Spidey comic

[mpeyton]

I don't think I've posted this yet, but someone requested this story a while back and I jumped on it. Peter Parker's web shooter accidently went off trapping Mary Jane on the ceiling. Peter decides to take advantage of his wife's predicament and torture her for until the webbing dissolves.

 

[Sockstickler]

I really like this one. It's really cute, and I like the expressions on MJ's face. However, if I had to point out one flaw, it would be the position of the word bubble when Peter's tickling her foot. It covers up the action. Is that deliberate, or just where it ended up? Awesome comic otherwise though 😀

 

[His Divine Shadow]

Ah, to be Spidey. XD Cute comic, that it is. :happy:

 

[TKLVR181]

I love the playful mood of it. It's fun! But I couldn't read the words very well🙁 But anyway, I thought it was great!:>

 

[kut2k2]

Cute take-off. 🙂

... Peter Parker's web shooter accidently went off trapping Mary Jane on the ceiling....

I still can't believe that stupid movie had webbing coming out of his wrists! :dead: :sharp_tee :no:

 

[Dark_Rain]

This is really cute, I like it ^_^

 

[LonelyKimiko]

I like it 😀 . Nice job.

 

[mpeyton]

I really like this one. It's really cute, and I like the expressions on MJ's face. However, if I had to point out one flaw, it would be the position of the word bubble when Peter's tickling her foot. It covers up the action. Is that deliberate, or just where it ended up? Awesome comic otherwise though 😀

An accident on my part. I originally didn't intend to have any foot tickling there, but so many people were pesturing me about it so I finally caved in.

 

[Sailornapper1]

Cute take-off. 🙂


I still can't believe that stupid movie had webbing coming out of his wrists! :dead: :sharp_tee :no:

They borrowed that from the 2099 Spidey, he had the organic webshooters.

Though yeah this happened actually in the books, dunno the issue but it left off from the tickling. Ol Pete was trying out some new webbing and well MJ was his only target in the house.

 

[kut2k2]

They borrowed that from the 2099 Spidey, he had the organic webshooters.

Though yeah this happened actually in the books, dunno the issue but it left off from the tickling. Ol Pete was trying out some new webbing and well MJ was his only target in the house.

I assume this "2099 Spidey" is the result of bioengineering, which is radically different (some might even say 180º different) from the supposed natural mutation when Parker first got bitten. If you're going to have natural development of spinnerets, I think we can all agree that the wrists are among the last places on the body where they'd appear.

What was the point of making movie Parker a scientific whizkid if they were never going to put it to good use? They didn't bother to explain where not-rich Parker got that fancy costume, so why balk at the webshooters? Just a stupid trashing of one of the better elements of the comic.

 

[Sockstickler]

An accident on my part. I originally didn't intend to have any foot tickling there, but so many people were pesturing me about it so I finally caved in.

Ah ok. No worries then. It is a great comic 😀

 

[Sailornapper1]

Hard to say actually, It's been a very long time since they used the 2099 series. It's not Peter at all or even a relation to him if I recall right. I agree though would've liked to see the webshoots, heck even Ultimate Spidey has the web shooters but oh well still thought that was funny in the movie.

Just gotta say poor MJ, though it does make you wonder, did ol Pete try this stuff with Felicia Hardy at any time?

 

[Sockstickler]

I don't know why, but I've got a feeling Felicia might have been more responsive to that than MJ 😎