish Part 1

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Danielle (18), is a very pretty girl with soft and smooth skin like her sisters Beth (24) and Charlotte (26), Danielle never use to be close to her sisters as she was the youngest but as she got older they would take her out to places and etc and now she is living with them.

Beth and Charlotte are very close, they have a fetish which is tickling they love to tickle torture each other but they have neither tickled Danielle as when they were young they werent that close but since they are getting close to Dani now they think they might involve her in their tickle torture games.

Danielle knows about her sisters tickling fetish, she often hears her sisters laughing, begging and screaming when one of them is tickling the other and she is glad that they dont tickle her but she doesnt know if she is ticklish or not but hearing her sisters laughing makes her think that tickling must be a bad feeling.

Danielle is asleep in her bed, her older sisters come quietly into her room and take the covers off her bed, Danielle is wearing a PJ singlet top and shorts, Danielle is in a deep sleep and cant feel one of her sisters putting her arms above her head and tying her arms to the bedpost while the other sister ties Danielles ankles together.

Danielle sisters call out to Dani "Dani wake up" and Beth lightly tickles Dani's armpits and that makes Dani giggle and trys to put her arms down and she cant and realises that and starts waking up properly and looking around and sees she is tied to her bed and says "hey why am I tied to the bed?" Charlotte says "well we thought we would have abit of fun with you and see if your ticklish and its seems to be going good so far with our tickle fun hehe, dont worry you will get to tickle one of us and so your get to join in the tickling soon but first me and Beth will have abit of fun tickling you" Dani says "No please, I dont want to be tickled, please untie meHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Beth is tickling Dani's armpits again except faster this time and Charlotte starts tickling Dani's sides and stomach this is driving Danielle crazy, she didnt know she was that ticklish she starts laughing hysterically as her sisters are tickling her armpits, sides and stomach "HAHAHAHAHA STOOP HAHAHAHAHA I CANT TAAKE IT ANYMORE, PLEEASE IM BEGING YOU, STOOP HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAANOOO STOP PLEASE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA!" her sister Beth stops tickling Dani's armpits and starts tickling Dani's ribs and bellybutton while Charlotte goes to Dani's feet and starts raking her fingernails slowly up and down Dani's soles then she starts tickling the toes then she starts stroking fast on Dani's soles this drives dani insane with laughter, she cant take it anymore and hopes the torture stops soon.

The tickling is going on for 15 minutes, the girls stop tickling dani for 5 minutes then both girls tickle Dani's soles and toes by raking their nails slowly up and down Dani's soles and then doing it fast, then they tickle under toes all this tickling is driving Dani insane, they tickled her for another 15 minutes then gave her a ten minute break then carried on tickling her upperbody and feet for another 15 minutes.

Her sisters finally stopped and Beth said"well Dani your a good ticklee to have fun with and I didnt know you were that ticklish, well now I think it is your turn Charlotte to get tickled" Beth and Charlotte untied Dani, Dani was glad it was over her sister Beth says"Dani come and help me tie up Charlotte, its your turn to be the tickler this time" that made Dani happy that she gets to tickle her oldest sister back and she will get her sister good.

Im not very good at story writting and sentencing so im sorry if this is hard to read or not good but I thought I would give it a try.:happy:

Part 2 will come soon it will have a different title probably.
 
Well, you do have a good plot. this would be very nice as a short story if you re-did it and put in some filler between scenes. Other than that, you write very well.
 
Honestly, it wasn't that good, The grammer, the 'word' 'abit', the run ons, etc. etc.

It was good, but not great -_-
 
It's a nice short story. I understood the tale that you we're sharing. I liked it and I would like to see the story continue.

On the point of grammar and technical quality, yeah there's a few things to work on there. Don't let that keep you from writing. Use your story as practice for learning the finer details of the craft. You have the important part, the story. That's the key.

I'm Looking forward to part two. I have an idea. You're from Auckland. That's really cool. Why not give your story a bit of New Zealand feel to it. That would give your story a nice unique edge to it.

Thanks for sharing.
 
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