St. Vitus Dance (fff/m)

[Onlyfornow]

Thanks to those who read it in its heyday.

 

[Onlyfornow]

No comments?

 

[FeatherDaemon1]

No comments?

It's something you'll need to get used to. It's a quiet bunch here. But hey I thought it was a good read. /m isn't usually my thing, but your writing style is good with some very nice descriptive quality.

 

[Onlyfornow]

Thanks ^_^ I try to be as descriptive as possible. I hate it when stories are overly straightforward. Example:

He walked in. She knocked him out. She took off his clothes and tied him up. She tickled him.

^Now, granted, I've never seen something that straightforward, but you get the picture. lol.

 

[Master Chief]

This is nice. Well paced, and very descriptive. Just like a story should be.

 

[FeatherDaemon1]

Thanks ^_^ I try to be as descriptive as possible. I hate it when stories are overly straightforward. Example:

He walked in. She knocked him out. She took off his clothes and tied him up. She tickled him.

^Now, granted, I've never seen something that straightforward, but you get the picture. lol.

LOL. Yeah I understand that point. I've seen some that have been painfully simple. I'm not knocking them, hey, they're trying, but still...

I'm writing my story as my first real test run in creative writing. I've had a few aborted attempts, but I never stuck with it. I've always felt that I had the talent. Unfortunately, I get sidetracked. College was one thing, you had to get your papers in or else. Freestyle writing is actually harder. It's getting better though because I really am enjoying the telling of my current story and if I'm going to do it, it's going to be quality.

 

[Onlyfornow]

I'm glad that this story was enjoyed. I may not think it's my favorite, but it was probably the best written one I've done.