Inverse
TMF Expert
- Joined
- May 20, 2010
- Messages
- 456
- Points
- 0
Short Story Tickling!
Hey everyone. ^.^ Not sure this is the best place to put this thread, but I thought and thought about it and decided that this would be where it should go. Was thinking about maybe doing a thread where people post tickling pics, art, etc... and try to do a story on it.
It doesn't have to be super long, in fact the shorter the better. Just something to give every pic, every tickle art out there some context. 🙂
Now I thought of maybe doing it so that we could do it as a relay, where I do a picture, then link another picture so that another writer can fill it in. ^.^
But this is awfully stifling, even though I think it'd be fun. Instead go ahead and pick the tickling picture of your choosing and try to write something fun to make the picture even better!
Mods if you want to move this thread, feel free and I'll learn where this kind of stuff goes. 🙂 Here goes!
--
--
--
I had tried to get away as best I could. Really, I did! For a moment I thought I would escape the sentries that tried to prevent our escape, but I was too slow and too clumsy. I didn't want anyone to stop for me or they would just get caught too so I told them to run. Run as fast as they could and not stop! Already the sentry was upon me, and with strong arms it had grabbed my wrists and ankles and placed me on its wretched seat.
I knew what was coming, so I steeled myself as best I could but it was no real use. Hands shot out of the machine as it began to mercilessly tickle my ribs. My resolve was disappointing, the tickling was intense, it always was and I found myself spitting outward from my resistance into hard laughter.
There is something particularly demoralizing about breaking into laughter like this, though I could hardly be blamed. The sentries knew exactly how to tickle us, they were programmed to. The tickling at my ribs was only the beginning as it began to torment my underarms as well. I couldn't take it, I didn't want to. My armpits were too ticklish! I shrieked with laughter and cursed at it for its effectiveness.
My friends had probably escaped by now, I sure hope they did, because nobody deserves this kind of torture. Nobody should have to be tickled like this for days, and days. This sentry was wrecking havoc on me. The seat beneath my womanhood vibrated, and although its tickles didn't make me laugh, they sure brought me closer to a level of insanity I would soon be quite intimate with. I pleaded with this thing, begging it to stop! To stop tickling and tickling me. It just added more hands, this time my thighs, and it took all I could not to cry. Pleading with a robot, how absolutely pathetic of me.
Had I opened my eyes, I would have realized I was nearing the prison that we had dared escape. My punishment would be far more severe than this, and yet I already longed for some reprieve from even this tickle torture. Whatever was to come my way, I would have to accept with humility. I got myself put into tickle prison and this was my fate. They would add years to my sentence now. Even as I cried from this realization, it only found a way to make me scream with tears in my eyes. Mocking me for my sadness, it only added more fingers to my sensitive rib cage and I broke into hysterical laughter.
Oh, and I did laugh...the choice wasn't mine to make. I can be angry, or sad or even happy if I willed it. Laughing however was not my choice. It was theirs.
I would comply.
Hey everyone. ^.^ Not sure this is the best place to put this thread, but I thought and thought about it and decided that this would be where it should go. Was thinking about maybe doing a thread where people post tickling pics, art, etc... and try to do a story on it.
It doesn't have to be super long, in fact the shorter the better. Just something to give every pic, every tickle art out there some context. 🙂
Now I thought of maybe doing it so that we could do it as a relay, where I do a picture, then link another picture so that another writer can fill it in. ^.^
But this is awfully stifling, even though I think it'd be fun. Instead go ahead and pick the tickling picture of your choosing and try to write something fun to make the picture even better!
Mods if you want to move this thread, feel free and I'll learn where this kind of stuff goes. 🙂 Here goes!
--
--
--
I had tried to get away as best I could. Really, I did! For a moment I thought I would escape the sentries that tried to prevent our escape, but I was too slow and too clumsy. I didn't want anyone to stop for me or they would just get caught too so I told them to run. Run as fast as they could and not stop! Already the sentry was upon me, and with strong arms it had grabbed my wrists and ankles and placed me on its wretched seat.
I knew what was coming, so I steeled myself as best I could but it was no real use. Hands shot out of the machine as it began to mercilessly tickle my ribs. My resolve was disappointing, the tickling was intense, it always was and I found myself spitting outward from my resistance into hard laughter.
There is something particularly demoralizing about breaking into laughter like this, though I could hardly be blamed. The sentries knew exactly how to tickle us, they were programmed to. The tickling at my ribs was only the beginning as it began to torment my underarms as well. I couldn't take it, I didn't want to. My armpits were too ticklish! I shrieked with laughter and cursed at it for its effectiveness.
My friends had probably escaped by now, I sure hope they did, because nobody deserves this kind of torture. Nobody should have to be tickled like this for days, and days. This sentry was wrecking havoc on me. The seat beneath my womanhood vibrated, and although its tickles didn't make me laugh, they sure brought me closer to a level of insanity I would soon be quite intimate with. I pleaded with this thing, begging it to stop! To stop tickling and tickling me. It just added more hands, this time my thighs, and it took all I could not to cry. Pleading with a robot, how absolutely pathetic of me.
Had I opened my eyes, I would have realized I was nearing the prison that we had dared escape. My punishment would be far more severe than this, and yet I already longed for some reprieve from even this tickle torture. Whatever was to come my way, I would have to accept with humility. I got myself put into tickle prison and this was my fate. They would add years to my sentence now. Even as I cried from this realization, it only found a way to make me scream with tears in my eyes. Mocking me for my sadness, it only added more fingers to my sensitive rib cage and I broke into hysterical laughter.
Oh, and I did laugh...the choice wasn't mine to make. I can be angry, or sad or even happy if I willed it. Laughing however was not my choice. It was theirs.
I would comply.
Attachments
Last edited: